Dil Jo Na Keh Saka:Fan-Fic(Part 42,Pg 52) - Page 15

Posted: 17 years ago
Awesome job on the last part! I hope Prithvi stays away from the couple
Posted: 17 years ago
Part 26

K:Why Angad..Why you always say like this why?

Next Day,Today was Sunday so they were off from Hospital.Kripa took her breakfast and after finishing she head to her room.It was a boring day for her.Gayatri came to her room.

G:Beta tomorrow is you engagement and you haven't done any preparations..

K(Dry tone):Mom,i don't feel like doing it..please you do it for me..

G:C'mon get up and get ready...Go with Angad for shoppings..

K(rude tone):Mom i am not going anywhere with him..

G:Kripa!!!This is disgusting..how can you be so rude..

K:Sorry Mom But--

G:No Ifs and Buts..just go and get ready..Angad is waiting for you..

Gayatri comes out of her room when we see Angad standing out oh her room listening all of the things.

A(winks):Thanx Aunty

G:Its ok Beta..Enjoy Yourself..

Gayatri leaves from there while Angad waits for her.After some time,Kripa also comes out looking really beautiful in skin top and brown pant and unfortunately bumped into Angad.

K:Ouch!!

A:Hi!!

Kripa looks at him and just walks downstairs while Angad scratch his head and follows her.Kripa says her goodbyes to Gayatri and leaves while Angad also leaves.Kripa was walking ahead of him and Angad was just following.When Kripa reached Angad's red sports car,Kripa just stopped at her place and folded her hands.Angad came forward and open the door for her.Kripa just sat in the car while ANgad closed the door and smiles to him.He also sits and start driving.While driving he looks at her everytime.Kripa was getting irritated now.

K:Can't you just keep your eyes on the road..

A:Sorry!

Kripa didn't replied while Angad also kept driving keeping his eyes on the road way.After some time,the silence was eating Angad now so he broke the ice.

A:umm Music?

K:You stole This car?

A:No

K:is it yours?

A:Yes!!

K:then do anything what you want..

Angad then starts the Music.The song Dil Keh Raha Hai from movie Kyon Ki was going on.

Dil Keh Raha Hai Tujh Se Yun Rishta Jodh Lon
Teri Dhadkanon Ko Chu Lon Tera Jism Odh Lon

Kripa just switched off the Music.

A:What?

K:I don't like that song..

A:You said yourself that this is my car..

K:Then Stop the car..

A:Why?

K:Right now..stop the car..

A:Kripa..Sorry yaar i was joking..

K:I don't like jokers..

A:Kripa i was just joking..Ok here the mall came..

As the car stopped,Kripa stormed out of the car into the mall.Angad also followed her.Kripa was looking some dress from tomorrow when Angad came to her.

A:Kripa i am sorry..please forgive me..

K:Angad you always do this to hurt me..

A:Please Kripa forgive me..i'll not do anything to hurt you now..Please!!

K:Anga--

Just then a girl comes and hugs Angad.Kripa's mouth drop open.

Girl:Hi Darling..Its being ages since we met..

A:Ah..No..Kripa..She..

They both apart from each other.

K:What is this now..

Girl:Hey Darling who is she?

K:Angad..Please Enjoy with your so called Girl Friends i am leaving..Take care Enjoy You both..

A:Kripa wait..

Kripa leaves.

A:Got Ishita what are you doing here...you came on wrong time..

I:Why Darling..

A:DOn't say me darling please i am gonna marry now with that girl stop following me please now..

I:But i love you..

A:But i don't..

Saying that Angad follows to Kripa.

To be Continued.
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Sweetz Gurl
Posted: 17 years ago
uh oh more trouble for kripa and angad lol....cotninue sooon 😊
Posted: 17 years ago
aww both of last parts were so good! poor angad victin of Kripa's anger πŸ˜† .... continue soon πŸ‘
Posted: 17 years ago
Hey great job!!!
Continue soon!! πŸ˜›
Posted: 17 years ago
Part 27

Kripa was seeing some dresses when Angad comes running to her.

A:Kripa PLease forgive me..

K:Why..WHo was she?

A:Kripa..Woh..She was from my old girlfriend lists..

K:What..

A:Sorry...Kripa Please Please!!!!!

K:Angad i need some space..

A:Kripa if you need some space then join NASA baby..!!!1

K:ANgad shut up i am not joking..

A:SOrry..

K:Angad i hate that Sorry word..

A:Sorry..

K:Urghhhhhhh!!!!!!

Kripa just leaves to other section.

A:oopss..

He again follows her.

A:Don't you feel hungry..

K(sweetly):Angad i feel like punching you..

A:Ouch..That hurts..

K:But i didn't punched you..

A:But you thats word hurted me..

K:Uffffff..God Why you left him for me...

A:because sweety i like you..

K:You like me or love me..

A:its the same meaning..

K:no..like and love are two different things.....

A:Kripa..ok leave this..i am very hungry so lets leave..

K:No Angad..This is very important thing for me..

A:God Kripa..its not important to say it..the more important is to prove it..and i am proving it..

K:But--

A:C'mon now this dress is pretty..take it..

K:Ok..

Kripa takes the dress.They both shop while fighting.At evening,Angad drops her at her place.Next Day,It was their engagment party.Kripa was getting ready when Gayatri comes in with Mishti to take her down

G:Kripa are you ready?

K:Yes Mom almost..

G:C'mon..Angad is waiting..

K:Say him to wait some more time..It is not easy to get engage with Kripa Sharma..

M:Kripa..now come on we are getting late..

K:Ok..

Kripa stands up.SHe was looking really beautiful.She was wearing a baby pink dress with silver work on it.They takes Kripa down when Angad just glued his eyes on her.Now it was time to exchange rings.Angad slips the ring to Kripa's elegant finger and Kripa also slips the rings.EVeryone claps while Angad kisses on her cheek when her mouths drop open and a photographer takes a KoDak Picture.

To Be Continued..
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Sweetz Gurl
Posted: 17 years ago
aww wonderful part. ahahah KODAK moments. do continue soon πŸ‘
Posted: 17 years ago
ahahahaha cute part!!!cont soon
himani
Posted: 17 years ago
awww how cute....i can imagine this picture lol....continue soon saima....lol i missed talking to you today πŸ˜‰ hopefully tomorrow πŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 17 years ago
Awesome job on the last few parts! Angad is such a cutie! I love it how he tries to pacify Kripa 😳 πŸ˜†

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