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FateBeChanged IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 20 March 2006 at 6:14am | IP Logged
Hi fate...loved ur work Clap ...I normally don't go for fan-fics but dis didn't seem like one..esp in the way u began..2 me it was like one of those classic poetries which don't rhyme but have enough depth 2 move u... Embarrassed Clap
Simply amazing, excellent work....actually its more than dat but I don't have dat knack with words like u do to describe how much I loved it Embarrassed ...

I liked Lavanya's character Embarrassed ..I hope it got grey shades 2 it...... I especially liked dis line ".... was one those songs which became more famous than the singer" very true Clap

Please Continue asap Big smile

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Posted: 20 March 2006 at 6:23am | IP Logged
both the parts totally rock........ Clap

lavanya is a real mystery........waiting for the mystery to be unfold...... Embarrassed
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Posted: 20 March 2006 at 11:44am | IP Logged
for ppl who r speahless like me www.dictionary.com u wil find appropriate words here LOL first tory nowlavanya u really r making ur charcters more different frm each other
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Posted: 20 March 2006 at 11:44am | IP Logged
but den two both fics were different n unique n i olove em Big smile
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Posted: 20 March 2006 at 11:49am | IP Logged
thanx guys................i hope i cud write bengali half as well as english then i did not have to worry abt 22nds board eggjams.........i seriously need a second bengali tutor.........may be uv can teach me.........and i kinda dont care if he does not knoe bengali


thanz again and lavanya will get more outrageous........more dangerous.......... & more lovable...and about uv i cant guaranee but i can guarantee a good twist
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Posted: 21 March 2006 at 1:17am | IP Logged
good work fate keep it up!!
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Posted: 21 March 2006 at 2:55am | IP Logged
awesome fic fate! Clap Clap Clap seems like ashi's gonna hav a tough time with lavanya........
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Posted: 22 March 2006 at 8:27am | IP Logged




Hey prof…..
A tall quite handsome man turned around….her ran his hand through his graying hair….and smiled………
Aah…love…..hmmm u r drippin wet on the carpet dear……..go nd change and meet me in the library ok???????
Lavanya smiled,……..the ruthless look in her eyes was replaced by a softer gaze,…..i am ok….wat did u have to say????????
No first u change ..and then we talk…
Lavanya knew it Was useless talking to him…so she got up and left……….


Lavanya entered her room ..it was a state of the art room…….decked in the most costliest stuff…………..and there were about 7 girls all frantically doing something….
WAT THE F*** IS GOIN ON AROUND HERE????
Lavanya …..we were just deciding on wat u shud take to India……see tara thinks u shud take your dior make up case….but I think not….i mean we all knoe dior is so heavy …and India is so hot …..so u shud apply light make up..rite??
Lavanya…..how many leather coats shud I pack????
Love….shud I pack all ur shoes????????
Love…wat about ur black dress…
Love….
SSHUT UP…….
AARGH…..WAT THE HELL .WAIT
Lavanya fished out a list ……here just stick to this list..puhlease donot deter from this list….just pack whatever that is there is the list…….okay????
Anna…..
Wat love??
Ummm ..i am borrowin ur clothes…
U can borrow mine..
No borrow mine…….
Aargh GIRLS ANNA…..I WANT TO TAKE ANNAS CLOTHES OKAY???????????
Take it sweetheart…..and ya…don't forget we have meeting at 6:00…….ok???nd ya hurry up ..u have a hot date remember…
Anna smirked
U heard????????
The heiress gets into a fight and the news is not all over eton …is dat possible????
Pass me the cigarette,anna……….
Take it ur self coz I am not touching that filthy thing……..
Lavanya rolled her eyes reached out to take it......


Edited by fate - 22 March 2006 at 8:29am

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