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funky n crazy IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 11 August 2006 at 8:45am | IP Logged
ssssssooooooooooorrrrrrrrrryyyyyyyyyy...........im so late............but it is gr8 tia...pls continue soon!!!!!!!

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Posted: 20 August 2006 at 4:49am | IP Logged
            year 2006
where's the party tonite???
down the road
where's the party tonite?
on the dance floor....
      the music flooded the disc..tia and her angels grooved the music.....this was the most awesomest and the most happenin party of the year........everyone was havin a time of their lives....everyone except.........


ashi stood in the conner her head achin with the smoke and the music and the pain.....the pain of sadness and betrayal.....she tried to smile wen she met her frnds' eyes....but the smile felt too stiff....she turned around to leave ..thats wen she saw..her darling and her best frien walk in.....
love looked stunnin as usual in her short midnite blue dress....yet she loooked tired and withdrawn....yuvi looked at love....he knnew y she was soo silent but there was nothin he cud do.....he had come to the party just to shut everyones mouth up..to prove that he dint care but not he was regrettin it...maybe he shud have stayed away from the crowd.....everything now seemed so claustrophobic.....so how everything had changed....it was more of a war than a party for yuvi and love....the hostile glances and the stares....

yuvi caught ashis eyes for a second...and for a second the worls stopped...
ashi's eyes silently asked him ...y??did u do this??
yuvis eyes replied.....onli if u had trusted me...but u r just like the other...a betrayer..........

            year 2016

                   the langsdum ball
time had stood still yet again.......ashi knew she should turn away..that it looked stupid to stare..tat 10 years had passed..that she had grown up..that she did not love yuvi..or did she???was dat the reason y still she felt that her had just broken to bits....she cud not take the eyes of the couple dancin...lavanya rathore and yuvraj dev..or rather yuvraj and lavanya dev....ashi thot wistfully.....they looked great.....together...as added to herself.....it was all history..she had moved on 10 years b4 and she wud do that again...

wats it love??
nothin uv...
something is on ur mind...
no...uv..
yes love..
will u stop arguin wimmi????
not until u tell wats wrong...
umm...nothin..i think i know that girl..
which girl??uv asked lookin around
thta one...umm she is gone now....but the way she was lookin at us..it was as if..she was tellin us something..she looked kind of famaliar...
oh..love u must have seen her at some party...
ya....i must have..forget it..

but at the back of her mind love knew that that girl was not just some girl.....not someone she had seen at a party...the connection she felt ran deeper....it was as if she had known her..too well..once upon a time
       
rakhi_uv Goldie
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Posted: 20 August 2006 at 4:59am | IP Logged
brilliant Clap ....do cont soon...
Eloquent IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 20 August 2006 at 5:12am | IP Logged
gr8..fatey!!!

awesome...so..now..ur..jumpin..to..d..future Wink

well..i..wld..like..it..if..u..change..d..background..from
discos&parties..to..somethin..else Wink

otherwise..well..written
ArjunArohi4ever IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 20 August 2006 at 7:42am | IP Logged
AWESOME PART TIA.JUST LUVED IT.PLZ CONT FAST.

TITLI
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Posted: 20 August 2006 at 7:46am | IP Logged
great chapter how do u manage to do well every time pls comtinue soon Clap
srkm Senior Member
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Posted: 20 August 2006 at 10:07am | IP Logged
ohh gr8....shit im so curious...continue fast....i hv so many thoughts n ideas runnin...waitin 2 see whr u take it frm here fate....hurry plzz.

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Posted: 20 August 2006 at 9:42pm | IP Logged
hey tia cont fast.
titli

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