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sayanti_ashiuv IF-Rockerz

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awesome part tia Clap
plz cont asap.

Eloquent IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 04 August 2006 at 9:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by fate

                  strangers once more         &a mp;n bsp;         

                        year 2016

the duchess of mullineaux invites you to the langsdum ball

the ball was in full swing...the richest and the classiest people waltzed in the estate of mullineaux.....the great hall decorated in fineries looked spectacular..the ball was a success.....lady carberry smiled ... after months of preparation the event had finally taken place and so far without ne hassles....there was beauty,charm,money and wine.....and ofcourse scandles.....she looked lovingly at her son in law...the marquis of mullineux.....he looked ravishing ...handsome was to litle a compliment....his long hair was tied back in a red his black tuxedo and dark colourin he looked every bit of the rebel he was...with the air of insolence that surrounded him to the attitude of his arrogance...everything looked just...perfect?.....lady carberry smiled.....she was lucky to have him as a son in law...all the women of the ton flocked arround him...he treated them with respect....flirted with them or openly ignored them....he was unattainable....her smile was replaced by a frown....a gorgeous lady in blood red walked up to him whispered something into his ears and his eyes twinkled dangerously....lady carberry knew who she was....countess of michigan.....not that she didnot approve of her..she liked her..she had a spirit and fire which very few women possesed...but these two were already the talk of the ton....y were both of them so hell bent on ruinin their repution???wat lady carberry dint know was that the marquis and the countess was much above the common scandels..they had seen so much that gossip of the elite dint matter to them...they had seen enough of the ppl of the world...they had learnt young.....they had seen how whom they had once called frnds deserting them....they shared a relationship which no one understood nor did they want to explain.....

she wandered into the ball room...wat am i doin here???this is not me...wat am i doin here dressed in this ridiculous gown attendin this ridiculous event of ridiculous ppl who are lord and lordess onli in tiltles feedin their vanities and false proud regardin some stupid title which dint have ne meanin in this time....

wesha can we go????? the way u look lovely tonite in violet....the colour really suits u....quite exquisite....i know u hate this sort of things but...this is the bestest place where one can find awesome business prospects ...investors and get to meet the right ppl....come on now...

hey bhaggu.....the women in violet whispered!
srkm Senior Member

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Posted: 05 August 2006 at 7:15am | IP Logged
well firstly thk u for contunin...secondly amazing...the time factor is gud..past... present...n ya use those old english added d needed effect 2 d feel of the place...

plzzzzz continue soon!
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Posted: 05 August 2006 at 11:26pm | IP Logged
tia plsssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss cont soon.
coolniyu IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 06 August 2006 at 12:21am | IP Logged
tia u rock girl
i missed u Embarrassed
ab onlyn bhi nahi aati hai Ouch
waise gr8 part s'usual...this ones one of the more intresting parts yet Embarrassed .....btw...wesha..hey bhaggu..violet gown...ASHI?? ShockedShockedShocked.....omg now i jst have to read the next part Clap

and by the by frm whr did u kno so mch old world english Embarrassed
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tia ur fic is really wonderful Clap plz cont soon.

ashi912 Goldie

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its gud tia....continue soon....poor ashi widout uv...whos wid her newy.....n ay will b 2gether na tia...plz plz plz puhleezeeeee
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tia plsssssssssssssssssssssss cont soon.

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