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ritika_roxx Senior Member

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Posted: 21 May 2006 at 12:05am | IP Logged
tia!! wat can i say!! it is sooooo damn awesome!! i jus luved evry single bit of d previous chap. n dis chap. esp d conversation b/ween shy fry Dead n luv Embarrassed   LOL LOL LOL it was sooooooo awesome!!! i really luved it! update it regularly plzzzzzzz coz i cant gt enuf of it!

kmilw Groupbie

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Posted: 21 May 2006 at 1:25am | IP Logged
nice Embarrassed
ashi-coolest Senior Member

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Posted: 21 May 2006 at 2:02am | IP Logged
Oh no Tia Cry Cry Cry Yeh tumne kya kia Cry Cry Me feeling tooooooo bad for Ashi now. Anyway beautifully written as always Clap esp the part of Ashi's feelings. Plz continue soon.
rakhi_uv Goldie

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Posted: 21 May 2006 at 5:34am | IP Logged
awesome tia.....the most touchy part of the fic.......i wonder if yuvi is tht strong to do this to ashi????? bt i guess if ashi continues to ignore her feelings 4 him this wud happen sumday....she herself will b responsible to kill the love tht they im feeling bad 4 yuvi more than ashi after this part......only those three words tht he waited n waited to hear n finally wen she said it......he cudnt feel the same 4 was too u'v said in the introduction of ur fic..........

"imagine that the person u wanted more than anyone else… standin rite in front of u….and he or she is calling to u……and that prsn is telling u that he loves u……..more than everything and anything…..he is telling u all those words u dreamt only in the wildest and the most coveted dreams……wat wud u do???????????????run to him????????be with him….????????tell him that u love him too??????are u sure????????????ask ur self……wud u still love him?????wud u still want him that bad????????wud u run to him and forget about all ur other relations????????"

i never thot it wud actually happen with yuvi in ur fic wen i'd read it...
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Neetaldesai Goldie

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Posted: 21 May 2006 at 6:13am | IP Logged

ok fate
this was awesome Clap
specially the words of your part are soo good
they created the whole scene before me and i stood speechless
you are too good at this Wink
contine fast
cz13 Senior Member

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Posted: 21 May 2006 at 7:15am | IP Logged
i dunno wat 2 say......
words fail me, tia this fic is a work of a wonder
nd tht wonder r u.....
tis' just awesomeness turned into words

last prt of ashi n uv was sooo good
tht i cud imagine it rite in front of my eyes
emotions tht were written i guess cant b acted out
it was extraordinaire

cont soon plz
u found urself another fan
ME-MYSELF Senior Member

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Posted: 21 May 2006 at 12:53pm | IP Logged
Tia this is beyond comparison. It is too good for words so just know that this is good. I mean i loved the last 2 parts of YA.
I do not know for whom i should feel more sad, yuvi or ashi. I feel that ashi's reactions should be blamed more for this sad sad situation. She kept yuvi hanging for too long which was supposed to backfire sooner or later(personal experience speaking). So i guess it just did.
But the way you have dscribed their feelings, it is beyond words.
So thank you for giving all of us such a beautiful treat in the form of your fic in this period of crisis(YA track or rather the lack of it one should say). 
Thanks(again) a ton for this beauty.

Edited by ME-MYSELF - 21 May 2006 at 12:57pm

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