& down came d rain-fanfic part31page60 (Page 45)

srkm Senior Member

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Posted: 20 May 2006 at 1:20pm | IP Logged
hey i even love da song..who is it by...plz tell me..n ya da last line 'n inside piece by peice she fell apart' depicted ashi chrac really well...strong on da outside but weak heart broken!
continue soon

s_aangel Senior Member

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Posted: 20 May 2006 at 11:15pm | IP Logged
fate it was beautiful!! Clap Clap Clap cant say anythin more.......cos i think u deserve more than all the words we wud be an understatement 4 the fic.

but jus wonderin luk wht fate does na, at 1 pt yuvi jus waited 4 those 3 words frm ashi but she never did say jus within a span of few hrs she said tht but it never affected yuvi at all.

u r jus wonderful Embarrassed the emotions u bring out tia is somethin tht no body else can do.

really ashi did a mistake 4 which she'll have to pay a lot.

an yuvi.......i seriously dunno wht to say Embarrassed Embarrassed
he's nice thts it.
ritika_roxx Senior Member

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Posted: 21 May 2006 at 12:05am | IP Logged
tia!! wat can i say!! it is sooooo damn awesome!! i jus luved evry single bit of d previous chap. n dis chap. esp d conversation b/ween shy fry Dead n luv Embarrassed   LOL LOL LOL it was sooooooo awesome!!! i really luved it! update it regularly plzzzzzzz coz i cant gt enuf of it!
ashi-coolest Senior Member

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Posted: 21 May 2006 at 2:02am | IP Logged
Oh no Tia Cry Cry Cry Yeh tumne kya kia Cry Cry Me feeling tooooooo bad for Ashi now. Anyway beautifully written as always Clap esp the part of Ashi's feelings. Plz continue soon.
rakhi_uv Goldie

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Posted: 21 May 2006 at 5:34am | IP Logged
awesome tia.....the most touchy part of the fic.......i wonder if yuvi is tht strong to do this to ashi????? bt i guess if ashi continues to ignore her feelings 4 him this wud happen sumday....she herself will b responsible to kill the love tht they im feeling bad 4 yuvi more than ashi after this part......only those three words tht he waited n waited to hear n finally wen she said it......he cudnt feel the same 4 was too u'v said in the introduction of ur fic..........

"imagine that the person u wanted more than anyone else… standin rite in front of u….and he or she is calling to u……and that prsn is telling u that he loves u……..more than everything and anything…..he is telling u all those words u dreamt only in the wildest and the most coveted dreams……wat wud u do???????????????run to him????????be with him….????????tell him that u love him too??????are u sure????????????ask ur self……wud u still love him?????wud u still want him that bad????????wud u run to him and forget about all ur other relations????????"

i never thot it wud actually happen with yuvi in ur fic wen i'd read it...
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Neetaldesai Goldie

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Posted: 21 May 2006 at 6:13am | IP Logged

ok fate
this was awesome Clap
specially the words of your part are soo good
they created the whole scene before me and i stood speechless
you are too good at this Wink
contine fast
cz13 Senior Member

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Posted: 21 May 2006 at 7:15am | IP Logged
i dunno wat 2 say......
words fail me, tia this fic is a work of a wonder
nd tht wonder r u.....
tis' just awesomeness turned into words

last prt of ashi n uv was sooo good
tht i cud imagine it rite in front of my eyes
emotions tht were written i guess cant b acted out
it was extraordinaire

cont soon plz
u found urself another fan

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