& down came d rain-fanfic part31page60 (Page 33)

fate Goldie

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Posted: 17 April 2006 at 10:13am | IP Logged
firstly sindhu..........
sitaara and lavanya are totaaly different...
firstly lavanya is sane and tory is of her rockers....
lavanya is a arrogant and rude and tory is sugar sweet...
tory is perfect love no way is....
tory is weak but love is not
tory lives in her is more in love with the reality...

need more difference???
well i guess i shud continue it so that ppl dont confuse love with tory.....

any ways all of u thanx for ur comments good and bad.....
sindhu thanx too....and apple i missed ur comments....

fate Goldie

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Posted: 17 April 2006 at 12:39pm | IP Logged
I'm the kind of girl that girls don't like
I'm the kind that boys fantasize
I'm the kind that your momma and your daddy were afraid you'd turn out to be like
I may seem unapproachable but that's only to the boys who don't have the
Right a approach or ride that makes a girl like me wanna hop in and roll
People think it's intimidating when a girl is cool with her sexuality I'm a 180 to the stereotype girls like staying home and being innocent
I pick all my skirts to be a little too sexy
Just like all of my thoughts they always get a bit naughty
When I'm out with my girls I always play a bit bitchy
Can't change the way I am sexy naughty bitchy me..

Huh…o tias god wat was that???
Huh babes I don't know…chalo dekh te hai…

So pri meher and tia like many others ran out to c where the noise was commin from….

Ashi wandered out….hey bhaggu…..maurya mein mere siva aur kaun hai jiske paas itna guts hai iss gana ko full volume me chalena ka aur who bhi class hours ke samay…

The test tube fell from ranvirs hand … yeh kaisi aawaazhai???
I dont knoe..par I think we shud check it out…shy replied …
The teacher also horrified with the song and its lyrics went out….

As they reached the corridor…ranvir caught the sight of tia …the looked at each other and turned away perhaps to hide the pain in their eyes or maybe the red BMW that stood in the corridor was more intrestin than each other….

Yuvi swore under his breath for he knew to well who the car belonged to and the only girl in the world probably to carry out such a stunt….

Ashi admired the awesome was the one she had always wanted ….and she was damn curious to know who the driver was…for she had an intuition that the driver wud be more intrestin than the car and the song put together…

The car door slowly opened and out came a shapely pair of legs which was in knee length black leather boots…
Then slowly a girl emerged out…she wore a 6 inches white skirt..with a black halter top…her long hair which was about waist length was tied in pony tail on top of her head kind of like pebble flinstones hair style…..she slowly removed her shades…..and put it on top of her head…closed her eyes and opened them again slowly….then lowered her long eye lashes …she closed the door with her leg … …

Hey bhaggu….aur ek bimbo???yeh mere saath hi kyun hota hai???
O h tias god…pri pinch me..yeh toh…who…
Banna …yeh kaun hai????
Yuvi just smiled…..this was one entrance people at maurya wud talk abt for ages ..he knew that…
Finally miss lavanya rathore had arrived at maurya…..

Edited by fate - 17 April 2006 at 12:41pm
fate Goldie

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Posted: 17 April 2006 at 12:49pm | IP Logged
hope this part is ok Confused

it ll get more intrestin i promise...

ps--- snb is one of my fave song and i think describes love perfectly
apple14 Goldie

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Posted: 17 April 2006 at 1:07pm | IP Logged
God....what an entry...... I'm just worried....poor Ashi & Yuvi....they already have a lot of animosity between them....and now this lavanya will drag them further apart.... Cry

But wht was the first part about? Was it the song???
devilangel IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 17 April 2006 at 1:47pm | IP Logged
its as good as usual.. loved the part soo much
nigam_radhika Goldie

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Posted: 17 April 2006 at 2:22pm | IP Logged
wow tia...its so awesum...cont asap Big smile
2kool Senior Member

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Posted: 17 April 2006 at 11:32pm | IP Logged
its awesum
and dat was 1 grand entry
veonal IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 18 April 2006 at 12:36am | IP Logged
finally u bought tia nd ranveer in yr fan fic Tongue btw is dis lavanya after ranny or uv Wink

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