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fate Goldie
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So miss lavanya rathore u don't stay in mumbai…. Do u ???
Nopes I stay in eton,London….and I am stuck in this inferno called India…away from paradiso….
Why do u hate India so much???
Lavanya stopped suddenly…she looked at uv for a long time and then slowly said…her voice choked with emotions…I don't hate India uv…I respect Indians..infact I can bet on this dat I knoe just as much as u do abt Indian history if not more..i love India..but yuvraj home is where the heart is..my heart is in eton….and everyone feels homesick..call me a fanatic…yes I one may be but eton is my idenity…and my frnds r my family…and here I am away from them…every moment I spend here I cant help but wonder if every one is all rite there..i mean I hope no one is sick….i hope vic does not fall into any trouble and anna o god I hop she doesnot trust someone who ll hurt her…and..suddenly love stopped..she giggled nd looked at uv…. U shud have stopped me I was borin u….
Yuvi pushed a lock of his wet hair back ….hmmm u dint bore me..infact wat u said really touched me…btw all my frnds call me yuvi…u can however call me sweetheart,darling,honey yuvi added with a wink…..
Lavanya smirked….i think for the moment I ll stick to uv…
U broke my heart….uv said feigning a heartbreak……..
My frnds call me love…
Love..hmm ..i think I am in love with u ..
Lavanya laughed…hmm… nice it wud have original too if I had not that heard that a zillion times….
Hmm..tell me some thing were u born arrogant….or is it a developed talent of yours???
Arrogant???who me???? I am exetremely humble and I am so proud of that fact…
So mr yuvi do u just attend borin parties or do u do something else to???
Well….i am a student at maurya college..dats one of the most elite college of mumbai…and I am the president of the student council….
President..impressive..tell me was flirtin an imp quality of being a president???
Not really…but it helps..a lot…uv added smiling
Hmmmm……hey waut a second..did u say..maurya college…
Ahan..y??
Holy satan……I am goin to join that college too…
Uv beamed…c I knew that we were soulmates and made for each other….
Absolutely right ….we r Romeo Juliet reincarnated….neways that's my car..i ll go now…
Lavanya opened her purse and took out her car keys…
U SMOKE????
Love smirked..nopes I use the cigarettes to lite up gasoline….btw do u know that its ungentlemanly ….????
Miss..u r no lady..
Well behaved women rarely make history..
So u want to make history…
No uv I want to make the future…..
Uv smiled…..and looked at lavanya with admiration…..he was taken aback at wat he saw..for the playful look in loves eyes was replaced by a fire of a fierce ambition…
Uv bent and kissed loves hand gently..good bye see u tomorrow…
As lavanya walked away….uv softly whispered…palat..agar yein palati then she likes me..palat..
Y shud I turn??? Love thot I never turn back..i did not even turn bck and look at eton ..then y shud I turn back???? Wats rong with me??? I guess I had to much to drink…
She sat in the car and stunned she stared at her side view mirror….for their stood in front of her …..in the reflection stood uv..it was as if her mirror as telling her that in her future uv wud play a very important role…smiling she raised her hand to touch uv s image but as she was about to touch it….uv walke away…she drew her hands away…..it was as if some one was telling her that uv wud never be hers….
Uv walked away but he turned back to see her …but the moment he turned the car sped away..uv dint know y but that moment his heart broke…pin chked his throat..it was an omen….



Edited by fate - 13 April 2006 at 11:00am

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firstly thanx all those ppl who wrote all those awesome stuff for me...esp mads(my sweetest and bestest friend on if),srkm..really loved wat u said....sry dont know ur name...and everyone else..i am not disapearin netime soon..
and ya....sindhu i think our thots move in the same way...i leave it to dat...uv love..hmmmm
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Posted: 13 April 2006 at 11:06am | IP Logged
veryy well ritten...esp dat part abt eton....
hmm..y do i get the feeling dat sum of loves views are actually ur views...i mean xpressing ur feelins thru love...
coz both of u r of d same wild type...weird but still likeable
fate Goldie
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Posted: 13 April 2006 at 11:19am | IP Logged
weird.....wild....well sindhu i thot i cud hear some better adjectives...likeable??????
make those lovable awesome full on rockin mind blowin etc etc...
just kiddin
well lavanya and me r quite similar....and many of our views do match..we even like the same guy Wink
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Posted: 13 April 2006 at 12:23pm | IP Logged
its just awesome..... and yea even tho i dont know you.. it seems as if lavanya were you
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Posted: 13 April 2006 at 1:28pm | IP Logged
yes fate (tia) u seem similar to luv becoz i beleive tht wht u write always reflects ur league of thoughts...n ya u created a new character n its bond to be similar 2 u...

gr8 again...well ill only say...i like the way ur every part is as gud as the previous one...hard to decide which is the best...or shall we say its yet to come!!

waitin anxious!!
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Posted: 13 April 2006 at 11:51pm | IP Logged
WOW dats all i cn say cz m outta wrds Embarrassed
nxt prt asapp Embarrassed
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Posted: 14 April 2006 at 1:46am | IP Logged

Originally posted by fate

firstly thanx all those ppl who wrote all those awesome stuff for me...esp mads(my sweetest and bestest friend on if),srkm..really loved wat u said....sry dont know ur name...and everyone else..i am not disapearin netime soon..
and ya....sindhu i think our thots move in the same way...i leave it to dat...uv love..hmmmm

Awwwwww........u dont need to thank me sweety!!!!Big smile Coz I wrote wat's the truth!!!!

Neways....as usual...this part is awesome!!!!Clap Way to go!!!! And I think I'm loveing lavanya more n more....and I loved the way u wrote their conversations too.......really cute....EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed Somewat like yuvi n ashi......

Gr8....and continue soon......Big smile

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