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Posted: 17 years ago
ummm uv..excuse me once..
yuvi looked down concerned at love's face....
wat happened sweets??
nothin i am not feelin too well...i think i ll just go and sit for sometime....
u look pale...come on i ll come with u ...
no u stay here...i ll be fine..i ll just sit for sometime..
r u sure??/
completely/....

love walked thru the crowd and reached the valet room...
she went inside and lowered herself in the sofa...she had never felt so ill in her entire life....she felt naseous and dizzy....her back hurted....
she closed her eyes and leant back....
after sometime she opened her eyes....she fel a lot better ..as she was gettin up to leave ...she came face to face with a woman in violet....the women who looked hauntingly famaliar to her...
then in a split second she knew who she was....
anvesha ray bannerjee...or is it sisodia or maybe kapoor or sahai now?????
ashi shivered at the contempt in love's voice....a part of her a hoped that love wud forget her....it was 10 years later yet the hurt was still there.....
lavnya...how r u .......??????
i am fine..and wat the hell r u doin here??
its an open party..i was invited.....
were u ??i dont remember seein ur name in the guest list or have u changed ur name now??wih ur looks..??
i canme here with a frnd...love y r u behavin like this??we have all grown up now...wats wrong with u ??
a lil advice from my side...stay away from the ton...u dont belong here...run back to ur sisodia ok??
love??wats wrong with u ??? y r u diggin up stories that too which r 10 years old...u r just as bitter that i thot u were...spoilt and stupid
watever.......i am just tellin all this for ur own good...
lavnya sighed and continued...
u hurt uv a lot ..... i dont want u to hurt him again....besides i know y u r here....
lavnya's eyes stung with hot tears....she was feelin dizzy and irritated and angry and ....
suddenly love felt her world givin away.... then all lavanya saw was darkness.....
Posted: 17 years ago
i knoe this is not a great part..but this is an imp part....if the story is gettin borin do tell me pplease!!!!!!!!!
Posted: 17 years ago
oh Gawd,

Tia, dis is so awesome 👏

loved it 😳 😳

continue soon

Divz
Posted: 17 years ago
awesomeee part tia 👏
plz cont asap.
Posted: 17 years ago
nd its not boring at all,k??never think so 😭 u r going gr8 😳plz cont asap.
Posted: 17 years ago
Definitely the part is not boring..........its tooooooo good
Posted: 17 years ago
rocking part tia 👏 plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon.

titli
Posted: 17 years ago
Can't say I like love 😉 😉 but surely love the way you have written 👏 Not boring at all 😳 Plz continue soon 😃
Posted: 17 years ago
hey pal its gr8!! but try writin bigger parts so tht we njoy it more... 👏 👏 👏

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