& down came d rain-fanfic part31page60 - Page 31

ok i jst red a lotta parts 2gtr n i jst luved each n evry part seriously 😳
post d nxt part asap 😃 😃 😃

ps : i luv snb ... n i jst realised hw perfect d song is 4 luv ;))

Edited by saff - 17 years ago

Hey fate......it was brilliant! I love love! 😉 d way she asked out yuvi! 😆 w8ing to her n ashi's face-off 😉 continue fasttttt 😛

whoa!!
uv n luv 2gether

i9 m just waiting 2 c where this is actually going
u r a good suspense writer 😃

too good fate👏👏👏.......now my only request plz continue soon re.....and plz if possible let the next part have ashi in it too na 😳

hey tia no i like to call you fate 😊
ssoooo

hey fate
you are awesome 😳
i loved this part soo much 👏
you showed the conversation so obviously and so creatively 😊
continue soon....

hey wow fate!!!!!!!! it's awesome... i can't wait for ashi and luv's interaction... plz cont soon... me waitin.....

wat a fab epi as usual tia!!! it is sooo damn awesome! i jus luv love. she is soooo awesome even tho she is arrogant. plzzzz continue quickly

👏 nice part....bt honestly im missing ashi a lott in ur fic.....hope to see her soon.....me waiting 4 ashi's reaction on having a new roomie n tht too a person like love 😉 bt wat i no is tht im goin to see a j ashi whom im never goin to b able to see in the show 😃

plzz cont soon 😊

its gr8 tia seriously!!!! fab!!!!!!!!keep it goin!

Look who is here…
Yuvi stopped ..
Ah..psycho..wondered where u disappeared after u tried to kill a new student??
Kill??huh…whatever??where is she btw??ur pet Barbie doll…??
Somewhere u definetly wudnot want her to b..uv mumbeled..
Wat??
Nothing…
Ok…come to the shed..we have a remix meetin….
As they walked along the corridors of maurya yuvi kept stealing glances at ashi…even though he had now known her for almost 2 years…yet he cud never get enuff of her…he admired her for the strength she had and knew he lacked that..he loved her so much…dat it was difficult for him to move on…he flirted with shy but his mind was always on ashi…it was almost impossible for him to go thru a day without seein hrer now it was even tuffer coz she was in arts and he was stuck in science and then she was so into tennis that he hardly saw her…and that stupid sidhanth ..with his smart moves and tennis serves he had won over ashi…how he wished he was good at tennis but..all he cud offer ashi was his music…but ashi dint want that nemore……how it hurt to c her with someone else..he thot …..he tried so hard to forget her but it was near impossible…..
Wat r u starin at??
Ashi's voice shook him…nothing..uv quietly replied…
They had reached the shed….tia and ranvir still had not arrived…
Ashi went up to the key board and aimlessly hit few notes…he smiles she was so much like a child yet so matured at times…
An idea clicked in uv's head…..
Wat if ashi was also playin the same game as him…wat if he still loved him but….was playin around with that moron tryin to make him jealous??
He picked up his guitar and played an old yet famaliar tune…a tune he had once played for her wen she was low…
As he started the playin ashi jerked her head up…the feeling of a almost forgotten love..joy washed over her ..then a latent pain was renewed….a pain..of betrayal..ashi's eyes stung with tears which she quickly wiped away…
Ashi..
Kya uv??
Nothing..do u remember this tune..
Ya….wat r u tryin to get at?
Yuvi turned ashi towards him..
Ashi y r u tryin to hide ur feeling from me??
U know nothing abt the way I feel ..and uv let me go
No…I am not letting u go now….without me finishin wat to say..
Ashi stood quietly she did not know wat to say..she wanted to say I love u but….
Ashi u r really light up my world….i love u a lot….perhaps more than I love my self….lets get back together..i wont hurt u…we ll take it slow if u want…I ll do whatever u want..i wont evn try to kiss u ….just one more chance….i love u so much…u cant imagine..ashi come back to me…we ll be happy…there ll be n such stupid ego battles ….ashi??..i love u

I am sry uv….
Wat do u mean by sry.?? Don't u love me???don't u care??
Uv I care abt u…..but as a frnd..ashi shut her eyes ..hey bhaggu…y is it so difficult to say these words..y cant I say it on his face..y does it hurt? Am I lyin to myself
Ashi look at me and say u don't love me…dat u don't want to be with me…
I am sorry..
The three words…it hrt her more than walkin on a thousand broken pieces of glass….
U r lyin ashi…
She cunot take it nemore………
Yuvi….be a man…stop actin like a sissy….grow up…I don't love u….period…deal with it…stop beggin me like some loser…u r such a wimp….u r so…ashi stopped ..seein yuvi's expression…
Yuvi I am sorry its just that….y cant v be just frnds..
Yuvi nodded…his eyes were stone-cold…
I am sorry too ashi….for ever lovin u …u r so not worth it…good bye…
Ashi watched yuvi leave..and his words rang in her ears …"I am sorry too for ever loving u"


Edited by fate - 17 years ago