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FanFiction Woh rehne Wali chaul ki(KYPH) (Page 3)

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Posted: 16 March 2006 at 9:29am | IP Logged
continue soon its great Big smile

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Posted: 16 March 2006 at 9:44am | IP Logged
ok guys this one is going to be long since i have a lot of time on my hand Big smile

kripa on seeing saloni is totally shocked.

kripa: Sa..lo...n.i

Saloni: han mein hi hoon kun mujhe yahan dekh kar harani ho rahi hai. Waise ja ka rahi thi tum.

Kripa: aaa...

Saloni: Pata hai mujhe ke tum tumhare us bhikari Ashiq se milne ja rahi ho LOL

Kripa: nnaaa..hi mein to srif umm... market jaa rahi thi

Saloni: Market aur itni rat ko. ya right.

JUST THEN WE HEAR brOOm FROM A MOTOR CYCLE LOOKS LIKE THE BHIKARI ASHIQ IS HEAR Big smile
ON HEARING ALL THESE SOUNDS THE REST OF THE FAMILY MEMBERS COME OUT AND SALONI BECOMES DISTRACTED. KRIPA MOCKA DEKH KAR RUNS TOWARDS THE GATE. Tongue

ON THE WAY SHE TRIPS ON HER LANGHA Confused WE SEE HER FALLING DOWN IN SLOW MOTION, JUST THEN OUR HERO COMES AND GRABS HER. BOTH OF THEM RUN OFF IN THE BIKE AND THE SCENE ENDS.

NEXT SCENE WE SEE ANGAD AND KRIPA ON THE BIKE

K: angad where are we going

A: well not to the Kali mandir that's for sure, since ur di and ur family will probablly go there to look for u.

K: ya nice thinking (looking depressed)

A: kya baat hai mera shand itna kuyn udas hai

K: (smiles a little) nahi it's just that i never thought that i would have to marry without my family. I always wanted a big weading with everyone there.

A: ya that is true that is what i always wanted too,lekin ye mumkin nahi hai.

K: Tumne tumhare ghar walo ko kya bola

A:Yehi ke mein mere dost ke ghar jaa raha hoo. Man are they going to be shocked when they see what dost i brought along with me.

Just then the mandir arrives it is the devi maa ka mandir. Angad and Kripa go and ask the pundit to say mantra and get them married. With each phera both lovers promise to keep the other happy and always be with them. Embarrassed

our scene ends

Ill be posting the next part in a little while    




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Posted: 16 March 2006 at 10:07am | IP Logged
Ok guys our rich heroin and bekhari hero Tongue are successfully married now, just then Kripa's dad shows up!!!

Dad: how could u do this to us kripa. Cry U left us for a ajnabi that u knew for barely 2 days, ajse hamara koi rishta nahi hai, tum mere liye mar gai ho

Kripa: nahi papa mein angad se boht pyar karti hoo aur uske bina nahi jii sakti lekin mujhe apke pyar ke bhi zarorat hai Cry

Dad: par to tumhe ek hi ka mil sakta hai ya mera ya iska (pointing at angad) Cry

kripa breaks down and her dad leaves abruptly without saying another word. Dead Cry

Angad: kripa mat roo yeh to hona hi ta, Mere ghar wale bohat ache hai wo tumhe apna lein ge. We both will fight this together dont worry.

Kripa:i love u so much Angad tumare liye mein sari duniya ko chor sakti hoon. ((awww)) Embarrassed

Angad: Kripa itni raat ko ghar jana thik nahi, ajj hum raat kahin aur bitayenge Big smile Embarrassed

Kripa: nods her head slightly

Angad and Kripa hand in hand leave the mandir together Tongue



Stay tuned in to know where angad and Kripa spend their night any guesses??? LOL
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Posted: 16 March 2006 at 10:13am | IP Logged
Thanks guys for all the encouragement it really makes me want to write more and more Tongue
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Posted: 16 March 2006 at 10:42am | IP Logged
amazing ff
cont soon
cant wait to read more
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Posted: 16 March 2006 at 1:07pm | IP Logged
ok guys the next fan fiction comin soon
can u guys tell me which language u want me to write in? hindi or english?

Edited by munizaaa - 16 March 2006 at 1:08pm

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