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Hum aapke hain kaun-ff 4 Arjun-Bhoomi (Page 2)

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Posted: 18 March 2006 at 11:55am | IP Logged
PART-3....the ph call informs that Raj Siddarth;arjun's
                          dad is
                                                      admitted in the hospital due 2
                          the suicide attempt.they
                                                      all go 2 the hospital.luckily
                          he was saved.aArjun goes
                                                      in search of his friend 4
                          money 2 pay the hospital
                                                      bill.he fails in that & comes
                          back 2 the hospital with a
                                                      tired face.he tells his mom
                          shakundala:mamma,i did'nt see my
                                                      friend 2 ask 4 money? S
                          smiles:who is that
                                                      friend ?is it bhoomika?    A was
                          shocked:how do u no bhoomika? S:she paid the bill.
                          A cud'nt believe
                                                      :what?    he goes 2 his dad's
                          room.there the cheerful
                                                      B was chatting with his
                          dad. after talking 2
                                                      her,Siddarth was relieved. S:u'r
                          friend cracks
                                                      jokes.after a long gap,i
                          laughed with full heart. A
                                                      looks at B seriously. she
                          thinks:arjun may not
                                                      like my presense.
                          she:ok,then..i'm going...but siddarth
                                                      uncle,we shud face our life
                          easily.due 2 sum stupid
                                                      financial problems,we shud not
                          throw away our
                                                      life.understand? S:yes
                          beti,i'll not repeat this
                                                      blunder. B goes with a
                          smiling face. she winks at A without others'
                          knowledge.he was embarassed.
                                                      later he meets her on the
                          way....B:how is ur dad?
                                                      A:he is ok..but plz don't
                          pay money again,i'll giv
                                                      the money which we've 2 giv u.
                          B:then giv now.
                                                      A got upset. B:why u r
                          not saying anything?i
                                                      no that u hav no money.u can't
                          giv it in the recent
                                                      time. A put his head down.
                          B:u don't hav 2
                                                      feel bad.remember when i used
                          2 irritate a lot,u used 2
                                                      advise me not 2 hav headweight
                          just bcoz i've money.u
                                                      hav told me that money will
                          cum & go...but education
                                                      will remain with us till the
                          end.so u study arjun.after
                                                      scoring good marks,u wil get a
                          job.then u giv me the
                                                      money.i don't care if u giv
                          the money b4 that also. A smiles. he goes.when B
                          turns back she cud
                                                      see the funny sir.ravindar who
                          got when he questioned
                                                      about her gujarathi style of
                          dressing.he stares at
                                                      her. she thinks:why is he
                          looking at me like
                                                      this?usually he is not that
                          serious..she felt
                                                      strange.unexpectedly he laughs
                          in a funny way:finally u
                                                      fell in luv? B was
                          wondered. ravindar:nice
                                                      selection,arjun is a nice guy.
                          B smiles. he:he
                                                      will change u into a
                          disciplined girl. B becomes
                                                      shy.      
                                                         

jasminerahul IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 19 March 2006 at 12:23pm | IP Logged
PART-4...2 ask 4 money,arjun goes 2 a rich man's
                                                      house.there he was shocked 2
                          see Bhoomika as a servant.
                                                      when B goes out A asks
                          her:so u were wearing a
                                                      mask of a rich girl? B:i
                          did'nt.bcoz i don't hav
                                                      false prestige like u.i'm a
                          optimist.every1 in the
                                                      college knows that i'm not
                          rich.   A becomes
                                                      embarrased. she:the diff
                          dresses i put & the diff
                                                      curries i bring r given by the
                          ladies of the houses
                                                      where i go 4 work.i bought my
                          bike with my own money.i'm
                                                      prowd of that. A:then how
                          do u get time 2 study?
                                                      B gives her walk man.he
                          puts it.he was surprised 2
                                                      hear the lecture of the
                          lectures of the college. both of
                                                      them smile. A:i really
                          admire u bhoomika,i've 2 learn
                                                      a lot from u. she smiles. when
                          she starts walking
                                                      4ward,A calls her:college
                          life is going 2 get
                                                      over.after that we hav 2 meet
                          no? B:yes...sure...u
                                                      hav 2 giv me money no...they
                          laugh. A:let me ask u
                                                      1 thing.u r having financial
                          problems.then also ,why did
                                                      u spend money 4 me?   B
                          did'nt no what 2 say.
                                                      A:hum aapke hain kaun? she
                          simply smiles:how cum
                                                      i no? she goes away with a
                          smiling face. A smiles.
                                                      then cumes a new character 2
                          the college.B gets
                                                      scared & she tries 2 hide
                          herself from him.who is he?
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Posted: 19 March 2006 at 2:56pm | IP Logged
It's great! Clap Clap
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Posted: 20 March 2006 at 1:16am | IP Logged
Part-5......the man who scares Bhoomika is none other than
                                                      Yuvraj.he searches 4 B
                          & he fails in that &
                                                      goes.B was shivering & was
                          wet. she hides hersef in
                                                      arjun's empty class.Arjun
                          cumes & catches her from the
                                                      back.thinking that its
                          yuvraj,she screams.Arjun was
                                                      shocked:bhoomi,what
                          happened?why r u screaming? B
                                                      was relieved seeing A.she
                          weeps:arjun..she falls
                                                      into his arms.just 4 a moment
                          both of them 4get
                                                      themselves. they become
                          concious & they feel guilty.both
                                                      of them feel difficult 2 look
                          at each other.finally
                                                      A gets fed up of this
                          situation & talks 2 her:why r
                                                      u looking so dull
                          bhoomi?usually u r so cheerful.1st
                                                      time u r seen dull.what makes
                          u upset? B:i saw a
                                                      terrible figure.he came 2 our
                          college in search of me.he
                                                      won't do anything here,bcoz he
                          pretends 2 be decent b4
                                                      others.but i dared 2 see him.
                          A:who is he?
                                                      B:yuvraj   A:who is he?
                          B:my only
                                                      brotherinlaw. she tells him
                          the story.Manaswi is her
                                                      luvly sister.they r like
                          friends. M falls in luv
                                                      with Y,a middle class
                          guy.they were gr8 luvers,who
                                                      can't liv without each
                          other.they get married.Y
                                                      becomes B's dearest
                          jeeju.due 2 debt B loses
                                                      her house ,she & her mom goes
                          2 stay with M.her
                                                      motherinlaw was terrible who
                          always gossips about
                                                      M.M gives b'th 2
                          a child.slowly slowly Y
                                                      loses his interest in M
                          listening 2 his mom's
                                                      words.he started luving B.
                          B cries :now he is
                                                      after me arjun.my poor
                          didi...she nos that.i don't want
                                                      2 see her cry.so i go 2 my
                          friend's house during
                                                      holidays.but Y used 2 cum
                          there & make
                                                      problems..Shefali used 2 help me
                          .but now she hates me.i
                                                      don't no where 2 stay.i'm
                          scared 2 go 2 my house. i thot
                                                      of staying in a hostel.but ppl
                          start gossiping. Arjun-bhoomi go out.B was shocked 2
                          see yuvraj there
                                                      b4 them. Y:who is this guy?
                          B:my friend.
                                                      Y:simply a friend?or...B:thats
                          none of ur
                                                      business. Y:ur voice is cuming
                          up.may be the support
                                                      given by this guy. A:yes,i
                          support her 4 standing
                                                      against devils. Y becomes
                          angry:what did u say? he
                                                      beats A.A beats him
                          back.in that mood Yuvraj
                                                      tries 2 beat bhoomi..but Arjun
                          cumes:don't touch her if
                                                      so,i'll not think twice 2
                          finish u. Y:now i'm
                                                      going,but B can't escape
                          from me. he goes. B's
                                                      eyes got filled up with tears.
                          A:don't worry,he
                                                      won't desturb u again. B:bcoz
                          of me,u had 2 take
                                                      pain from him.he beat u
                          heavily. A:its ok..its not
                                                      a pain.it was a pleasure 2 be
                          adventorous like a hero 4
                                                      u. B smiles. A:bhoomi,can i
                          save u? B
                                                      :how? A:i can't do anything
                          now.bcoz i don't hav
                                                      anything.when i get a
                          job....if i call u ,will u cum
                                                      with me? B was shocked:due
                          2 sympathy,plz don't
                                                      take such big decision. A:its
                          not bcoz of
                                                      sympathy.when u r there with
                          me...i've relief...a kind
                                                      of feeling which can't be
                          explained.u r my
                                                      strenght...bhoomi...i'm
                          serious...really i luv u
                                                      ...B sMILes.she catches
                          A's hands.they dream
                                                      performing 2 the song
                          hum....hum tum.....
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Posted: 20 March 2006 at 1:36am | IP Logged
thanx a lot 4 sharing Smile its really gud Wink pls contd Big smile
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Posted: 20 March 2006 at 2:05am | IP Logged
wow...jasmine.....brilliant and cute ff..... Clap
i really liked the part where arjun was bracing bhoomi when yuv was after her.... Embarrassed Wink ...keep it up hunny...Clap
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Posted: 20 March 2006 at 4:59am | IP Logged

Originally posted by Shirley

wow...jasmine.....brilliant and cute ff..... Clap
i really liked the part where arjun was bracing bhoomi when yuv was after her.... Embarrassed Wink ...keep it up hunny...Clap

agree wid uSmile

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Posted: 20 March 2006 at 5:44am | IP Logged
lovely yaar.... Clap n i specially like the way u write.... u know bit here n bit there... a & b look real cute together here too... but manasvi with yuv.... Angry Angry Angry

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