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Hum aapke hain kaun-ff 4 Arjun-Bhoomi

jasminerahul IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 15 March 2006 at 11:06am | IP Logged
part-1...Arjun,Bhoomika,shefali study in
                                                                  ST.Peter's college.A
                               reserved,good at
                                                                  studies.very handsum too.B
                               is a
                               cheerful, naughty girl.she is
                                                                  very optimistic.S,the
                               rich,fashionable girl is her
                                                                  friend.she wants her luver
                               be a dashing guy...who makes
                                                                  her happy with
                               she was sure that A wud
                                                                  make her happy.tho she is
                               after him,he does'nt mind
                                                         S is sad.B
                               decides 2 make Ks 2 fallin
                                                                  luv with S.they all
                               4 excersion. during the
                                                                  excursion,infront of every1
                               she teases A-S as
                                                                  luvers.S was shy &
                               happy.A becomes angry & he
                                                                  complains it 2 the
                               principal Sr.Rose. Sr was
                                                                  angry at bhoomi-shefali. Sr:i
                               heard that u both always bunk
                                                                  class. S:no sr,i was
                               not feeling i did'nt
                                                                  go 2 class. Arjun:shefali is
                               innocent.bhoomika is the trouble
                                                                  maker. Sr:Bhoomika,this is
                               last warning,if u repeat
                                                                  it,i'll send u out of the
                               college. B pretends 2 be
                                                                  guilty:sorry Sr.i promise
                               that from this moment
                                                                  onwards i'll be the decent
                               student in this college. Sr
                                                                  gets angry with B's
                               short skirt:what kind of dress
                                                                  is this?2morrow onwards
                               decent in ur dressing
                                                         shud be a model 4
                               others' dressing. B :ok
                                                                  Sr. when they go out of the
                               room,A smiles at B in
                                                                  the spirit of
                               winning...she becomes angry.
                                                                  the next day ppl felt
                               funny 2 see Bhoomi cuming on a
                                                                  bike in a diff dress-she
                               was dressed in the traditional
                                                                  gujarati style.dark green
                                                                  ornaments.big nose ring.all
                               laugh.B go 2 each class 2
                                                                  expose herself. A
                               cud'nt contol his laughter.
                                                                  bhoomi goes 2 her
                               class:excuse me sir,may i get
                                                                  in? the sir was surprised
                               see her dressing:whats this?
                                                                  B:sorry sir,'m 10
                               minutes late. ppl in the class
                                                                  laugh. sir:not that,ur
                               dressing..immediat ely Sr.rose
                                                                  cumes:what's this funny
                               style? B:u only told me 2
                                                                  wear a nice dress 2 be a
                               model 4 others.its nice no.i
                                                                  luk nice in this
                               traditional look,right?
                                                                  Sr:don't wear this 2 class
                               think its better 2 wear
                                                                  shorts,atleast no 1 teases.
                               B:so u allowed 2 wear
                                                                  shorts?very gud. she hugs the
                               Sr.Sr was wondered.

-De.De- IF-Sizzlerz

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OMG....that is just simply superb....plz cont. soon
diya7000 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 17 March 2006 at 4:16am | IP Logged
I have already read it and said that it's really nice.So pls pls do continue.
tunna Goldie

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Posted: 17 March 2006 at 6:02am | IP Logged
nice...nice nice...very nice Smile
jasminerahul IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 22573

Posted: 17 March 2006 at 10:19am | IP Logged
PART-2.....Shefali comes 2 Bhoomika with a hot
                                                      news:bhoomi,as we thot arjun
                          not rich. B:what?
                                                      S:yes,Rocky enquired.
                          B:he must be mistaken.
                                                      S:no way..he is poor.
                          B:then why did he avoid
                                                      u?see his headweight. S:i
                          don't want that beggar
                                                      anymore. Bhoomi jokes:u r a
                          model 2 fast ur
                                                      luv got vanished! B & S
                          2 the canteen where arjun
                                                      was there. B looked
                          into his food:why,only a
                                                      few items?only ordinary
                          curries?i don't cum 2 the
                                                      canteen.but i bring diff
                          varieties of curries. oh,how
                                                      can a lower middle class boy
                          like u be luxurious...right
                                                      Arjun? she teases.A
                          loses his control &
                                                      slaps her.they got shocked.
                          A:our family was very
                                                      rich..u can't even imagine the

                          luxuries we had.but
                                                      papa's business failed & we
                          fell can go fast
                                                      rich girls like shud not
                          tease others bcoz of that.
                                                      his eyes were full of tears.   
                          Shefali blames him when
                                                      they were alone:see his
                          headweight eventho he is a
                                                      beggar?how dare he slap u?
                          B:i don't care about
                                                      that.but the insult i had..i
                          will never 4get that.
                                                      S:i'll tell rocky,he'll
                          bring some ppl 2 beat him
                                                      into a lifeless body. B:i
                          don't want his help.i no
                                                      what 2 be done.i'll show him
                          who i'm. she was determint.
                                                      there was a func going on in
                          their college. there were
                                                      entertainment programmes on
                          the stage. B comes &
                                                      announces:next a
                          beautiful melody'll be
                                                      sung by a gr8 singer...Arjun
                          .A was
                                                      shocked. B-S were
                          laughing. B:lets see how
                                                      he'll be insulted b4 others.
                          A:plz friends,this is
                                                      announced without my
                          permission. B:no he's
                                                      lying.arjun,its not fair2
                          the last moment.this
                                                      a kind of cheating. A
                          was hurt,but he did'nt
                                                      show it.he decides 2 beat
                          B:friends,i'm not a gud
                                                      singer,but i'll try. he takes
                          violen from the audience
                                                      starts using it.ppl
                          hoot..also bhoomi & shefali.A
                                                      starts singing it.every1
                          starts enjoying it. it was so
                                                      beautiful that B cud'nt
                          believe her ears. she
                                                      thinks:i did this 2 embarass
                          him.but i failed in that
                                                      how can i face him?   
                          song was really
                                                      touching.B cud'nt control
                          herself & she sings along
                                                      with him.he eyes got filled up

                          with tears without her
                                                      knowledge. she cud'nt control
                          & runs away from the
                                                      stage. B cumes 2 no that
                          A is not able 2 pay
                                                      the exam fees.she feels
                          sympathy & she pays 4 him.
                                                      A gets money from his
                          friend & goes 2 pay.but he
                                                      was shocked 2 no that its paid

                          B. he goes near
                                                      her:did u pay my fees?
                          B:yes. A:why?
                                                      B:otherwise u won't be able
                          appear 4 the
                                                      exam,afterall u r a gud
                          student. A gives her the
                                                      money:take it.that debt is
                          over.listen bhoomika,i may be
                                                      having problems..u don't hav 2

                          bother about that.don't
                                                      interfere in my affairs..ok?
                          goes irritated. B
                                                      becomes sad.Shefali cumes with
                          angry face:what were u
                                                      chatting with him? while he
                          was singing itself,i noticed
                                                      face expression.what were
                          sentiments...why do u
                                                      luv him? B got
                          irritated:yes,why not? S:i
                                                      that it will end up in luv.i
                          threw him away,so u don't
                                                      hav 2 luv the same person.
                          B:thats my wish.what all
                                                      stupid things did i do 4 u?i
                          irritated the poor arjun a
                                                      lot.u were not luving him,u
                          were luving his money.when u
                                                      came 2 no about his financial
                          condition,u threw him.i
                                                      feel affection bcoz i feel
                          that he is facing the similar
                                                      situation i'm facing...Shefali
                          was angry.she goes away.
                                                      Arjun,his mom shakundala,dadi
                                                      sitting 2gether & having lunch

                          home.A gets a ph
                                                      call.he was shocked.
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good continue soon
priya the sweet Goldie
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Posted: 17 March 2006 at 11:17pm | IP Logged
Clap wow really nice plz contiue Big smile
priya.a Groupbie

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Posted: 18 March 2006 at 1:40am | IP Logged
Nice..please continue..

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