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Posted: 08 December 2012 at 4:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by FizaluvsKinshuk

Wonderful chapter Achu, it was short but sweet, do try and continue soon please :D
thanks fizaSmile and yes will update soon.

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Posted: 08 December 2012 at 4:31am | IP Logged
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Wow nice chapter I loved it please do continue soon =)
thank uSmile.will update soon.

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Posted: 08 December 2012 at 4:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by deepti_9

awesome update achu..loved the last scene..wating for next part soonWink
thank u deeptiSmile.will update soon.

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Posted: 11 December 2012 at 11:19am | IP Logged
amazing update.. but a short one.
loved the collision part . .Big smile
update soon achu
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Originally posted by rechzZy

amazing update.. but a short one.
loved the collision part . .Big smile
update soon achu
love ya
thank u resh.will update soonSmile
love u too.

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Posted: 22 January 2013 at 7:12am | IP Logged
Sorry my dear frnds couldnt update any chapters.my xams r coming so busy in my studies thats y couldnt update.but after the xams will update.

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Sorry my dear frnds couldnt update any chapters.my xams r coming so busy in my studies thats y couldnt update.but after the xams will update.
 
Good Luck on your exams and will wait for your update Embarrassed

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Chapter-8




Both of them stops staring. nivi frees herself from viren's hold. viren also looses his grip. nivi-"thank u." viren "its ok". nivi and viren feels a little awkward and both of them goes away from there. on the way viren thinks "hamesha mein issi ladki se kyun takrathi hoon aur kyun hamesha uski aankhon mein kho jathi hoon. kyun mujhe nivi ki yaad aatha hein. bas viren tu kuch zyada hi soch raha hein.ab tu chal washroom jaana hein." viren then head towards to the washroom. there on the way nivi also thinks "jab bhi mein uss ladke ki pass jaathi hoon kyun mujhe viren ki yaad aathi hein.nahi nivi aisa kuch bhi nahi hein. tu kuch zyada hi soch rahi hein." she then heads towards the hall where the wedding is taking place. after going to washroom viren also joins the wedding. the wedding takes place beautifully.


It was the bidaai time. piya hugs her mother and father and cries. everyone gets emotional . varun comes near piya. he assures her mother and father that he will always keep her happy. viren sees all this and he also gets emotional. he then says to himself "mein bhi meri nivi ko kabhi dukhi nahi hone doonga.mein duniya ki saari khushi doonga."


Piya and varun sits in the car. piya's mother comes near piya and says "apna,varun aur uska family ka kyaal rakhna piya." "aap tension mat leejiye maa. aap apni aur papa ka kyaal rakhna. maa ek minute ke liye nivi ko bulana." piya's mother calls nivi. nivi goes near piya. piya "i will really miss u. nivi "i will miss u too." piya "miss ka matlab ye nahi hein ki tum mujhe call nahi karogi. mein tumhe zaroor call karkr disturb karoongi." nivi "of course yaar zaroor call zaroongi aur tum bhi mujhe call kar sakthi ho.ye bhi koi bholne ki baat hein. aakhir tum meri ek lawthi pyaari friend hein na."


Piya "nivi jab tum viren se milogi tab zaroor phone karke bathana.ok aur haan zaroor usse milwana.nahi toh mein tumhe phone karke torture karoongi." nivi "haan baba phone karkr batoungi agar tumse nahi bataou toh phir kisse bataou." piya "i am sure tum dono zaroor ek honge.nivi kya pata woh yahi kahin aas pass ho." nivi "piya ab bas bhi kar." there varun was also talking to viren. varun "jab nivi se mulakaat ho tab zaroor batana." viren "of course yaar." varun "i am sure tum dono ek honge.viren kya pata woh yahi kahin aas pass ho."

Varun and piya waves their hands to viren and nivi respectively.viren and nivi stands straight at the same time.both of their eyes meet each other.car goes from there.both of them smiles at each other and goes from there.



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