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beautiful update Achu..i loved it..yes our nivren r the best they love each other so much..they r made for each otherEmbarrassedWink

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Originally posted by deepti_9

beautiful update Achu..i loved it..yes our nivren r the best they love each other so much..they r made for each otherEmbarrassedWink
yes deepthi nivren r and will always be the best.they r made for each otherEmbarrassed

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Just caught up with your FF and I love it, please continue soon, I'm waiting for Nivedita and Viren to find out about each other

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sorry frnds for keeping u all wait for this time.was not getting time to write ff.at last got some time and wrote one chapter and that also in a quick.sorry for the mistakes guys.
enjoy readingSmile

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Chapter-7


The sangeet ceremony takes place beautifully. The function gets over and all of them go to their houses.

Next day-the wedding day

All of them were busy in their own preparations.


At piya's house-everybody was getting ready.nivi was helping piya in getting her ready.finally piya gets ready.she was looking beautiful.nivi-"haaye tum kitni sundar lag rahi ho.kisi ki nazar na lage and she puts kajal ka tika.varun tumhe dekhthe hi reh jaoge.mujhe ek aur baat pata hei. Piya-"kya". Nivi-"ye kajal ka tika lagane se kuch nahi hoga kyun ki tumhe varun ke hi nazar lagegi". She teases her saying this. Piya-"nivi tub hi naa chup kar.jab tumhari shaadi hogi tab tum dekh le naa tumhari kya haalat hone waali hei." Nivi-"jab meri shaadi hogi tab mein dekhoongi." Piya-"accha ab tub hi ready ho jao." Nivi starts to get ready.


Baraat comes. everybody was happy seeing the baraat. Piya's mother comes and takes piya with her.when she was going from the room she says to nivi-"nivi jaldi aana." Nivi "ok" and piya goes from there.there baraat enters. Piya's family welcomes varun's family. The wedding ceremony starts. There nivi finally gets ready. She was looking gorgeous. She was wearing a pink lehenga and as always she was wearing light jewellery.


Viren was with varun.viren was feeling thirsty. He goes and takes a glass of juice. Children were playing there suddenly one of the child accidentally hits viren. Juice falls on viren's sherwani. Piya's mother sees this and comes to viren. "beta juice toh tumhare sherwani mein ghir gaya. Mujhe lagta hein ki tumhe sherwani change kar lena chahiye.tum chalo mere saath." Viren-"nahi aunty uski koyi zaroorat nahi hein. Aap tension mat leejiye aap mujhe sirf washroom kahan hein bata deejiye mein saaf kar loonga." "are you sure beta tum wash kar loge." "yes aunty change karne ki koyi zaroorat nahi hein." Piya's mother shows him direction to washroom. Viren goes to washroom.



There nivi after getting ready was on her way to the hall. A turning comes and at the turning nivi collides with someone and she slips and was going to fall but suddenly some force hold her and save her from falling down.nivi closes her eyes. She sense that someone was holding her. She opens her eyes and sees viren holding her tightly. Both of them looks at each other passionately. Both of them stand in that position for sometime.



Edited by achu28 - 24 November 2012 at 7:07am

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Wonderful chapter Achu, it was short but sweet, do try and continue soon please :D

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Wow nice chapter I loved it please do continue soon =)

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awesome update achu..loved the last scene..wating for next part soonWink

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