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Posted: 12 June 2012 at 12:28pm | IP Logged
wow amazing update
i just loved it
pls update soon
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 12 June 2012 at 3:59pm | IP Logged
Achu I was waiting for you to update, I'm soo happy that you did and I loved it, the Song sequence was just so well written I loved it. Thanks for the PM. Big smile

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Posted: 13 June 2012 at 9:24am | IP Logged
nice update achu..so nivren love at first sight...Wink..hmmm..Wink..
continue soon..Embarrassed

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Thanx for the pm achu
lovely song seq really enjoyed it .

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Posted: 09 August 2012 at 8:00am | IP Logged
@resh,sandy,deepthi,fiza,sunayana thank u all for ur sweet replies.Hug
sorry guys for this long wait.was not at all in a proper mood to write ff.but for u all i wrote one chapter.i will see to it that from onwards i will update as soon as i can.
wrote one chapter in a quick i know it is not good.if u liked it then dont forget to leave ur replies.
anyways enjoy reading.Smile

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Chapter-6



Piya takes nivi from viren ands piya says "nivi tu ne kamal kar di.kya dance thi.you were looking so beautiful.waise ek baat batha college mein tho tum dance nahi karthi thi jab mein tumhe bhulane ke liye aathi hoon tum hamesha baag jathi thi." Nivi-"haan yeh sach thi ki mein hamesha koyi bahana banathi thi par mujhe ye patha hei ki meri friend mujhe dance karthi dekhna chahthi thi.isiliye mein surprise mein dance kiya." Piya-"really nivi it was so beautiful aur ek aur baath kahun.tum aur who ladka jo tumhare saath dance kiya tum donon ki Jodi kamal thi.u were looking so cute together.last mein tum dono aise kadhen the jaise tum dono ke beech kuch ho.batao na kuch hei kya."she teases her by asking this.


Just then nivi says "kya piya tum kuch bhi bolthi jaa rahi ho.hum dono ke beech kuch bhi nahi hein.woh tho sirf hum dono dance kar rahe the aur hamare beech kuch ho hi nahi saktha.tumhe tho sab kuch patha hein naa piya.piya-"nivi mein tho mazaak kar rahi thi".nivi-"aur aisi mazaak kabhi mat karna".piya-"nahi karoongi yaar.of course mujhe patha hein naa tumhare Mr.Perfect ke bare mein.the one and only Mr.Viren Sood.i know ki viren hi tumhare zindagi hein and I know how much u love him.nivi mujhe hamesha hairan hi hua hein itne saal ho gaye aura b bhi tum usse itna pyaar karthi hein.bachpan mein tum dono alag huye hein itne saal hone ke baad bhi tum usse itna pyaar karthi hein par kase nivi".


Nivi-"zindagi hei woh meri aur mein apna zindagi ke bagair kaise reh sakthi hoon".piya-"par nivi kya tumhe patha hei ki woh bhi tumse pyaar kartha hein.kahin usko kisi aur se".nivi-"nahi".piya-"but how can u tell it so confidently".nivi-"bas mujhe patha hein".piya-"nivi pehle tho mein yeh true love mein believe nahi karthi thi but ab tumhare story sunne ke baad mein believe karne lagi hoon aur meri true love varun hi hei" and she turns and looks at varun.


Varun was also looking at piya.both of them smiles.varun turns to viren and says "viren pehle tho mein yeh true love mein believe nahi kartha tha but ab tumhare story sunne ke baad mein believe karne laga hoon aur meri true love piya hein.vaise viren tum sach mein usse itna pyaar kartha hein".viren-"zindagi hei woh mera aur mein apna zindagi ke bagair kaise reh saktha hoon.varun-"vaise tumhare Mrs.Perfect I mean Miss.Nivedita Sharma oops sorry I mean Mrs.Nivedita Viren Sood tum tho abhi se usko yeh identity diya hein naa.vaise usko agar kisi aur se".viren-"no".varun-"no.but how can u tell it so confidently".viren-"mujhe patha hein" and he turns and suddenly his eyes meets nivi's eyes.nivi also looks at him and both of them smiles.


 



Edited by achu28 - 09 August 2012 at 8:04am

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Posted: 09 August 2012 at 10:55am | IP Logged

awesome update Clap
really interesting achu...  cute love storyEmbarrassed
continue soon drHug

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