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lovely update achu..do continue soon n wating for the surprise n nivren meetWink...thanx for the PM

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lovely updates achuBig smile

hmmm... love at first sight ,, i supposeWink

continue soon sweetz...Hug

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First of all really sorry for commenting late anyway wonderful update now can't wait for Nivren To Meet. Smile

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Very nice chapters. Please update soon

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hai friends after a long time am back with my ffSmile.i know i made all of u wait for so long sorry guys.was busy and was also not in a proper mood to write ff.but from now onwards i will update my ff once in a week if am not busy.

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@neeti,sandy,deepti.reshma,fiza,aamina thank u all for ur replys.

once again sorry guys for making u all wait for so long.i have updated one chapter.just wrote it in a quick so please forgive my mistakes.enjoy reading frnds.Smile

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Chapter-5


Suddenly lights of the hall goes off.everyone gets frightened and asks each other what had happened.suddenly only a voice is heard "please aap sab log shant ho jayiye lights nahi chali gayi hei lights switch off kiya gaya hei." Everybody asks whose voice is this. Suddenly a beam of light is seen and everybody sees a girl covering her face with her hands.music gets started

Bole chudiyan, bole kangna

Haai main ho gayi teri saajna
Tere bin jiyo naiyo lag da main te margaiya


She moves her hand from her face.all of them were surprised especially piya.she was sitting with her mouth opened "nivi".

Le jaa le jaa, dil le jaa le jaa
Le jaa le jaa, soniye le jaa le jaa - 2


She has already planned and brought girls to dance with her.they join with her.

Bole chudiyan, bole kangna
Haai main ho gayi teri saajna
Tere bin jiyo naiyo lag da main te margaiya


(Le jaa le jaa, dil le jaa le jaa
Le jaa le jaa, soniye le jaa le jaa) - 2



viren sees this and he and some boys also joins with them to dance from boy's side..

Bole chudiyan, bole kangna
Haai main ho gaya tera saajna
Tere bin jiyo naiyo lag da main te marjaawa
Le jaa le jaa, soniye le jaa le jaa
Dil le jaa le jaa, ho


All of them get into dance mood.nivi sings,

Haai haai main marjaawa marjaawa tere bin
Ab to meri raatein kat ti taare gin gin
Bas tujhko pukaara kare, meri bindiya ishaara kare


(viren) Hoye, lashkaara lashkaara teri bindiya ka lashkaara
Aise chamke jaise chamke chaand ke paas sitaara



piya  gets up and join with them and she sings

Oh oh, oh oh oh, oh oh oh oh oh
Meri paayal bulaaye tujhe, jo roothe manaaye tujhe
O sajan ji, haan sajan ji
Kuch socho, kuch samjho meri baat ko


seeing this varun also join with them and he sings for piya

Bole chudiyan, bole kangna
Haai main ho gaya tera saajna
Tere bin jiyo naiyo lag da main te marjaawa
Le jaa le jaa, soniye le jaa le jaa
Dil le jaa le jaa, ho

(piya and nivi) Apni maang suhaagan ho, sang hameshaa saajan ho
Aake meri duniya mein vaapas na jaana
Sehra baandhke maahi tu mere ghar aana



varun join with piya and viren with nivi.

Oye soni kitti soni aaj tu lagdi ve
Bas mere saath yeh jodi teri sajdi ve
Roop aisa suhaana tera, chaand bhi hai deewana tera

(piya and nivi) Jaa re jaa oh jhoothe teri galla hum na maane
Kyoon taarife karta hai tu humko sab kuch jaane


suddenly piya's and varun's father and mother joins in

Ho, oh oh oh, oh oh oh oh oh, ho oh oh oh oh
Mere dil ki duaa yeh kahe, teri jodi salaamat rahe
O sajan ji, haan sajan ji
Yunhi beete saara jeevan saath mein

(varun and viren)Bole chudiyan, bole kangna
Haai main ho gaya tera saajna

(piya and nivi) Tere bin jiyo naiyo lag da main te margaiya
Le jaa le jaa, soniye le jaa le jaa
Dil le jaa le jaa, ho

(all foursome)Le jaa le jaa, soniye le jaa le jaa
Dil le jaa le jaa, ho

(varun and viren)Aaja heeriye

(piya and nivi) Oh, jaa jaa ranjhna

(varun and viren)Oh, aaja heeriye

(piya and nivi) Jaa jaa ranjhna

(Le jaa le jaa, dil le jaa le jaa
Le jaa le jaa, soniye le jaa le jaa) - 2

Aa aa aa aa aa aa, kabhi khushi kabhi gham
Na judaa honge hum, kabhi khushi kabhi gham


When the song was over piya's hands were in varun's and was looking each other.there viren and nivi was also standing like this.but when the song was over varun and piya freed themselves but viren and nivi was standing there.they were looking each other passionately.they were looking each other as if some magnet is attracting each other's eyes.piya and varun sees this.after the dance all of them clap. Hearing this viren and nivi come from dreamland and they free themselves.




Edited by achu28 - 12 June 2012 at 6:22am

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Posted: 12 June 2012 at 11:11am | IP Logged
aww... lovely update dear...
the entire song sequence was scripted very well achu..
thnx for the pm...
waiting for the next update.. 
love u

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