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thank u bowya,neeti,suman,resh,meera,fiza and ash for ur support.
fiza am sorry i made u wait for so long.got ur pm but was busy in studies thats why couldnt update anything.sorry i have updated only one chapter but now am free for some days so will try to update more chapters.

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Chapter-2


Dadi goes inside. She goes to nivi's room. She looks at the room. She sees nivi's photo and she picks it up. Tears made their way through her cheeks. She looks at the photo and tells 'jaldi ghar ajaa meri bachi tumhare bina ye ghar soona hei.hamein tumhari bahut yaad aa rahi hei.'just then divya comes 'hmm meine suna ki meri dadi apni pothi ko miss kar rahi hein'.dadi gets startled and looks at divya and tell 'tu bhi na jab dekho peeche se aake darathi hein'.divya tells sorry tells she will never do it again.she comes and sits near dadi.

Divya also looks at nivi's photo. 'sach mein dadi uske bina ghar soona lag rahi hein.uske bina mera mann kahin nahi lagthi.bas usse aane do hum koob masti karenge aur usse bahut kuch batani  hein.' 'dadi nivi bata rahi thi ki woh piya ki shaadi attend karke aa rahi hein.'dadi also tells that yes after attending piya's marriage she will come.piya is nivi's best friend.dadi tells divya  today was sangeet ceremony and tomorrow will be her marriage.divya also tells her that she has told her after the marriage she will come home.divya hugs dadi.

 

At sood's house:

Sood's were setteled in delhi.they had also a house in shimla near to sharma's house but due to business and siddarth was also studying in delhi they all shifted from shimla to delhi.siddarth and viren both studied in same school in delhi.but after school siddarth did his higher studies in delhi but viren went abroad.now after studies viren was returning home.

All where busy in preparations as viren was returning home after his studies.vandana and nandu  was cleaning viren's room.vandana was going to make viren's favorite dishes but chanchal told that she will prepare.siddarth was busy in buying new bike for viren.Jawahar,dadasahib,yashodara was busy in buying new fashion clothes for viren.

After buying clothes three came back home.jawahar calls chanchal and vandana to show them the clothes.vandana comes but chanchal was busy in kitchen.jawahar asks vandana about chanchal and she tells them. All three of them get shocked and says together "kya".All the sood's know that chanchal don't know cooking.jawahar asks vandana that is chanchal really cooking.

Vandana tells jawahar that when she got news of viren's return from that day onwards she is learning to make food and this time chanchal has got guidance from her.jawahar remembers chanchal's first day at the house and how she prepared kheer instead of sugar she put salt.next day she prepared aloo paratha and final product was burnt paratha and aloo mix was too spicy.

Vandana wakes jawahar from his thoughts and says "janthi hoon kya soch rahe ho par iss bar kuch nahi hoga".vandana assures jawahar.jawahar also says "jantha hoon bhabhi agar aap hei tho darne ki koyi baat nahi".after sometime chanchal comes there and she looks at the dress and she also likes it.siddarth also comes and join with them and tells them he has ordered for the bike and by next day afternoon the bike will be brought.

All of them get into chatting about viren's friends marriage.yashodara asks the name of the boy and the girl.siddarth tells its varun and piya.siddarth tells them that today was sangeet and next day was their marriage after that viren will return home.after the chattings all of them get back to their works.



Edited by achuniviren - 28 January 2012 at 2:47am

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read both chapters achu..very good start ...so nivi n viren going to same marriage..there first meet will be there..really interestingWink..achu please pm me next time when u update next chapters.Smilegreat start..

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Nice update...

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hey Achu dear nice start haan...Viren and Nivi gonna meet with each other at their friend's marriage...interesting very interesting...sweety don't keep us waiting for long this time and do update soon ...loved itHug

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good start and nivren going to attend same marriage sounds interesting.. continue soon.
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I finally read your update and loved it and Nivren going to the same wedding sounds interesting do continue soon. Smile

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