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Hamari Kahani-(KYPH FF)UPDATED (Page 6)

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Posted: 18 March 2006 at 10:02am | IP Logged

Originally posted by meeraxyz

please write more i cant wait

u can alwayz write u noeBig smile

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guys this is my 1st attempt so plz bear with me
                                                                Part #4
Angad thinks its not a bad idea to make mishti his fake gf
Mishti walks to angad and josh
She hugs each of them
Angad 4 the 1st time is kind of attracted towards her
M: are angad kab aaye I missed u sooo much
A: oh really..(then he stopped)
J: mishi so who is yr new bf
M: are tumhe to patah hai na mere bf's 2 hafte se ziyada tikte nahi hain filhaal to koi nahin hai why r u asking do u want to become mine (not looking at josh but angad)
Angad was stupidly staring at mishti
J: nahi yaar toh u r coming to next weeks party at Karishma's house
M: oh haan I am coming what about u?
J: no I won't be able to come but angad wanted to go but he wants company but I can't go so he is also not going
M: oh main hoon na
Angad is still looking at mishti
But slowly he realizes it was not KRIPA (he had tought it was kripa)
And then he put his gaze down
Angad didn't speak
A(thinking): I have to move on I am not a looser
Josh shaking angad
J: angad to its set u'll go with mishti
A: yeah
Mishi again hugs both of them and goes

Meanwhile Kripa had come back she had forgotten to take sumthing from the mall
She saw angad hugging mishti
She was quiet shocked
She immediately turned her way and went out of the mall

When she reached home
Kripa sat on her bed hugging her pillow
She closed her eyes and she remembered something that that she had buried ages ago those memories which she had left but now they came back
She remembered angad and her walking in the garens holding hands
She remembered angad hugging her
She remembered the warmth he gave her
She remembered the way he used to kiss her
When she remembered this suddenly
She threw her pillow and opened her eyes
K: oh no why am I remembering all this it is past I don't love angad anymoe now I know he has move on but why wasn't I ableto move on I have to I don't have to remember things which I never bothered all these years
But the she felt her face was full of tears she got up and washed her face
K(thinking): I can't let this happen again to me never
And she walked to her room and took out some work and started doing it

Angad in the mean time was also thinking the same things
He was in the garden that was at one time the most significant thing in his life
Some tears came out of his eyes but he decided to forget them
And he sat on one of the benches
Then only mishti came
M: angad……
Angad did not respond
M: angad josh told me everything I never knew u loved me so much
Angad completely shocked
He looked up
But there was his kripa sitting
A( thinking): kripa yahaan she loves me
Angad was so drained out that he couldn't see it was not kripa
He couldn't see that he never bothered to remember kripa all these years but now the feelings were again rising
As if the sun was coming out again slowly bringing its light again
……………………………………………………….

That's it guys this is my 1st attempt to cont a story I hope u guys liked it
Plzzzzzzz leave comments



Edited by griffinmonster - 18 March 2006 at 4:04pm
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plzzzzzz mods i ahve a request move this to fan-fic section and keep the moved sign here plz
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Posted: 18 March 2006 at 5:06pm | IP Logged
i luved the last 2 parts! They were awesome! Plz cont. soon!
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Posted: 18 March 2006 at 5:19pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by amneetkaur_24

i luved the last 2 parts! They were awesome! Plz cont. soon!

thanxxxxx amneet i wrote the last part

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Posted: 18 March 2006 at 5:32pm | IP Logged

griffionmaster i went 2 the wrong fan fic LOL LOL found d right one..yay!!!!! Smile AWESUM PART Clap Clap
Luv himani

p.s can i write d next part???? 



Edited by Sour Skittles - 18 March 2006 at 5:47pm
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Posted: 18 March 2006 at 6:26pm | IP Logged
i love the concept, the characters n the parts!!!! i won't promise nething, but if i can i will try to update this fanfic! this will be fun!!!!! Big smile
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Posted: 18 March 2006 at 9:47pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sour Skittles

griffionmaster i went 2 the wrong fan fic LOL LOL found d right one..yay!!!!! Smile AWESUM PART Clap Clap
Luv himani

p.s can i write d next part???? 

of course u can, wen ever u can..well make it soon plzzz

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