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Hamari Kahani-(KYPH FF)UPDATED (Page 5)

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ok..since no1 is continuing...i guess i will...but plz dun get mad if my part is stupid...cuz ive nvr rilly written a fanfice story before...


Its the nxt morning after the party and kripa is sleeping. her cell rings and wakes her up.
K- hello? aliya?
Al- Hey Kripa! Good Afternoon!
K- Wht? Good Afternoon?
Kripa looks at the clock and sees that it 12.30pm
K- o shoot...God..we came back from the part really really l8.
Al- that the whole point of parties! stay up l8 and going shopping in abt and hour...and then im going for lunch...and then i'll do sum more shopping....u wana cum?
K- sure! why not?
Al- ok then...ill pick u up @ 1.30? ok?
K- ok...see ya
Al- bye
Kripa got ready and all and Aliya picked her up and they both went to the mall. they did sum shopping...and then they went to the fod court for sum lunch
Kripa was walking to a table, she was looking the other way and then bumped into a guy.
K- omg! im so sorry!
Kripa looks up and sees the guy. the guy is none other than Angad!
A- **** ..uh...yea...its ok..
A sees tht the girl is Kripa
K- Angad?
A- Kripa?
K- Angad?
A- ok stop
K- o yea sry..
Aliya and Josh cum over. the cleaner guy cums over and cleans the mess. lol.
J- hey kripa, aliya...we're all why dun we eat together?
Al- sure! gr8 idea
A- (mumbles to himself)
K-(all quiet)
J- me and angad are sitting rite there
aliya and kripa go take a seat. angad pulls josh back...
A- josh? wht was tht? why did u tell her to sit with us?
J- i didnt tell HER...i told THEM...angad, why dont u jus get over it?
Josh goes and sits with Aliya and Kripa
The 4 have their lunch. kripa and angad barly was rilly josh and aliya who were doing the talking.
so then after the lunch kripa and aliya leave...and josh and angad are jus hanging out.
J- so tht wasnt so bad, was it?
A- yea whtever...i dunno...u think shes moved on? u think she has a new bf?
J- i dunno...maybe...shes quite hot...she can find a new bf easily
A- shut up!
J- ok ok ok sry man...well..i rilly cudnt tell if she moved on or not....she most likely moved on tho...but maybe not..
A- will u jus make up yur mind!
J- sry..
A- its ok...i jus dont want her to move on and have a new bf...cuz i havnt moved on and it will seem like im a loser.
J- so why dun u play a game?
A- wht do u mean by game?
J- ok....nxt week theres gonna be another sure kripa will be there. bring a girl along and introduce her to everyone as yur gf.
A- hey thts not a bad idea...but where will i find a girl?
J- well there are several girls we know who are crazy after u...u jus have pick the hottest and smartest one.

then a girl cums up to the guys
Girl - hey guys
J and A turn around
the girl is mishti. mishti was crazy abt angad (but not all possessive like in KYPH)...but angad wasnt too interested..he was jus friends wit her....but all the guys liked mishti and she was rilly smart....(like she isnt dumb like anitah is in KYPH. lol)
J- hey mishti!
J- (whispers to angad)hey i think u jus found yur fake gf.....
ok guys...tht was my not sure if its good or not...if u dont like it...jus tell me...but plz dont me too

Moderator's Note:
Edited to remove inappropriate language.

Edited by shahidlover24 - 01 April 2006 at 12:12pm

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Posted: 17 March 2006 at 3:47pm | IP Logged
hello desi i sent u 3 pmss plzz reply
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Posted: 17 March 2006 at 4:40pm | IP Logged
good job!!

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Posted: 17 March 2006 at 5:02pm | IP Logged
very good PAri..guys ders no limitations to how many updates u can post in a griffin u can still post a part! i loved it though, pari write a ff...i promise i'll read it LOL and yea..i sigh my name after every post-its Karishma..u can call me dat-(griffin) Big smile Kashish..i think this wasnt a bad idea LOL
continue sooooon!!
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Big smile thank you!!
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g8 Big smile Big smile Big smile
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please write more i cant wait

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