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Posted: 09 December 2011 at 12:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by br200910

  yes Rajbeer... ne thik kaha tha Tu jaane naaa.he love tomuch...Wink


rajbeer ke haal aise he...


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Posted: 09 December 2011 at 4:24am | IP Logged
part 1 tooo awsomeee Madhu...kya baat hai Rajbeer itna gussa...very well written...Clap...this SS is my First Fav among the SS/OS that u have written till now...waiting for next part... Big smile

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Originally posted by snehapatro

part 1 tooo awsomeee Madhu...kya baat hai Rajbeer itna gussa...very well written...Clap...this SS is my First Fav among the SS/OS that u have written till now...waiting for next part... Big smile





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Posted: 10 December 2011 at 6:28am | IP Logged
the next part is dedicated 2 all d people who took d time out 2 read/like/comment...

your appreciation is an honour...

please keep it up...

Preeto ss: tu jaane na...Part 2

Why was she still not home??... "preeto di...pick d call...plz..."... baani was getting increasingly worried...wen she heard d key turn in d lock...& preeto walked in through d back door of d Dhillon house...& without a word went straight up to the terrace... "She saved me from Ranjeet, but destroyed her life."..thought baani bitterly...


D soft sobbings had awakened meeta...& now she looked from afar...her boldest sister...defeated... Thank god...pankaj had come in time dat day... d scene had shocked her...pankaj supporting an injured bauji &...preeto...she was barely able 2 stand up... "rajbeer...tum ek baar to uski baat sun lete.." she thought..


Two weeks...& only bad news...d war had officially begun...& dhruv-jogi were called 2 d outposts too... "Main apni khabar deta rahunga...aur rajbeer ki bhi..."..dhruv ji had promised... u mean nothing... dis line had played on & on in her mind, since she had walked back from him...d lonely roads...had laughed at her..d darkness had mocked her.. "you were afraid of us...& now u will live and die with us..."...but she wasn't scared for dat... "just let him be fine..." Preeto prayed d hundredth time...

 

Situation at dhillon house was very tense... "Main apni beti ko nhi jaane de sakti masterji.." Her father looked at her sad eyes...& was reminded of Rajbeer...d day he had left disappointed...after his claim of banjeet being in d pub was refuted... as preeto sat on her knees and looked up at d person whum she was so similar too.. Bauji said, "ek wada karke ja puttar. Jab wapas ayegi to humari preeto ko bhi sath lekar ayegi. Uski bahut yaad ati he.."


"main tujhe akele nahi jaane dunga"... Pankaj's pleaded as preeto walked off..."sab meri galti he.." he thought.. The Miltary van left with Preeto... and Pankaj was reminded of d last proper conversation he had with Preeto.. "Par tu rajbeer ko kyu nahi batati?" "Tu mera sath dega ki nahi?" "kya karna he?" "Baani pe nazar rakh"..


D farthest hospital camp was quite a distance away from the border...but d days were filled with artillery sounds...and nights with d thick smog created by all d gunfire...It suffocated preeto initially...But dere was too much work..a regular flow of wounded personnels had 2 b looked after...d medical team was small but efficient...& had managed to train volunteers like her... Each time a medical van came, her heart raced in d dread of seeing a familiar face... & soon a day came wen d sight of d person lying on d stretcher... made her cry out in anguish... "nahi..."




Edited by sen_madhuban - 10 December 2011 at 6:31am

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Posted: 10 December 2011 at 11:19am | IP Logged
nobody reading it...Cry Cry Cry Cry


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Posted: 10 December 2011 at 11:50am | IP Logged
I read it and my herat is still pouncing...
Please continue aur Intezaar bardaash nahi hoti

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Posted: 10 December 2011 at 9:32pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sen_madhuban

nobody reading it...Cry Cry Cry Cry


aww my sweet Madhu dont cry dear...by the way cuteee pic...LOL

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Posted: 10 December 2011 at 9:38pm | IP Logged
aww meri Preeto and Rajbeer...Cry
Part 2 Superbbb Madhu Dear...Big smile...Loved It...Clap
ur making me think and think what will happen next so continue soon and come up with next part waiting for it...Big smile

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