Posted: 09 December 2011 at 6:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by booksfreak07
Sorry it took me soo long to read, but that's probably your fault anyway
I had to literally stop in the middle of reading soo many times just to get my laughter under control. I just keep imagining swamini's face when she saw them together! And I love the name chaudhrain
Gosh, you know I love your writing skills, you're seriously brilliant. And thanks for mentioning me, that was incredibly sweet of you!!!!
I just loved how you used the whole jeevi angle in the OS. Soo cute, I'm not very fond of jeevi as a couple on the show but this just made me drool.
And please keep writing!! You're an amazing writer with soo much creativity inside your head, never let it go.
Lots of love!!!
PS My brain still can't get over the bebo main bebo song. I keep listening to it and it makes me smile everytime that I do, reminding me of your OS. Oh, and I noticed there's a line- hum ko bhi kya khabar thi, ishq hai apni tu tu main main- hahaha, totally applies to Virman!
it's okay..it will take me a million years to reply to all the comments, and besides, i'm glad you actually liked my os enough not to just skim through it in 2 seconds. man..i can't believe i make people laugh with my one-shots yaar.. i've said earlier that i'm not a very humorous person, i don't know how to crack jokes and most of my stories are dark-and-melancholy types so when i write comedy i wonder whether people find my stuff lame or something no problems..you know when i read your one shot i was not only jealous because it was evident you write better than me but also stunned because i actually got that warmth and romance shooting right out from the os ka page to my mind really you're a inspiration really..i still have miles to go.. even i'm not fond of jeevi as much as virmaan, but there are times when jeevika-viren really bowl me over(like yesterday's epi) and i just found it kinda logical that jeevika might be angry that viren hid such an important thing from her, but i added comedy angle to it to make it light-hearted. thanks for the long comments yaar..and glad you liked the bebo main bebo OS..I was worried I'd lost my marbles with that one.. megz.