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Megz's VirMan Fantasy: Soumini gets VirMan married (Page 4)

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Posted: 09 December 2011 at 3:02am | IP Logged
Awww. It made me grin like a fool. Seriously. This is just ohmygodawesome. :D I love love love your fantasies, like really. Dude, it couldn't have been anymore cuter. I don't know why but after reading your shots, i feel like killing EHMMBH creatives, for not actually doing those things in the show itself. It definitely was fun to read, it would be helluva fun to watch. 

GOD. You rock. (:  

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Posted: 09 December 2011 at 3:57am | IP Logged

swamini herself made this decision,,,ROFL     

very naughty virat, lovely fantasy,, enjoyed alot.Smile.
thanks for the PM,, and do PM  when you update the next one..

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Posted: 09 December 2011 at 5:15am | IP Logged
LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ur  a really good writer!!!

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Posted: 09 December 2011 at 6:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by booksfreak07

Res

Sorry it took me soo long to read, but that's probably your fault anyway Tongue
I had to literally stop in the middle of reading soo many times just to get my laughter under control. I just keep imagining swamini's face when she saw them together! And I love the name chaudhrain LOL
Gosh, you know I love your writing skills, you're seriously brilliant. And thanks for mentioning me, that was incredibly sweet of you!!!!
Awww...
I just loved how you used the whole jeevi angle in the OS. Soo cute, I'm not very fond of jeevi as a couple on the show but this just made me drool.
And please keep writing!! You're an amazing writer with soo much creativity inside your head, never let it go.

Lots of love!!! Smile

PS My brain still can't get over the bebo main bebo song. I keep listening to it and it makes me smile everytime that I do, reminding me of your OS. Oh, and I noticed there's a line- hum ko bhi kya khabar thi, ishq hai apni tu tu main main- hahaha, totally applies to Virman!

it's okay..it will take me a million years to reply to all the comments, and besides, i'm glad you actually liked my os enough not to just skim through it in 2 seconds. LOLEmbarrassed

man..i can't believe i make people laugh with my one-shots yaar..LOL i've said earlier that i'm not a very humorous person, i don't know how to crack jokes and most of my stories are dark-and-melancholy types LOL so when i write comedy i wonder whether people find my stuff lame or something LOLEmbarrassed

no problems..you know when i read your one shot i was not only jealous because it was evident you write better than me LOLEmbarrassed but also stunned because i actually got that warmth and romance shooting right out from the os ka page to my mind really  LOLEmbarrassed you're a inspiration really..i still have miles to go..LOLEmbarrassed

even i'm not fond of jeevi as much as virmaan, but there are times when jeevika-viren really bowl me over(like yesterday's epi) and i just found it kinda logical that jeevika might be angry that viren hid such an important thing from her, but i added comedy angle to it to make it light-hearted. LOL

thanks  for the long comments yaar..and glad you liked the bebo main bebo OS..I was worried I'd lost my marbles with that one..ROFLEmbarrassed

megz. Embarrassed

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Posted: 09 December 2011 at 6:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ashred12

if d title didnt give me a heartattack, then the story did..LOL
oh my...swamini bua's thots...ROFLROFL
poor lady...khandaan ki izzat keliye kya kya karna padta hai..ROFL
n bechara viren...an angry jeevika is so rare...but lucky virat got gud food at his bhai's expense...LOL
sooo cute fantasy...Smile

see..if i don't give a paagal title..people will not know that i've written a completely paagal os...LOLWink thoda warning dena padta hai. Embarrassed

yeah..her character is of someone who is willing to do anything for her khaandaan's honour..so i decided to work that to VirMan's advantage. Wink

yeah..i wanted to write angry jeevika but with that cute miya-biwi jhagda thing. LOLEmbarrassed

thanks so much for regularly commenting! Embarrassed


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Posted: 09 December 2011 at 6:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by --sunshine--

Okay megz seriously grl u r awesome beyond words loved this.
speciall u gave the explanation of ahem in store without crossing line and also the end of omlettes and children was PERFECT 

AMazing and miss u reHug

thanks so much sanju..i miss you too..lekin you'll have to wait till march to talk to me at leisureOuch..after march 4 months vacation and masti. WinkLOL

thanks yaar...i don't like all this cutesy stuff usually but watching VirMan and JeeVika always puts me into that hum saath saath hain mood..LOLEmbarrassed as for 'ahem' i'm glad ki meri besharmi itni bhi had nahi paar kar rahi hai..though for me it's positively EmbarrassedEmbarrassed ROFL

love uu..Hug
megz.Embarrassed
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Posted: 09 December 2011 at 6:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by fallenstar

wat timing swamini bua..Clap
thnk god u went into dat storeroom..nw thnks 2 u VirMan r married..
god i love dese 2..der romance iz simply rockin..Heart
superb update sweets..Hug

thanks so much for regularly reading and commenting! Embarrassed oh yes of course..actually the storeroom is imaginary, i don't know whether it exists but usually in all tv serials they have this storeroom type of a place..LOLLOL looks like i should keep on inventing all these hotspots for virman. WinkLOL
glad you liked the romance! Embarrassed
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Posted: 09 December 2011 at 7:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -alisha-

oye teri yeh kya tha?

sweet surprise indeed:D...maanvi on top...virat on top...swamini kaminis horrified face and dialog Tum log kya kar rahe ho?...Damnit! Why did she have to come just when things were getting exciting??!part...'Let's continue, part ;)...the mms aaand...oky ill stop blabbering here...Smile

that was totally kool megz...

oh and i totally love viren part...bechara

thanks so much for regularly commenting! Embarrassed by the way your pm inbox was full Ouch so i-f didn't allow me to send you update pm. Ouch

oh lord..swamini kamini..ROFL too good yaar...oh and yes..i wanted to make viren totally bechara in this os..he's so cute when he has that 'omg-maine kya kiya' look on his face..LOLEmbarrassed

oh yes, 'lets' continue'. after all, even swamini kamini can't do anything. LOL

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