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Part2:
All arrive @ d party & r njoying it!!
Geet sees Maan n asks friends is'nt he d Maan Singh Khurana. ye yaha humari party mein kar raha hai?? who invited him here??? ya phir he does'nt knw k dis is a private party booked by Aman 4 d day... By dat tym Aman cums on stage n announces. Hey frnds here; Am ur Dost n Host for d evening, most of u knw me. Aman naam hai mera(in fulltoo filmy ishtyle) MAan smiles listening 2 him (his line actually.) So folks b4 v begin let me introduce a few imp guests 2nite. 1st of all my GAANA grop.
Aman 2 d group: C'mmon guys up here!! Maan sits staright makig himself comfortable 2 knw d group. Aman begins his hand directing 2 each 1 of dem as he introduces dem; here dis is Anita Amrita Neha n Me Aman hey where G. G 4 geet she missing. Sorry guys 1member missing will find her soon but her name is Geet. Hence d GAANA group. Maan's eyes widened as her heard d session n wen Geet went missing was announced.
Others abhi toh yahi thi pata nahi kaha gayab ho gayi?
Aman continues n 1 more imp personality whom few have noticed here is d ravishig, sizzling n hot Mr. (Maan signals no not 2 tell he is der) Aman twists his words n says: Well guys nw dat wat u got 2 find out!!Enjoy d party, Have fun... Music!!! (Music begins. hai kya ye jo tere mere darmiyaan hai..) Couples start dancing all on d floor but d GAANA members were in search of GEET n so was Maan of d gal who bandaged his hand n vanished lyk thin air in d Crowd ( still does'nt know she is Geet)
Geet @ a lonely corner of d bar jst nxt 2 Maan ( b ut does'nt see her) orders a fruit punch n Maan orders a Cocktail n while d bar tender(BT) is very tired of repeated orders he gives her cocktail n Maan gets her fruit punch. Both drink it n leave. Maan after drinking notices dat it was fruit punch n asks where is my drink cocktail kaha hai? He gets angry n breaks d glass... He den searches 4 d lady wid whom his drink got exchanged!!

By the tym Aman cums der n 
Aman: hey maaan!! finally 2 aa gaya na??  Yaar hws u?
Maan looked up 2 c a beautiful gal in a sexy sleeveless red outfit that reachers jst above her knees.(imagine d 1 Geet wore 2 seduce Maan in washroom)
MAAN:Ya am 5ne.n stares @ her unblinkingly n she too stares @ him.. By then d group had cum der n found her Aman too was der n starts to speak n breaks d ice. (silence b/w dem)
Aman: tum dono yaha kya kr rahe ho?? 
Geet: Aman vo mein (pause.) pyaas lagi thi toh drink lene aayi thi
Maan: you knw me dude!! i too gt 2 get a drink so am here...(blood is oozing out of Maan's hand)
Geet asks aman 2 get her bag n he gets it 4 her. She immediately takes out d 1st aid n cleans d wound n den bandages it wid d gauze properly. The group members watch it in silence... while Maan is stunned @ her quick action n perfection of her task..
Aman brreaks d silence: 
Aman: Acha i got u guys... btw Maan this is Geet n Geet...
Geet: I knw d Maan Singh Khurana!! bahut suna tha aaj dekh bhi liya... 
 she leaves d place @ once in a hurry... (wid a different expression: as if avoiding d ppl n d crowd arnd her) While d other members carry on knowing Geet very well.
BT: Oh woh mene vo madam ko dii... sorry abhi naya banata hu aao k liye ... Maan looks 4 her Geet is not seen 
Maan says kaun vo ladki jo mujhe bandage laga rahi thi, vo geet hai?? Maan remembers hw their drinks exchanged n she got full talli n looking @ him wid mixed emotions of lust, attraction n liking...
Maan informs Aman dat he g2go n follows Geet. He follows her car n on reaching der helps her by supporting her n taking her till her flat's doorstep...
He calls Aman & tells wat happ n dat he has let her @ hr place n u guys cum n c her if shez 5ne. hE SEE'S A NOTEPAD N PEN N WRITES A NOTE:
DEAR GEET,
WEN U GET UP U'LL HAV SEVERE HEADACHE
PLZ DRINK D NIMBUPANI DATZ KEPT HERE...
THANK U
REGARDS,
UR FRND


Edited by maneetmayur - 02 April 2012 at 1:16am

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Posted: 17 December 2011 at 7:05am | IP Logged
Poor geet has drunk the cocktail now
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Posted: 05 January 2012 at 10:37am | IP Logged
GUYS PLZ I NEED MORE RESPONSE IND FORM OF LIKES N COMMENTS. U PPL READ N LEAVE, DATS NOT DONE,KUCH FEEDBAK BHI DETE JAO SO DAT I KNW WATS UR XPECTATION N WAT R MY FLAWS?? I NSERIOUSLY NEED MORE RESPONSE. DER R 273 VIEWS BUT STILL 9 COMMENTS... UR COMMENTS & LYKS MEAN A LOT I MEAN IT ENCOURAGES ME.. ALL SILENT READERS COMMENT KA TYM NAI HAI TOH @LEAST LYK KARO... ONE MORE THING REGULAR UPDATES CHAHIYE TO REGULAR COMMENTS & LIKES BHI AANE CHAHIYE...

TO ALL MY READERS:



Edited by maneetmayur - 05 January 2012 at 10:38am

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Posted: 05 January 2012 at 11:50am | IP Logged
nice concepts,
continue soon 

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Posted: 23 January 2012 at 12:59am | IP Logged
HIE PPL THANKU ALL 4 LIKING MY  POST N APPRECIATING IT. U R TRULY GOOD @ HEARTITS VISIBLE IN UR COMMENTS FRNDS. BUT AM A BIT CONFUSED WHERE 2 START WID IN D NXT PART N GO ON. I HAD TILL PART 5 BUT UNFORTUNATELY MY DRAFTS IN D CELL GOT DELETED N AM SHORT OF IDEAS... PLZ SUGGEST SUMMTHING DA U WUD LIKE 2 READ N FEEL ABOUT OUR MAANEET... VL SURELY INCL. N BTW  AM TRYING 2 RECOVER FRM MY WRITER'S BLOCK AS SOON AS I THINK OF D TRACK. I'LL B SURELY UPDATING.YAA!!! THANU FRNDS OCE AGAIN. REMEMBER"SUGGESTION N IDEAS R ALWAYS WELCOME".
LOVE U ALL

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Nice start,looking forward for the story to progress
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Posted: 23 January 2012 at 7:32am | IP Logged
nice story
read it in one go
continue soon...
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wow
awesum start
will love to read more
update soon

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