Posted: 12 years ago











Character Sketch
GEET: 
SMART, GORGEOUS, DASHING, BUBBLY N BOLD GAL WHO LIVES WITH HER PARENTS IN A JOINT FAMILY IN LUCKNOW. BUT RECENTLY SHE HAS SHIFTED HER BASE 2 MUMBAI.
MALINI: GEET'S MOTHER; TRADITIONAL LADY, VALUES FAMILY CUSTOMS N ABIDES BY THEM
MR. CHHADA: GEET'S FATHER; hE HAS A BUSINESS OF TEXTILES HIS DAUGHTER PUT UP 4 HIM.


MAAN: 
SMART, ARROGANT, DASHING, HADSOME HUNK, DADI MAA'S JAAN. He runs Khurana Constructions. The 2 most important people in his lyf r dadi & anwesha (aanie) his littele sister who lives in US..
Dadi is d same... & Annie is Sanaya (Gunjan)
MAAN:



DADI:



ANWESHA:


PROLOUGE:
SMART, GORGEOUS, DASHING, BUBBLY N BOLD GAL WHO LIVES WITH HER PARENTS IN A JOINT FAMILY IN LUCKNOW. BUT RECENTLY SHE HAS SHIFTED HER BASE 2 MUMBAI DUE 2 HER WORK N SHE STAYS ALONE IN A BUNGLAW WITH MANY SERVANTS 2 ATTEND 2 HER NEEDS.
SHE IS THE DIRECTOR OF A MEDICAL INSTITUTE DAT HER FATHER HAD INAGUARATED N STARTED UP 4 HER.SHE HAS HER colleagues & friends visiting her every month 4 sum funtym. She started off while working with firms n other Companies den She put up a business with her savings.. A textile firm (deals in dress materials, sarees, etc..) She manages d firm on behalf of her Dad.
GEET'S FAMILY IS THE SAME. BRIJ IS HER COUSIN WHO ALSO STAYS IN US AWAY FROM FAMILY IN LUCKNOW... GEET IS THE ONLY DAUGHTER OF HER FAMILY. GEET IS A DOUBLE GRADUATE 
MBBS (FOR DAD, AS HE WISHED SHE WOULD OPEN AN HOSPITAL N TREAT D DOWNTRODDEN PPL & HELP DEM) & MBA (FOR MOM, AS she wanted her 2 b lyk her dad & handle his bussiness after him)

MAAN'S FAMILY STAYS IN DELHI (AS IN D SERIAL) BUT MAAN IS IN MUMBAI AS IT IS HIS BASE TOO... Lets c hw d 2 meet???
😍
HOPE U ALL LIKE IT... PLZ HIT LIKE & COMMENT 4 SURE...

Edited by maneetmayur - 11 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
nice concept...😊..continue soon
Posted: 12 years ago
Sure friends will continue...😃...
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Edited by maneetmayur - 11 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Guys am very sad. there r 113 views n only 3 comments & 5 likes... Plz post ur feedbak after u view d concept!!!!!
Posted: 12 years ago
PART1:

Geet,Anita, Amrita Neha n Me Aman(GAANA Group). Geet is a very sporty gal who njoys lyf to d fullest; but raely seen like dat. She is engrossed in her business so much that she finds very little tm for herself.Other dan the GAANA group Pinky her cousin from Delhi & her BFF (Best friend forever) manages her day to day to do activities & is always by her side. She is a part of all important decisions made by Geet or dat Geet makes.
New Day. ... A new start!!
Aman calls up Geet n (nw only her voice is heard n shadow shown) invites her 4 his B'day bash @ Poison Lounge.
Aman: Hello madam!! (teasingly) aaj mera B'day hai Mam ko yaad bhi hai k nahi?
Geet:  Whos dis?
Aman: ye lo!! Ab aap iss nacheez ki aawaz bhi pehchaan nahi payi ya fir bhul gayi? Pad gaya poora 
Geet holds bak n puts d call on loudspeaker while pinky is near her, Geet signals kon hai ye??
Pinky: (whispers)Aman hai yaar aaj usi ka toh B'day hai!
Geet: Oh Aman!! Sorry yaar got 2 busy nw a days. Happy B'day Yaar...
Aman: Kisne bataya aapko k hum hai??
Geet: (attitude) Kyu bhai? meri yaadasht theek hai ab tak toh... Pinky smiles n leaves Geet 2 smiles after saying dat.
Geet: Acha Kaho kaise yaad kiya??
Aman: Ab jab aapko pata hai k mera B'day hai toh mujhe aaj aapki aapointment chahiye thi... Aaj raatbhar Party krne ka plan hai. Aur haan mam aapko aana hai.
Geet: (Excitedly) Wow!! Party... But controls her emotions &  sternly Kab aur kaha hai?? 
Aman: Poison Lounge, Bandra.. Sham 7 baje..
Geet:tym mila toh i'll b der. Aur kuch?
Aman: Ji mam. Acha rakhta hu Bye!!
Aman calls up MSK (MSK & aman r BFF lyk pinky & Geet)
Maan: Acha theek hai yaar mein koshish karta hu!!
Aman: OK yaar!! par cool dude baqn k aana, apne official formals mein nahi, ye pub hai Conference nahi. theek ha? Bye!!
Maan: I know par ab tu mujhe bhashan mat mat dey. I'll b der if am free by d tym
Bye...cuts d call. 

Precap: Will They meet??
Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update i hope they meet in the party... Continue soon...
Posted: 12 years ago
Nice part, i hope they meet soon.

Plz add me to ur PM list.
Posted: 12 years ago
Part2:
All arrive @ d party & r njoying it!!
Geet sees Maan n asks friends is'nt he d Maan Singh Khurana. ye yaha humari party mein kar raha hai?? who invited him here??? ya phir he does'nt knw k dis is a private party booked by Aman 4 d day... By dat tym Aman cums on stage n announces. Hey frnds here; Am ur Dost n Host for d evening, most of u knw me. Aman naam hai mera(in fulltoo filmy ishtyle) MAan smiles listening 2 him (his line actually.) So folks b4 v begin let me introduce a few imp guests 2nite. 1st of all my GAANA grop.
Aman 2 d group: C'mmon guys up here!! Maan sits staright makig himself comfortable 2 knw d group. Aman begins his hand directing 2 each 1 of dem as he introduces dem; here dis is Anita Amrita Neha n Me Aman hey where G. G 4 geet she missing. Sorry guys 1member missing will find her soon but her name is Geet. Hence d GAANA group. Maan's eyes widened as her heard d session n wen Geet went missing was announced.
Others abhi toh yahi thi pata nahi kaha gayab ho gayi?
Aman continues n 1 more imp personality whom few have noticed here is d ravishig, sizzling n hot Mr. (Maan signals no not 2 tell he is der) Aman twists his words n says: Well guys nw dat wat u got 2 find out!!Enjoy d party, Have fun... Music!!! (Music begins. hai kya ye jo tere mere darmiyaan hai..) Couples start dancing all on d floor but d GAANA members were in search of GEET n so was Maan of d gal who bandaged his hand n vanished lyk thin air in d Crowd ( still does'nt know she is Geet)
Geet @ a lonely corner of d bar jst nxt 2 Maan ( b ut does'nt see her) orders a fruit punch n Maan orders a Cocktail n while d bar tender(BT) is very tired of repeated orders he gives her cocktail n Maan gets her fruit punch. Both drink it n leave. Maan after drinking notices dat it was fruit punch n asks where is my drink cocktail kaha hai? He gets angry n breaks d glass... He den searches 4 d lady wid whom his drink got exchanged!!

By the tym Aman cums der n 
Aman: hey maaan!! finally 2 aa gaya na??  Yaar hws u?
Maan looked up 2 c a beautiful gal in a sexy sleeveless red outfit that reachers jst above her knees.(imagine d 1 Geet wore 2 seduce Maan in washroom)
MAAN:Ya am 5ne.n stares @ her unblinkingly n she too stares @ him.. By then d group had cum der n found her Aman too was der n starts to speak n breaks d ice. (silence b/w dem)
Aman: tum dono yaha kya kr rahe ho?? 
Geet: Aman vo mein (pause.) pyaas lagi thi toh drink lene aayi thi
Maan: you knw me dude!! i too gt 2 get a drink so am here...(blood is oozing out of Maan's hand)
Geet asks aman 2 get her bag n he gets it 4 her. She immediately takes out d 1st aid n cleans d wound n den bandages it wid d gauze properly. The group members watch it in silence... while Maan is stunned @ her quick action n perfection of her task..
Aman brreaks d silence: 
Aman: Acha i got u guys... btw Maan this is Geet n Geet...
Geet: I knw d Maan Singh Khurana!! bahut suna tha aaj dekh bhi liya... 
 she leaves d place @ once in a hurry... (wid a different expression: as if avoiding d ppl n d crowd arnd her) While d other members carry on knowing Geet very well.
BT: Oh woh mene vo madam ko dii... sorry abhi naya banata hu aao k liye ... Maan looks 4 her Geet is not seen 
Maan says kaun vo ladki jo mujhe bandage laga rahi thi, vo geet hai?? Maan remembers hw their drinks exchanged n she got full talli n looking @ him wid mixed emotions of lust, attraction n liking...
Maan informs Aman dat he g2go n follows Geet. He follows her car n on reaching der helps her by supporting her n taking her till her flat's doorstep...
He calls Aman & tells wat happ n dat he has let her @ hr place n u guys cum n c her if shez 5ne. hE SEE'S A NOTEPAD N PEN N WRITES A NOTE:
DEAR GEET,
WEN U GET UP U'LL HAV SEVERE HEADACHE
PLZ DRINK D NIMBUPANI DATZ KEPT HERE...
THANK U
REGARDS,
UR FRND
Edited by maneetmayur - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Poor geet has drunk the cocktail now
Posted: 12 years ago
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Edited by maneetmayur - 12 years ago

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