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IPKKND SS: Tujhe Bhula Diya Last Part Pg 39 (Page 41)

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Posted: 21 January 2012 at 7:02am | IP Logged
Totally besharam and behooda update...hehe...don't take it seriously..actually they are my loving languages...nice ending but it is your goodluck that mods have spared you...such writing are not allowed on IF...you needed to do it using allegorical language sweetheart..
I personally liked the story...hehe...sorry for the free advice...

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Posted: 21 January 2012 at 7:56am | IP Logged
awsome endingSmileSmile...loved it

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Posted: 21 January 2012 at 8:16am | IP Logged
gr8 update...Clap

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Posted: 21 January 2012 at 8:31am | IP Logged
OMG LOVE THISS !!

ufft hotness !! xx

love them both and i'm going to miss reading this,,, last chapter :'( Cry

thank you soo much 4 the pm

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Posted: 21 January 2012 at 8:35am | IP Logged
Perfect ending!

Great job!

Thanks for the PM. Can't wait to more of your other stories. I love your writing style.

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Posted: 21 January 2012 at 8:59am | IP Logged
oh my god strawberry and whipped cream

ity was hot hotter and hottest at the end
oh my god i really need a milkshake to cool me down

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Posted: 21 January 2012 at 10:38am | IP Logged
poor you ,you have been corrupted lol welcome to the dark side love it strawberry and whip cream very nice always loved that fruit even better with whip cream and those who like even sweeter melted chocolate awesome update hot loved it thanks for the pm
 

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Posted: 21 January 2012 at 11:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -_-harsh42

res... :D

Haaa!!!!

I see the strawberry fever is spreading soon!!!!
Strawberry has always been the sex fruit for me!!!
Dunno how people can do it with grapes!!! Confused Confused

Anywho!! Whipped cream and licking, huh???!!!
That did the trick for me!!!

Ms. Besharam absolutely, tee-totally loved it!!!! Big smile
I bet Mrs. Besharam will like it too!!! Big smile [I mean Munchy, if you didn't know already!!]

Thanks for the PM, hun. . . . .

Will miss this one from you. . . . .  Unhappy

But I'm sure you'll give many more things to read!!

[*Ahem* Ahem * You BETTER!!* Ahem* LOL LOL LOL]


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I waited so long for you to edit your comment! But then when you didn't I eventually went to sleep Tongue

Me too! Strawberry makes sense as a sex fruit, grapes I don't know. Confused

I thought strawberries, and whipped cream popped into my head, and I was liek I know Harshi's gonna love this! So I just had to put it in there for you Embarrassed

I don't think Mrs.Besharm reads this SS, so too bad she won't get to see it Shocked I knew Ms.Besharm would enjoy it very much though LOL

Another threat? Shocked Don't worry, I shall give stories as ideas keep popping into my head, but for now I'll stick to the two incomplete ones! Big smile

Thank you for liking Harshita! You've always been a great inspiration! Star


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