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IPKKND SS: Tujhe Bhula Diya Last Part Pg 39 - Page 30

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Posted: 12 years ago
This was a very well written part. Like how Shyam's truth came out. BAM! Loved Arnav and Shyam's confrontation. Once again Payal is front and center. What a strong determined character you've made her. Wow. Khushi had a abortion. You truly understand what rape victims go through once they get pregnant. Very realistic. Awesome part 6. Loved it.

KF

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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update. But I don't want Khushi to forgive them particularly him so soon. Sigh...

KF
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update for part 8. Loved it.

Take Care,

KF
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update for part 9. Loved all the clothes you picked out. Very pretty.

KF
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update for the wedding. Wonderfully written. I loved your choice of the clothes. And thanks for explaining what a paranda is. Never would have figured it out;) Thanks. Great story, enjoyed reading it. 
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update with the reception. Loved the choice of gowns. All were so beautiful. Wonderful writing.

Take Care,

KF
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great ending. The birth was a great way to bring this story to a close. Great job!

KF
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsum endin...
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bt...it got over...😭😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
lol...this was the first time that i read ur story,,,and i read from start to finish without ne breaks...and trust me it was just mind blowing...loved everything bout t...and ur comments were also v funny...pls do pm me with oda updates...n gud luck for the future..URE ALSO ONE IN A MILLION.xxx
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Posted: 12 years ago

I read your whole SS in one go and I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Your an amazing writer.  I usually write short comments but still write them to show appreciation for the writer's hard work but you deserve a book-long comment for this amazing SS!!

Where do I start? Your writing ability was amazing!

It was too the point where in some parts of the story- tears were forming , I actually felt butterflies in my stomach, i was blushing so if someone's writing can do this to a reader than the writer deserves a big πŸ‘ and a e-hugπŸ€— because I am a book worm and a pretty harsh critic so it's like impossible to make me tear up but this was amazing!!!! I loved it sooo much!!!!!
 
I loved how you depicted Arnav's desperation and Khushi's big heart. The song sequences were very imaginable and I'm happy you gave La someone to end up with in the end. I really loved it! (if thats not like the 20th time I'm sayin it, lol!)
 
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(And must I say, the last part was very well written as well 😳)
 
PM me for future writings I buddied you (cant believe i didnt come across something of yours before this, hard to believe I dont live under a rock lol!)!!! Amazing job Amy!!!!
 
~Love Ashiqui Khurana (aka Ashu)
 
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Stupid Like button isn't working otherwise I probably would've broke it lol!
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