I read your whole SS in one go and I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Your an amazing writer. I usually write short comments but still write them to show appreciation for the writer's hard work but you deserve a book-long comment for this amazing SS!!
Where do I start? Your writing ability was amazing!
It was too the point where in some parts of the story- tears were forming , I actually felt butterflies in my stomach, i was blushing so if someone's writing can do this to a reader than the writer deserves a big π and a e-hugπ€ because I am a book worm and a pretty harsh critic so it's like impossible to make me tear up but this was amazing!!!! I loved it sooo much!!!!!
I loved how you depicted Arnav's desperation and Khushi's big heart. The song sequences were very imaginable and I'm happy you gave La someone to end up with in the end. I really loved it! (if thats not like the 20th time I'm sayin it, lol!)
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(And must I say, the last part was very well written as well π³)
PM me for future writings I buddied you (cant believe i didnt come across something of yours before this, hard to believe I dont live under a rock lol!)!!! Amazing job Amy!!!!
~Love Ashiqui Khurana (aka Ashu)
*Edit*
Stupid Like button isn't working otherwise I probably would've broke it lol!
Edited by london_doll - 12 years ago
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