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arnav "haan tumhe kya hoga..hoga toh mere hath ko.."- khushi "ap dekhiye..har jagah ap apni man marzi nahi chala sakte..koi kam karna chahta hai toh isme apko kya hai?" Feisty Girl!
- Ahaha! Arnav is so cute telling her to wait a little! Hehe! At least he got her to shush!
- …Yeah Arnav you do need take to get a hold of yourself!
- I am ROFL ha ha ha Take THAT Arnav! The whole foot fiasco! Hilarious!
- Aww Khushi is so naive she doesn't understand what he was trying to do!
- Oh man! Arnav is so hopeless at hiding his feelings with the fake phone call!- "feel nahi karte ?ya karna nahi chahte..?bhai kuch cheezen hamare bas me nahi hoti hain..chahe ap jitna unse door bhagen woh apse tez bhagkar apke samne aa kar khadi ho jati hain..". I'm really enjoying all this dialogue, very meaningful, almost like from a Karan Johar movie!
khushi "toh aise?"
he moved his face closer to hers "toh fir kaise khushi kumari gupta?"- Hey Arnav! Are you listening!? Can you teach me how to dance like that as well please….- khushi was so busy admiring him "huh??kyaa?"- arreh yeh bhi gayyi kaam se aur mein bhi gayyi kaam se! You know Chitu! I was giggling whilst reading this dancing part and my head went back laughing my head off and…surprise surprise! I banged it on the wall behind me! Chitu! Such is the effect of your story!
- and oh my that was close dancing..!! Forget Khushi I can't believe it! Arnav! You listen to me right this second! Stop teasing the poor lass!
- Haaa! She's drunk! She's drunk! She's drunk! Muahaha!
- khushi "haan hain!!ab ja yahan se" Hehehe he's her 'baifrend' !!!
- khushi was drunk and keeping her fingers on his lips said "ssshhh...kitna bolte hain ap..pure time bak bak"she said moving her hands.. Ahh this "shhh…" is Khushi's version of the 'shhh..' that Arnav said in the Nainital trip! at the 'bak bak'!
- arnav "stop throwing tantrums.aur chalo..its gonna rain .." Gah! He can be really cold hearted sometimes can't he!?
- he held his ears and went down on his knees.. Let the sweetness commence….
- khushi saw this..she saw something in his eyes which made her uncomfortable.. Tell you what! Khushi might be uncomfortable, but I am certainly enjoying this!
- OMG! ugh! Could this part get any more romantic!? Chitvan..CHItvan…CHITVAN! Where are you hiding!? I am shaking you from the shoulders! This bit is just lush More Karan Johar alert!!! This part, where they are dancing in the rain, I can totally imagine her getting all scared and going all 'mujhe dhar lag raha hai' on him! It's like that atmosphere with Sharukh and Kajol in the Gazebo scene at the Summer Camp in KKHH!
- he then kissed her shoulders..she trmbled.. Chitu! Are you sure Khushi was the only one that was trEmbling, cos you forgot to put the 'E' in trembled…. Sorry Chitu! I'm really enjoying your story and having a laugh!
- arnav "tumne suna maine kya kaha,i love u,i love u a lot..!!" YEP! I HEARD YOUU!
- "mai janta hoon ye boht filmy hai aur mera style nahi hai..par mai ye bhi janta hoon ki tum bhi boht filmy ho...so here u go..miss khushi kumari gupta.."
- khushi now came closer to him..wiped his tears.."kabhi mauka hi nahi mila..par aj keh rahe hain na..boht pyar karte hain..boht…" Totally
- khushi "apko nahi lagta woh tareeka kuch zyada hi philmy tha.."
she started laughing..
arnav "wat the??" Perfect! Perfect Dialogue jee! Ek dum Cracked me up!
Hey Chitu! I hope my comments didn't bore you too much! But I knew as soon as I started reading that this was going to be fabulous…but just how fabulous it turned out to be I wasn't expecting! It's completely bowled me over! From start to finish, consistently well written and consistently engaging! It encompassed the whole atmosphere of being on a holiday, a wet and windy mountainous region. This was 'the best rain'! It was a joy to read and I read it all in one go…hence my essay! I can't thank myself enough for telling you to write! Hehehe! I can't thank you enough for taking me up on that advice! This was honestly the best piece of writing I have read from you! The Hindi dialogue brings so much more feeling and depth into the speech, though I'm a bit slow at reading it, I've improved throughout your story! I'm glad I actually read this in one go, cos I could not have waited as patiently as everyone else for all the parts! I feel like I've just watched a movie whilst reading your story, thank you! from your dost!
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