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A TRIP TO MALAYSIA
EMAAN and ARNAV
After a few hours of long journey AR reached Malaysia.
the moment they stepped their foot on the land of beaches they felt 2 cum in an entirely new world.They got 2 see so many people completely different 4m their style.A wide variety of traditions on the WAY 2 their farm house( Malaysia is full of tourists ).They came across beautiful scenarios n busy markets of Kuala Lumpur.
Finally after a long tiring ride they arrived at the splendid farm house-just 20 min distance from the central market of Kuala Lumpur.
Stepping out of the car, their eyes captured the marvelous house.
Kids were seeing the building with their small cute little eyes a bit confused as 2 where they were??
EMAAN: mama ya???
RI: beta abhi hum yahaan rahengey hai na acha hai na
Emaan nodded n smiled flashing her dimples as her father does.
Arnav in Armaan's arms slowly got down n started walking 2wards the main door.
A woman of 40 with a charming girl of 18 yrs came 4ward n welcomed
them.They were Indian n have been in Malaysia since last 25 yrs.
Woman's name-Anita n her daughter-Saniya.
ANITA: plz welcum 2 ur home.Sir has told us abt ur arrival
AR: thank u aunty ur accent seems 2 b Indo-Malaysian??
SANIYA: very correct.my dad was a Malaysian n mom -Indian
AR: ok toh andar chalein
AN: ji bilkul
They walked inside .The interior of the house was perfect.Starting 4m the entrance 2 the living hall,proceeding 2 the dining room kitchen,guest room kids room showed the absolute architecture.
Armaan Riddhima just observed each n every part of the house while Steve-another servant took their luggage 2 their bedroom.They were astonished by the beauty of the house n the surrounding atmosphere
Inspite of an exhausted journey Arman n Ridz were not feeling tiresome.it seemed that the new country-the new place atmosphere n most imp. this house has refreshed them with a new energy.
They were enthusiastically examining the whole house.Armaan n Ridz were proud of their dad's choice.
They entered the guest room.Saniya was a perfect guide.she explained each n every part of the house with such an excitement dat the visitor is bound 2 get captured in her words n would have the desire 2 witness the whole house followed by her.
Ridz liked the jolly girl a lot.she was very cute n innocent.
They headed the stairs n were now looking happily at their kids room
They were proceeding 2wards the bedroom wen saniya took them forcibly 2 show the terrace upstairs.
Next it was their bed room- a beautiful n romantic one -luv was in the essence of the room.
SA: so did u like it??
RI: its awesum.i mean the whole house is magnificent hai na Armaan lekin pata hai mujhey phir bhi woh farm house jo tumney gift diya hai woh zyada pasand hai.ismain jo bhi kami hai woh sab hamrey ghar main perfect hai.
She looked into the sparkling eyes of Armaan.He smiled coz he knew he is the best.
The house was splendid he agreed but wat Ridz liked was known 2 him better than anyone else n dis house was their father's gift 2 them unintentionally.Yet he was excited 2 spend the next seven days of his life in this beautiful place with his luv n his angels.
He was thinking all this while ridz observed each n every part of the room.
The couches n all were very gud.(couch is not visible in the photo displayed here.
SAniya: well u guys may freshen up n have the lunch.
AR: ya sure.
Emaan n Arnav sat on the bed of their mom dad.they were still in a dilemma of the place they were.
They were used 2 their nani's house n thier very own dwelling place but this was sumthing new 2 them.
Ridz hugged Armaan out oh happiness n he hugged her back 2.
then they got fresh n after getting ready themselves as well as the kids they went 2 the dining room.
ATUL: Anjali jaldi karo na plz bahut bhook lagi hai plz ab bahar aajao.
AN: aa rahi hoon Atul just 2 min.
AT: pichley adhey ghantey se 2 min sun raha hoon.mujhey pata hai anjali tumhain ready honey main time lagta hai aur tum aur bhi zyada sundar dikhna chahti ho lekin Anjali tum already bahut pretty ho tumhain itney make up ki zaroorat nahin hai aur...
Anji came out.she was luking hot in a blue sleeveless saree.
Her figure was absolutely perfect 4 her attire.
Atul 4got 2 blink his eyes even.( thank god he didn't faint)
AN: Atul!!!! ab kya hua jabsey th chilla rahey ho chalo ab
AT: bahut khoobsurat
AT: tum Anjali u r simply awesome.
AN: ho gaya Atul ab chalein aur tum bhi bahut sweet lag rahey ho.
They walked 2 the restaurant 4 the lunch hand in hand.
Armaan Ridz were sitting wid their kids eating the delicious food prepared by Saniya's mom.Her hand had the pure Indian taste.
AR: wow aunty aap toh kitna acha Indian food bana leti hain.
Saniya's mom- thanx beta.sir ne mujhey aapkey taste k baarey main bataya tha
RI: thank u aunty.
SA: waisey Mlaysian cuisines r also excelent.u shud try them also
AR: of course hum zaroor try karengey waisey tumhain kya banaana aata hai-Indian ya Malaysian
Armaan had a question mark on his face while Ridz understood Saniya.Rids held Armaan closer n whispered
RI: stupid isey shayad khana banana nahin aata
AR: kya oh no!!!
AR: well tumhari mom kaafi acha khana bana leti hain u should take sum tips 4m her
SA: I will .
RI: toh Saniya wat do u do??
SA: I luv painting n i earn by m creations.
RI: dats very nice
AR: Arnav beta yeh khalo bahut yummy hai
ARNAV: nahin khana
Arnav smiled at the baby face of his father n opened his mouth 2 eat.
Emaan was a gud girl quietly fed by her mom.
Saniya n her mom were happy 2 see such a cute family.
AR: well aunty thanx again a lot 4 the lunch
Aunty: plz u r like my son u don't have 2 thank ur mothers in India i think
AR:V don't thank mothers abroad also.it was just dat u were so nice 2 us so i wanted 2 express my gratitude.but anyways nowonwards no thank u ok...
He smiled n so did Ridz. They den walked 2 their room 2 rest now
Kids slept in their rooms after a short pampering by their mom-dad.
Ridz laid down on he bed.she was drowsy.Armaan also lay down besides her n held her hand.
AR:So how is this surprise of dad?
RI: bahut acha par tumhain pata tha??
AR: haan us din jab papa ne bulaya tha tab yahi bataney k liye bulaya tha v just wanted 2 surprise u.
she tuk d mobile n called vijay n informed abt thier safe journey ,awesome surpise n all.Viajy was happy 2 find her conted wid saniya n her mom.
AR: ek baat bato
AR: tumney bedroom m,ain aaney k baad yeh kyun kaha ki mera surprise house zyada acha tha I mean u know
RI: kyunki jab se is ghar main hum enter huey they tum ek baar is ghar ko observe kartey phir merey face expression ko tumhain kya lagta hai sirf tumharey paas hi aklmandi hai mujhey samjhney ki??
AR: nahin basket tum toh mujhey mujhsey bhi achi tarah se samajhti ho but still i 'm happy ki tumney merey man ki baat jaan li
RI: jaisey tum hamesha mere man ki baat jaan leti ho.i luv u so much
AR: me 2.
they hugged each other n slept 4 sumtime.
they got up at abt 5.00 feeling refreshed.
ARmaan had the map guide n the places he had decided 2 visit in thse 7 days.
actually 2 visit every spot of this country min 20-30 days r needed.but being doctors they can't take such a long leave.So Armaan had decided 2 visit a few places only.
Armaan got readt n went 2 Aunty 2 ask her ab the paths n all.
Aunty informed him dat his dad had already arranged a gud driver 4 dem ho was a driver cum guide of Malaysia .
Armaan talked 2 his dad n was happy 2 have him wid him always.
Ridz was making the children ready.
Saniya n her mom left as Armaan n ridz were goin.
Armaan was talking 2 Karan wen ridz came down wid the kids.
As Armaan turned back he saw his angel cumin wid his 2 little angels. He was mesmerized by her beauty.He looked at her lovingly completely 4getting dat he ws talking 2 Karan.
KARAN on mobile:Bhaiya bhaiya r u there??
Ridz was blushing by his deep gaze.
KA: bhaiya Bahiay(louder)
Armaan came back 4m the trance
AR: haan Karan bolo.
he was still lukin at ridz
KA: kabse bula raha hoon kahaan kho gaye they
AR: kuch nahin bas aisey hi
KA: toh aaj aap log kahan ja raha hain??
AR: aaj toh hum thodey exhausted hain isliye hum Kuala Lumpur ke hi kuch places ko visit karengey
KA: ok bhabhi tayyar hui ya nahin??
AR: haan woh aa gayi woh Emaan aur Arnav ko ready kar rahi thi
KA: ab samajh main aaya
KA: ki aap baat kartey kartey achanak ruk kyun gaye they.
I'm sure meri orgeous bhabhi ne aapka hosh uda diya hoga
AR: terey paas aur koi kaam nahin hai kya bhabhi ka chamcha
KA: ach mujhey bhabhi se baat karni hai
AR: lo apney ladley dewar se baat karo
He handled the cell 2 her
RI: Karan kaisey ho ghar pe sab theek hain na.papa ka khayal rakhna aur bi se kehna ki woh meri absence main sweets ko haath laganey ki koshish bhi na karengi aur tum zyada bahar kam ghoomna.Papa aur bi akeley ho jayengey aur...
KA: bas bas bhabhi aap toh bina break ki car ki tarah shuru ho gayin ruknay ka naam hi nahin le rahi.
KA: Don't worry bhabhi i'll take care of them.haan hum sab aap logon ko miss kar rahey hain.aap se hi toh hamarey ghar ki raunak hai
RI: oh toh tumhain bhi yeh sab baatein aati hain aaj pata chala
KA: waisey bhabhi hows Malaysia.
RI: acha hai yahaan ka atmosphere kafi acha hai.the scenary is just mind -soothing.ghar tak aaney main bas itna hi jaan payi ab jab ghoomongi tab bataungi.
Ridz n Karan talked while Armaan asked driver 2 get car ready n placed the 2 kids.
He came back 2 call Ridz n saw her still on the line.
KA: bahbhi bhaiya toh aapko dekh k sab bhol gaye hongey
RI: tum aur tumharey bhaiya koi mauqa nahin chodtey mujhey tang karney ka
Armaan listened this n as her back was facing her he grabeed her by the waist sliding his arms inside her bare waist n placing his chin on shoulder he whispered
AR: acha toh phir se tang karna shuru kar detey hain.
She tingled by this sudden gesture of his .
She shivered n closed her eyes.
KA: acha hai bhabhi ki aapko ghar acha laga .Bhaiya ne toh uski kaafi tareef ki.
Armaan slowly removed lock of her making her neck bare n kissed her earlobe.
KA: toh bhabhi kab nikalna hai aapko
RI: hmm haan abhi nikalney waley hain
Armaan kissed her neck .she tried 2 release herself in vain.He tightened his grip
AR: kya hua main toh wahi kar raha hon jo tumney kaha
RI: Amraan plz.
She whispered so dat Karan cudn't hear.
but how can Armaan leave his beutiful wife n he had fum wen he troubled her these ways wen she wud b blushing as wel as getting nervous not knowing wat 2 do.
She held his hand n removed it 4m her waist.
KA: bahbhi aapko kya hau
RI: kuch na nahin
her voice quivered as he kissed her cheeks.
RI: karan ab hamein nikalna hai main baad main call karti hoon ok
KA: ok enjoy urselves haan apney pati dev ka khayal rakhiyega aisa na ho ki hot girls ko dekh k woh aapko hi bhool jayen.
RI: Shut up Karan ok bye.
She turned 2wards Armaan wid a jerk
RI: kya kar rahey ho Armaan chalna nahin hai kya aur main KAran se phone pe baat kya karney lagi tumhain toh mauqa mil hgaya aur bachon ko bhi driver k paas chod aaye tum na..
She stoped seeing the intense luv in his eyes knowing wat was in his mind.
He just luvd her wen she wud blur upon him non-stop n he wud just stare at her observing her big lexpressive eyes n red cheeks.
She lukd down nervously.
He moved 4ward n bend his face down 2 kiss her but she pushed him a little n ran 2wards the car.
AR: oye hoye in adaon ne hi hamein deewana bana diya hai.
He touched the back of his neck n hair n walked forth.
Well that's it for today.
I just thought to post the present track as it has been quite long since I did so...
I hope you guys may like these two parts..
I guess it's a big treat for you guys..
Plz do tell me about ur views regarding the farmhouse..
Kindly share your views regarding the parts as well...
I'll update past track tomorrow..
Geet,Ish,Pri,Liashna,Angledesire,Prachi,Maria n Aditi- I'e fulfilled my promise this time...
I would really be happy if get longer comments than the usual ones this time...
I'm not sending the pmz as u guys already have it as a note for the second thread...
Love u all
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Hey Aasma my Jaan..A very huge congratulations for the second thread of NSDT...See we again done it...I know I know we are just the best... I just love your writing...May you have many more threads like this...
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