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PART 56
PRESENT TRACK


I've written this part with lots of effort.So plz don't forget to tell me your views about the farmhouse..
Enjoy!!!
 At Malik Mansion

 all entered after cumin 4m ridzy's maayka

 AR: Padman ma khana kafi acha bana leti hain hi na Dad
 VI: haan beta i think meri beti bilkul unpar hi gayi hai
 Ridz smiled
 KA: bhaiya bhabhi aunty se bhi acha cuk karti hain
 AR: haan
 BI: oye Ammy tu y se yeh bata itna sab a se akeley p se plan kar liya
Armaan bit his toungue n Ridz escaped saying dat she is goin 2 make the kids sleep.
 AR: woh bi mainey bas aisey hi

 KA: Bi bhaiya second honeymoon ki tayyari pe hain aur itni jaldi dekh lijiye aapkey ladley Ammy kya kya kartey hain

 VI: tujhey bas Armaan ko pareshan karney ka mauqa milna chahiye sudhar ja.Armaan I'm really hapy yaqeen nahin ataa kabhi kabhi ki mera beta kisi ka itna khayal rakhta hai itna ki usey uskey siwa kuch yaad hi nahin ehta

 AR: aisa kuch bhi nahin hai Dad.kya main aapka khayal nahin rakhta
 VI: rakhta hai mainey aisa kab kaha aur yeh sab us pyaari si bachi ki wajah se hua hai woh meri lucky charm hai pata hai wenever she is present at the time of signing a deal dat one gives unexpected profit.aur woh bhi yeh baat janti hai.I'm proud of u Armaan ki tumney Riddhima ko chuna hai apney jeevansaathi k roop main.
 AR: thanx dad.
 KA: sachi bhaiya bhabhi har kisi ka itna khayal rkahti hain aap sahi they she takes care of everyone except herself.
 AR: haan main hon na uskey liye.
 he sighed.
 VI: acha Malaysia k tickets buk ho gaye
 AR: hmm dad.bas main bachon k baarey main soch raha tha
 RI: main bhi
 BI: tu kab aayi beta
 RI: jab kuch log merey pyaar ko care taker ka naam de rahey they.
 She lukd at Karan annoyingly

 KA: arey bhabhi i'm sorry main toh bas aisey he keh raha tha ab aap hum saka itna khayal rakhti hain so i just expressed my gratitude
 RI: jinhain hum apna maantey hain un par apna haq samajhtey hain aur gratitude express karney ki zaroorat nahin hoti
 VI: arey baap rey meri beti kai gusay main hai
 RI: papa aap bhi
 KA: plz bhabhi acah sorry ab nahin karunga ab aap plz phoolan devi wala luk mat do dar lagta hai as bhaiya said
 RI: kya main phoolan devi lagti hon tumhain Armaan
 AR: nahin nahin toh mainey kab??
 He lukd at Karan
 AR: arey yaar kyun marwa raha hai mujhey
 KAran,Bi n vijay grinned
 RI: usey kya keh rahey ho u guys r just impossible

 she stumped her foot n went in her room asking sorry 4m bi n papa

 AR: main abhi aaya
 He ran behind her hitting Karan on his back
 AR: saaley tujhey toh main baad main dekhunga

 KA: ahh bhaiya bahut tez lag gayi
 AR: kyua hua Karan zyada lag gayi sorry yaar
 Karan was touched by immediate change in his voice
 KA: I luv u bhiaya
 AR: i luv u too
 he pampered him at the place where he hit him
 KA: relax main toh bas aisey hi keh raha tha

 bi was admiring the luv of 2 kids while their dad ept smling
 Armaaan ran to his room n Vijay ,Bi n Karan talked 4 sumtime in the hall seriously..

 After around 20minutes Bi went to call Armaan as Karan went 2 sleep.
 She knocked at the door.
 inside Armaan was successful in plesing ridz n now they both had held each others faces n Armaan hit his forehead with hers slightly n rubbed his forehead on hers wen they heard the knock .
Armaan was not leaving Ridz but she pushed him n opened the door

 RI: bi sorry woh actually..
 she was cut off by Bi
 BI: haan haan main sab samajhti hoon tuney achi wali khabar li hogi mere Ammy ki .
Armaan smiled
 RI: haan bi mainey isey khoob daanta how dare he speak like that?
 BI: haan woh dikh raha hai kitna daanta tuney usey
 She hid her smile
 BI: dekh bechara daant kha key kaisa shaant hogaya hai
Armaan grinned n Ridz was smiling
 BI: Ammy tujhey bhaisahab bula rhaey hain unkey room main
 AR: ji bi
 BI: Riddhima tu aram kar theek hai
 RI: ji bi gud night
 BI: gud night
 She turned 2 go but again looked back this time with a broad smile
 BI: beti woh apni b se bindi theek kar lena p se phail gayi hai

 Ridz a bit surprised touched her 4head n blushed badly
 BI: ab itna bhi mat sharma main sab samajhti hoon.
 she laughed nw ent 2 her room
 RI: Armaan tumney mujhey bataya kyun nahin
Armaan was laughing badly
 AR: isiliye toh tumhain chod nahin raha tha lekin tumney mujhey push kar diya see the result my phoolan devi
 RI: haaa??
 she opened her mouth n took a pillow to throw at him but stopped mid-air when she was saw her dad standing at the door
. Vijay burst out in laughter n Ridz was embarassed.Sshe threw the pilow n immediately put hand on her 4head
 AR: dad aap
 VI: beta main baad main aaata hoon .wen riddhima finishes u may cum 2 my room ok
 he turned back 2 go
 RI: papa woh Armaan ja raha hai jao Armaan
 AR: haan haan dad chaliye.
 she rushed 2 the washroom blushing dep red n he tuk a sigh leaving her.

 In DAd's rom
 VI: sory beta woh tum log itni der kar rahe they toh mainey socha ki main khud hi aajaun
 AR: sorry dad woh bi se baatein karney lagey they
 VI: acha bi se haan dikh raha tha waisey do u get these doses daily??
Armaan was blushing now
 AR: nahin dad aisa kuch nahin hai
 Vijay was smiling seeing his son blushing unexpectedly
 VI: tumbhi sharma saktey ho aaj pata chala
 AR: main kab dad nahin toh
 VI: acha chalo chodo main tumharey trip k baarey main baat kar raha tha
 AR: haan dad
 VI: hotel buk kiya
 AR: ji dad
 VI: kids?? unhain yahin rehney do
 AR: nhin dad i week is much more .humein unki fikr lagi rahegi aur woh ab shaitan bhi bahut ho gaye hain aaplog pareshan ho jayengey
 VI: aisi koi baat nahin hai beta v can ake care of them
 AR: I know dad lekin itney door bachon ko chod k jaayengey toh riddhima ka dil yahin laga rahega aur mera bhi.v'll manage
 VI: mujhey pata tha
 AR: kya
 VI:yahi ki u both are  very gud parents.isliye mainey Malaysia main ek farm house abhi kuch din pehley liya tha so tum donon wahan jana aur whan ek bua rehti hain she'll take care of everything n her daughter wil take care of kids.mainey tumhain bataya taki tum beti ko surprise kar sako
 AR: dad u r the best father of this world.thanks a lot
 Vijay's eyes were overflowed wid tears
Armaan hugged him
 AR: dad kya hua??

 VI: kuch nahin beta pata hai har baap apney bachey k munh se yahi suna chata hai lekin tumhari maa k jaaney k baad tum jis tarah se mujhsey roothe the maujhey laga ki shayad mainey tumhain hamesha k liye kho diya lekin phir Riddhima aayi aur usney is boodhey insaan k andar k father ko phir se jaga diya.Paise ke peeche main itni door tak chala gaya tha ki family kya hoti hai yeh bhool hi gaya.Yeh nahin socha ki jo kcuh bhi main kama raha hoon woh apne bachon ke liye hi toh hai aur agar woh hi mere paas na rahe toh yeh shaan aur shaukat kis kaam ki.
Main toh feeling less ho gaya tha par Riddhima ne mujhey dobara jeena sikhaya.Sabsey important, usney mujhey tujhey lauta diya .Main tum donon ki zindagi khushiyon se bhar dena chahta hoon poorey jahan ki khushi tum donon ko mil jaye bas meri yahi dua hai.

 AR: dad i luv u n i'm sorry 4 alll wat happened.hum hamari zindagi main ab sirf khushiyan layengey jismain hum sab hongey hai na dad?

 VI: hm beta
 They huggde again n cleaned each others tears.
 VI: acha ab jaa aur rulayega kya??kal shaam ki flight ha na tumhari
 AR: ji dad
 VI: jao packin karney main meri beti ki madat karo bechari akeley kitna kaam karegi
 AR: ji dad

 He smiled n was goin back
 VI: haan riddhima se kehna ki ab aur na maregi aur tu bhi usey tang mat karna
Armaan shaked his head n went ahead.

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 It was obvious.
 He found ridzy packing n she had almost finshed.He wondered how quickly she could do it.
 AR: tumney saari packin akeley kar daali
 RI: hmmm
 AR: abhi bhi gusa ho?
 RI: nahin baba lekin aaj main kitna embarass hui kahir yeh batao hum achon ko le jarahey hai na?
 AR: ofcourse.
 She came n hugged him excitedly gave a peck on his cheeks.
 RI: main bachon ki packin karti hoon yeh complte ho gayi dekh lo if u ned anything else.

 She rushed to her angels room.
Armaan smiled seeing her excitement and murmured to himself..
 AR: I'm crazy abt her .
 He went n checked the bags .He put a few extra things n slept.
 He didn't know when Ridz came back n settled herself on his arms n one arm round his stomach n slept.
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Next morning,

 at the brkfast table

 Ridz was serving wen

 Bi was lukin at Armaan his hands n all carefully.
 no one cud make out wat she was doin.
 AR: bi aap kya kar rahi hain bahut bhookh lagi hai nashta kariye na
 BI: tu chup kar
 she againg observed his arms .

 RI: Di kya kar rahi hain aaap ? kya hua??

 BI: mujhey u se udti udti khabar mili hai ki tu merey Ammy ko maar rahi thi kal
 Ridz was flabbergasted.
 Karan raised his ears.
 KA: kya kaha bi aapney??
 AR: abey kuch nahin yar bi aap bhi na
 KA: mainey kaha tha na bhaiya aap bilkul sahi ho meri bahbhi sach main phoolan devi ho gayi hain
 RIdz was in a shock.
 she was a bit irritated also.
 Vijay malik smiled n said
 VI: arey beta chup kar dekh apni bhabhi ka chehra kaisa o gaya hai .
 then he narrated the whole incident.
 Karan stopped eating n hed his stomach as he burst out wid laughter.
 K: oh toh yeh baat thi haa haah haaa
 AR: tu chup karega ya nahin
 BI: riddhima tu aisey roz karti hai
 RI: nahin bi woh main toh bas main woh pani laati hoon .
 she ran 2 the kitchen.
 AR:kya papa aap bhi Karan blkul aap pey gaya hai
 vI: arey hum toh bas mazak kar rahey they.
 AR: mazak ab pata hai woh ro rahi hogi
 BI: aye paagal mat ban woh r se royegi kyun
 AR: chaliye abhi pata chal jayega.
 they stud up n found the whole gang at the door who thought 2 meet them b4 heading 4 Sanjeevani.
 all were smilin seeing poor Armaan who understud thier grins.
 AR: inhi ki kami thi
 AN:haan hum toh tumhain happy journey wish karney aaye they aur yahan toh!!!
 AR: kahan phas gaya main.
 he went 2 the kitchen quietly n rest were abt 2 follow him wen vijay stopped them.
 He sent Karan 4 sumthing out.

 in the kitchen
ARmaan found ridz sobbing as usual.
 she had not changed she wud hurt hersef even if she might have thought dat her act wud have hurtde others.
Armaan cleaned her tears n said
 AR: ba kya hua sab mazak kar rahey they jaaan
 RI: hmm (sob) par sab kya soch rahey hongey ki main tumhain roz pillow se marti hoon aur tumhain aisey treat karti hoon
 AR: Riddhima chill aisa kuch bhi nahin hai sab jantey hain ki agar is qaynat main koi mera khayal rakh sakta hai toh woh tum ho
 RI: lekin Arman papa bi sab log tumhain aisey dekh rahey they jaisey mainey tumhain pata nahin kya kar diya ho
 he smiled at her innocence
 AR: pagli woh log achi acting kar letey hain sab tumhari tarah saaf dil k thodi hotey hain .believe me they just wnted 2 tease us ok
 He held her arms.
 Ridz removed his arms n turned around facing her back
 RI: nahin Armaan tum nahin ssmjh rahey tum mujhey achey se samajhtey ho baqi sab thodi itney achey se jantey hain.pillow hrow karney main bhi mera pyaar tha yeh koi nahin samjh sakta siwaye tumharey

 AR: Riddhima
 RI Armaan plz mujhey thodi der k liye akela chod do plz
 AR: par

 He desperately turned back n went out wid a sad face.
 all were expecting ridz wid him but got surprised n undestud his pale face.

 VI: tujhey kuch nahin aata ab dekh main apni beti ko kaisey mana k laata hoon.
 Karan handled him the packet n Vijay went in

Armaan: hmm dad ko lagta hai ki jo kaam main nahin kar saka woh yeh kar lengey he doesn't know basket ko cheer up karna aasan kaam nahin
 In the kitchen
 VI: hmm toh koi naraz hai bahut gussa
 RI: nahin papa chotey badon se nraz thodi ho saktey hain.
 VI: main ajnta tha beti v just wanted 2 tease Armaan -usey joru ka ghulam banaey ki koshish kar rahey they par gussa tum ho gayi ulta ho gaya sab.hum jantey hain u take care of him the most.hum sirf mazak kar rahey they don't b serious.
 she smiled this time a genuine won
 VI: dats like my daughter.ab is smile se merey ghar main roshni hui hai warna toh sab jagah andhera lag raha tha
 RI: papa
 she hugged him
 RI: u 2 have a gud sense of humour.
 VI: acha ab yeh tumhari is pyaari si muskurahet k liye
 RIdz opned the packet n chuckled like a kid 2 find her fav chocolate ice cream n a teddy bear.
 she ate it happily sharing it wid her father n came out happily

 All were astonished 2 see ridz's delighted face
 AR:dada aapney yeh kaisey kiya??
 He told all things n all smiled n talked 4 sumtime wid sweet little topics n gang left.

 In the eve
Armaan ridz boarded 2 Malaysia in the evning takin the blessings of both the families.
 intern gang cud also bd them gud bye.Niki gave ridz a locket 2 remember her there in Malaysia

 While Armaan-riddhima wid their kids flew away 2 Malaysia the next morning Anji n atul went 2 singapore-their honeymoon.

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PART 57
A TRIP TO MALAYSIA
OF
  ARMAAN-RIDDHIMA WITH
EMAAN and ARNAV


 After a few hours of long journey AR reached Malaysia.
  the moment they stepped their foot on the land of beaches they felt 2 cum in an entirely new world.They got 2 see so many people completely different 4m their style.A wide variety of traditions on the WAY 2 their farm house( Malaysia is full of tourists ).They came across beautiful scenarios n busy markets of Kuala Lumpur.
 Finally after a long tiring ride they arrived at the splendid farm house-just 20 min distance from the central market of Kuala Lumpur.


  Stepping out of the car, their eyes captured the marvelous house.
 Kids were seeing the building with their small cute little eyes a bit confused as 2 where they were??
 EMAAN: mama ya???
 RI: beta abhi hum yahaan rahengey hai na acha hai na
 Emaan nodded n smiled flashing her dimples as her father does.
 Arnav in Armaan's arms slowly got down n started walking 2wards the main door.



  A woman of 40 with a charming girl of 18 yrs came 4ward n welcomed them.They were Indian n have been in Malaysia since last 25 yrs.
 Woman's name-Anita n her daughter-Saniya.
  ANITA: plz welcum 2 ur home.Sir has told us abt ur arrival
 AR: thank u aunty ur accent seems 2 b Indo-Malaysian??
 SANIYA: very correct.my dad was a Malaysian n mom -Indian
 AR: ok toh andar chalein
 AN: ji bilkul
  They walked inside .The interior of the house was perfect.Starting 4m the entrance 2 the living hall,proceeding 2 the dining room kitchen,guest room kids room showed the absolute architecture.

Armaan Riddhima just observed each n every part of the house while Steve-another servant took their luggage 2 their bedroom.They were astonished by the beauty of the house n the surrounding atmosphere

Inspite of an exhausted journey Arman n Ridz were not feeling tiresome.it seemed that the new country-the new place atmosphere n most imp. this house has refreshed them with a new energy.
  They were enthusiastically examining the whole house.Armaan n Ridz were proud of their dad's choice.
 They entered the guest room.Saniya was a perfect guide.she explained each n every part of the house with such an excitement dat the visitor is bound 2 get captured in her words n would have the desire 2 witness the whole house followed by her.
 Ridz liked the jolly girl a lot.she was very cute n innocent.

They headed the stairs n were now looking happily at their kids room




They were proceeding 2wards the bedroom wen saniya took them forcibly 2 show the terrace upstairs.
 




 Next it was their bed room- a beautiful n romantic one -luv was in the essence of the room.


  Saniya smiled
 SA: so did u like it??
 RI: its awesum.i mean the whole house is magnificent hai na Armaan lekin pata hai mujhey phir bhi woh farm house jo tumney gift diya hai woh zyada pasand hai.ismain jo bhi kami hai woh sab hamrey ghar main perfect hai.
  She looked into the sparkling eyes of Armaan.He smiled coz he knew he is the best.
  The house was splendid he agreed but wat Ridz liked was known 2 him better than anyone else n dis house was their father's gift 2 them unintentionally.Yet he was excited 2 spend the next seven days of his life in this beautiful place with his luv n his angels.
 He was thinking all this while ridz observed each n every part of the room.
 The couches n all were very gud.(couch is not visible in the photo displayed here.
  SAniya: well u guys may freshen up n have the lunch.
 AR: ya sure.
 Emaan n Arnav sat on the bed of their mom dad.they were still in a dilemma of the place they were.
 They were used 2 their nani's house n thier very own dwelling place but this was sumthing new 2 them.
 Ridz hugged Armaan out oh happiness n he hugged her back 2.
 then they got fresh n after getting ready themselves as well as the kids they went 2 the dining room.
Singapore afternoon

 ATUL: Anjali jaldi karo na plz bahut bhook lagi hai plz ab bahar aajao.
 AN: aa rahi hoon Atul just 2 min.
 AT: pichley adhey ghantey se 2 min sun raha hoon.mujhey pata hai anjali tumhain ready honey main time lagta hai aur tum aur bhi zyada sundar dikhna chahti ho lekin Anjali tum already bahut pretty ho tumhain itney make up ki zaroorat nahin hai aur...
 Anji came out.she was luking hot in a blue sleeveless saree.
 Her figure was absolutely perfect 4 her attire.
 Atul 4got 2 blink his eyes even.( thank god he didn't faint)
 AN: Atul!!!! ab kya hua jabsey th chilla rahey ho chalo ab
 AT: bahut khoobsurat
 AN: wat???
 AT: tum Anjali u r simply awesome.
 AN: ho gaya Atul ab chalein aur tum bhi bahut sweet lag rahey ho.
 They walked 2 the restaurant 4 the lunch hand in hand.
  MALAYSIA

Armaan Ridz were sitting wid their kids eating the delicious food prepared by Saniya's mom.Her hand had the pure Indian taste.

 AR: wow aunty aap toh kitna acha Indian food bana leti hain.
 Saniya's mom- thanx beta.sir ne mujhey aapkey taste k baarey main bataya tha
 RI: thank u aunty.
 SA: waisey Mlaysian cuisines r also excelent.u shud try them also
 AR: of course hum zaroor try karengey waisey tumhain kya banaana aata hai-Indian ya Malaysian
 SA: silent
Armaan had a question mark on his face while Ridz understood Saniya.Rids held Armaan closer n whispered
 RI: stupid isey shayad khana banana nahin aata
 AR: kya oh no!!!
  SA: hmm
 AR: well tumhari mom kaafi acha khana bana leti hain u should take sum tips 4m her
 SA: I will .
 RI: toh Saniya wat do u do??
 SA: I luv painting n i earn by m creations.
 RI: dats very nice
 AR: Arnav beta yeh khalo bahut yummy hai
 ARNAV: nahin khana
 AR: plz
 Arnav smiled at the baby face of his father n opened his mouth 2 eat.
 Emaan was a gud girl quietly fed by her mom.
 Saniya n her mom were happy 2 see such a cute family.
 AR: well aunty thanx again a lot 4 the lunch
 Aunty: plz u r like my son u don't have 2 thank ur mothers in India i think
 AR:V don't thank mothers abroad also.it was just dat u were so nice 2 us so i wanted 2 express my gratitude.but anyways nowonwards no thank u ok...
 He smiled n so did Ridz.  They den walked 2 their room 2 rest now
  Kids slept in their rooms after a short pampering by their mom-dad.
  AR-room
 Ridz laid down on he bed.she was drowsy.Armaan also lay down besides her n held her hand.
 AR:So how is this surprise of dad?
 RI: bahut acha par tumhain pata tha??
 AR: haan us din jab papa ne bulaya tha tab yahi bataney k liye bulaya tha v just wanted 2 surprise u.
 RI: hmm.
 she tuk d mobile n called vijay n informed abt thier safe journey ,awesome surpise n all.Viajy was happy 2 find her conted wid saniya n her mom.

 AR: ek baat bato
 RI: haan
 AR: tumney bedroom m,ain aaney k baad yeh kyun kaha ki mera surprise house zyada acha tha I mean u know
 RI: kyunki jab se is ghar main hum enter huey they tum ek baar is ghar ko observe kartey phir merey face expression ko tumhain kya lagta hai sirf tumharey paas hi aklmandi hai mujhey samjhney ki??
 AR: nahin basket tum toh mujhey mujhsey bhi achi tarah se samajhti ho but still i 'm happy ki tumney merey man ki baat jaan li
 RI: jaisey tum hamesha mere man ki baat jaan leti ho.i luv u so much
 AR: me 2.
 they hugged each other n slept 4 sumtime.
 they got up at abt 5.00 feeling refreshed.
ARmaan had the map guide n the places he had decided 2 visit in thse 7 days.
 actually 2 visit every spot of this country min 20-30 days r needed.but being doctors they can't take such a long leave.So Armaan had decided 2 visit a few places only.
Armaan got readt n went 2 Aunty 2 ask her ab the paths n all.
 Aunty informed him dat his dad had already arranged a gud driver 4 dem ho was a driver cum guide of Malaysia .
Armaan talked 2 his dad n was happy 2 have him wid him always.
 Ridz was making the children ready.
  Saniya n her mom left as Armaan n ridz were goin.
Armaan was talking 2 Karan wen ridz came down wid the kids.
 As Armaan turned back he saw his angel cumin wid his 2 little angels. He was mesmerized by her beauty.He looked at her lovingly completely 4getting dat he ws talking 2 Karan.
 KARAN on mobile:Bhaiya bhaiya r u there??
 Ridz was blushing by his deep gaze.
 KA: bhaiya Bahiay(louder)
Armaan came back 4m the trance
 AR: haan Karan bolo.
 he was still lukin at ridz
 KA: kabse bula raha hoon kahaan kho gaye they
 AR: kuch nahin bas aisey hi
 KA: toh aaj aap log kahan ja raha hain??
 AR: aaj toh hum thodey exhausted hain isliye hum Kuala Lumpur ke hi kuch places ko visit karengey
 KA: ok bhabhi tayyar hui ya nahin??
 AR: haan woh aa gayi woh Emaan aur Arnav ko ready kar rahi thi
 KA: ab samajh main aaya
 AR: kya??
 KA: ki aap baat kartey kartey achanak ruk kyun gaye they.
 I'm sure meri orgeous bhabhi ne aapka hosh uda diya hoga
 AR: terey paas aur koi kaam nahin hai kya bhabhi ka chamcha
 KA: ach mujhey bhabhi se baat karni hai

 AR: lo apney ladley dewar se baat karo
 He handled the cell 2 her
 RI: Karan kaisey ho ghar pe sab theek hain na.papa ka khayal rakhna aur bi se kehna ki woh meri absence main sweets ko haath laganey ki koshish bhi na karengi aur tum zyada bahar kam ghoomna.Papa aur bi akeley ho jayengey aur...
 KA: bas bas bhabhi aap toh bina break ki car ki tarah shuru ho gayin ruknay ka naam hi nahin le rahi.
 RI: sorry
 KA: Don't worry bhabhi i'll take care of them.haan hum sab aap logon ko miss kar rahey hain.aap se hi toh hamarey ghar ki raunak hai
 RI: oh toh tumhain bhi yeh sab baatein aati hain aaj pata chala
 KA: waisey bhabhi hows Malaysia.
 RI: acha hai yahaan ka atmosphere kafi acha hai.the scenary is just mind -soothing.ghar tak aaney main bas itna hi jaan payi ab jab ghoomongi tab bataungi.
 Ridz n Karan talked while Armaan asked driver 2 get car ready n placed the 2 kids.
 He came back 2 call Ridz n saw her still on the line.
 KA: bahbhi bhaiya toh aapko dekh k sab bhol gaye hongey
 RI: tum aur tumharey bhaiya koi mauqa nahin chodtey mujhey tang karney ka
Armaan listened this n as her back was facing her he grabeed her by the waist sliding his arms inside her bare waist n placing his chin on shoulder he whispered
 AR: acha toh phir se tang karna shuru kar detey hain.
 She tingled by this sudden gesture of his .
She shivered n closed her eyes.
 KA: acha hai bhabhi ki aapko ghar acha laga .Bhaiya ne toh uski kaafi tareef ki.
 RI: hmm
Armaan slowly removed lock of her making her neck bare n kissed her earlobe.
 KA: toh bhabhi kab nikalna hai aapko
 RI: hmm haan abhi nikalney waley hain
Armaan kissed her neck .she tried 2 release herself in vain.He tightened his grip
 AR: kya hua main toh wahi kar raha hon jo tumney kaha
 RI: Amraan plz.
 She whispered so dat Karan cudn't hear.
 but how can Armaan leave his beutiful wife n he had fum wen he troubled her these ways wen she wud b blushing as wel as getting nervous not knowing wat 2 do.
 She held his hand n removed it 4m her waist.
 KA: bahbhi aapko kya hau
 RI: kuch na nahin
 her voice quivered as he kissed her cheeks.
 RI: karan ab hamein nikalna hai main baad main call karti hoon ok
 KA: ok enjoy urselves haan apney pati dev ka khayal rakhiyega aisa na ho ki hot girls ko dekh k woh aapko hi bhool jayen.
 RI: Shut up Karan ok bye.
 She turned 2wards Armaan wid a jerk
 RI: kya kar rahey ho Armaan chalna nahin hai kya aur main KAran se phone pe baat kya karney lagi tumhain toh mauqa mil hgaya aur bachon ko bhi driver k paas chod aaye tum na..
 She stoped seeing the intense luv in his eyes knowing wat was in his mind.
 He just luvd her wen she wud blur upon him non-stop n he wud just stare at her observing her big lexpressive eyes n red cheeks.
 She lukd down nervously.
 He moved 4ward n bend his face down 2 kiss her but she pushed him a little n ran 2wards the car.
 AR: oye hoye in adaon ne hi hamein deewana bana diya hai.
 He touched the back of his neck n hair n walked forth.
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Well that's it for today.
I just thought to post the present track as it has been quite long since I did so...
I hope you guys may like these two parts..

I guess it's a big treat for you guys..

Plz do tell me about ur views regarding the farmhouse..


Kindly share your views regarding the parts as well...
I'll update past track tomorrow..
Geet,Ish,Pri,Liashna,Angledesire,Prachi,Maria n Aditi- I'e fulfilled my promise this time...
I would really be happy if get longer comments than the usual ones this time...
I'm not sending the pmz as u guys already have it as  a note for the second thread...
Love u all
Take care!!



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eagerly waiting for the update!!!!!!!!


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Awesome update, loved it to the core. Loved their family bonding so much. Loved AR a lot. You wrote this part so well. Eagerly waiting to read more AR Romance.
Update next part super soon.
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Hey Aasma my Jaan..A very huge congratulations for the second thread of NSDT...See we again done it...I know I know we are just the best... I just love your writing...May you have many more threads like this...

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Woww just love both the chapters the core...Awwiieee everyone is teasing Ridzy...but love the way Armaan's father pampered Ridzy...so finally AR went to their second honeymoon...Atul-Anjali moments are also treat to read...love to read more...The farm house is so beautiful...the way you describe each and everything..just loved it. And what can I say about Emaan and Arnav...they are uber cute...just like their Dad...waiting for more to read so do continue soon...take care

 

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