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here comes my update guys... UPDATE -3
IN ROOM
Priya and ram returned to room .priya is thinking what all happened that day and blushing hard. Ram also felt good for all happened.
R: (n clears his throath ) tum change kar ke ajana baada mein change kar letha hu..when priya move toward change room ram phone rings . seeing the caller ram got shocked and disconnects the call and switch of his phone.
P: ( priya comes out and see tensed ram , ) Mr. kapoor kya hua aap itna tensed kyu hai?
R:( im glad ur my wife priya u reads my mind, u know when im in trouble . ) kuch nahi priya I am ok am not tensed and skips to look at priya and leaves the place.
in the room priya stand and sees the flowers he gave her and how special he made her feel that day. By the time she still enjoys her feeling ram comes out and stare at priya and thinks , ""chahe kuch bhi ho jaye priya mein tume nahi chod saktha. Tum mera jindagi ho..'" at that time priya comes and snaps in front breaking him from his thoughts
P': M.r kapoor kaha ko gaye aap.?? Bahut dher hogayi ab so jayiye
warna app ka tablets ka silsila suru
hojatha hai.." and starts laughing
.
R: haan mein tablet kapoor hu na. tike
ab mrs . tablet kapoor tablets ki
kilaf hai tho mein kya karoo. Gud nite mrs. Tablet kapoor.
Ram forgets about apeksha 's and he felt lost in priyas smile and enjoy 's her taunting'
Priya
sit on bed beside ram and blushes.. she thinks that day
is special to her.. thinks of what all happened that day''.
Priya
looks at ram ' and think ""once I hated u the most. But nw I feel good in ur proximity.. aap bahut ache hai par . yek bath mujhe accha nahi lagtjhi ' aap baar baar kyu bolthe hai humara shadi samjothai hai'
yeah galth baath
hai . mujhe acha laga aap
apne dil ki itna kareeb baath mujh se
share ki..aap apani baba ko miss
bahut miss karte ho na .. koi baath nahi
papa humara bacha banke aah sakthe'(and bite her tounge in a oops expression!!...)hmm !! humara baccha !!! am a
stuiped as u say it always "
don't get me wrong '''humare beech mein kuch nahi ho saktha" Mrs priya ram
kapoor its ur husband hai koi aur nahi'.
Mr. kapoor
aap humari risthe ko yek mauka nahi de sakthe hai kya.. humara samjotha ki aage kuch nahi ho sakthe hai kya ???app keliye.. aaj aap meri
dosth jo bangaye par mujhe dar laghtha hai ki humari dosthi ko kisi ka nazar na lage.
Mujhe nahi
patha ki mein aap ki saath
aage badpavogi ya nahi par
app ka closness acha laga
.. mein aap k o batha nahi sakthe par
aap mujhe bauth achethe hai' patha nahi
mein aap ka jindagi mein kya hu''' she
sees ram in confused expression' priya ab tho so jaa bahut dher hogayi.
When she adjust her side of bed and get into the blanket (in a position each face their backs) .. priya still feeling special and after some time she hears ram taliing in sleep.she Mr. Kapoor'. But ram dint wake up.. instead he turned towards priya and sleeps''
P: inne
hua kya ajj bahut azeed b hai .. ab
itna tand lag raha hai yeah
meri polar bear lo ac ke bina
pasina ajath HAI 
Priya feels cold .. but manages to sleep like that as she do not want to disturb him'.
After a
while she hear's
ram in sleep " mein priya ko nahi chod saktha " mera biwi ha wo" she caresses
ram head and say "Im
with u and never will I leave u
Mr. kapoor'" then after a while when
ram start snoring she
returned back to her position
facicing back to ram . suddenly he takes his arm around her waist .. priya is out of words when she turned around and found ram very close to her
and that too his hand is around
her''''''
She felt good as in response
'.. she holds his hand so tight .. and sleep ..
NEXT DAY MORNING
Ram wakes up early than priya and notice his arm around her waist
R: oh my god !! mein ne
yeah kya kia' priya kya sochegi
mere bare mein'
..!!!!( and try to remove his hand from her and found
priya holding it tight'.)
arey yeah kya madam
mera haath itna joor se pakada kar rakha!!!(slowly removes
his hand out of priyas
grip .. he found something in
his hands ' it was therir
engagement ring .. ram recollect the
scene
smile curl on his face
R: yeah ring '.oh' !! priya ko yeah ring loose hogaye and see the threads in the ring'' he take out the ring with him and leave to freshnup'
By the time he come out he found priya still sleeping he looks at her and take out the ring from his kurtha and see'' smiles and leave to the living room'. Priya sleep so long after finishing his work ram came back to see priya . he tries to wake her up and found she is sick he immediately cals the doctors there available .
R: priya
.
priya utna yar tume kya huah
!!! worried ram makes her awake and help her to sit on bed..
P: good mrng
Mr. kapoor
R:
yeah kya hai priya .. tume
apna khal rakna chahi ye na .. (
she
sneezes at that time) sab mera galti
thimein ne tume raath ko itna
tand mein beech pe legaye.. sorry priya '
P: yeah kya baath hai mein tik hu shayad toda zada tak gaye hoga tho neendh nahi kuli ab tak ' ismein yeah kaunsi bath hai ''. She holds his hands kal aap ne mujhe trouble nahi ki.. sach mein .. par mujhe acha laga..
R:
mein doctor ko bulaya chup chap yaha beto doctor aata hoga.. (by the time
4 doctors come s and
check priya .. ram sit beside her.. holding her hand' they treat her and giving prescription and went off..)
P: plz Mr. kapoor yeah sab kya hai . I told u na I am tired that's it mujhe kuch nahi hua aap itna seriously kyu le raha hai..
R: acha abhi abhi tume cheeki agaye ' tume bhukar hai chup chap dawayi khao and take rest,.. mein daljeeth aur kuljeeth ko batha raha hu aaj hum kahi nahi jayengi..
P:
irritated plz mr. kapoor
mujhe itna care adath
najhi hai aur waise
bhi ''
kuch nahi ( aBits her lower lip and smiles naughtly)
R: ( moving away from bed )
Kya???
P:
agar aap mujhe itna swwetly behave kiya tho mujhe pakka
diabetes ho jayega. And smile
R:
grin '.
Iss halth mein bhi
tumara tane kabhi katham nahi hoga na..
fresh ho jao break fast order kar
letha hu.. ha yaad rakna pura din
aaram karna k ( and leave the place ) '
By evening priya feels better. And ram abit relaxed
R: priya tum tik ho na kuljeeth tumari paas ruk jathi hai tume company milega ,,.. humme toda kaam hai hum bahar jah ke ata hu '
Ram aur daljeeth leave.. kuljeeth gives priya company.. ram and daljeeth return and they both leave ram and priya waving bye'
P: pur
din yeah rum mein bhait kar bore hogayi
mein jaa na neeche kuli hawa mein jathe hai mujhe toda acha lagtha hai
R: nahi
priya ' bahar
bahut tand hai tum kahi nahi jayegi
P: mein jar aha hu aap ana hai tho neeche
lawn mein ajana..
And leaves
R: calls out priya priya ' she will not mind
and leaves the place''''
to be continued
pre cap : priya finds she lost her ring .. ram teases her ...
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