FF raya.. journey of love. up 43.pg 144 (14.1.13) - Page 4

Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by swati_bhatia


lovely..continue soon



thanks
Posted: 12 years ago
just superb part plz soon update👏👏
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by viny_queen


just superb part plz soon update👏👏
thanku

Posted: 12 years ago
awesome... plz update soon  😊
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by arushisingh00


awesome... plz update soon  😊
   yup am   preparing next update

Posted: 12 years ago
it is awesome keep updating soon.
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by laduprav


it is awesome keep updating soon.
 thanku

Posted: 12 years ago

 

Update  _4

Recap

P : pura din yeah rum mein  bhait kar bore hogayi mein  jaa na neeche   kuli hawa mein  jathe hai mujhe toda acha lagtha hai

R: nahi  priya  …   bahar  bahut tand hai tum kahi nahi jayegi

P: mein jar aha hu aap ana hai tho neeche lawn mein ajana..

And leaves

R: calls out priya priya … she will not mind and leaves the place…………

Update:

R: priya….  Arey  mera baath suno … priya……..

P:  bathaya than a  ana hai tho  ahvo ..  neeche .. todi dher keliye..  lawn mein.  ( move down  saying apani  biwi  ki phikar hi nahi kartha kaisa  azeeb pati mila  ah mujhe !!!) while priya saying this apeksha listens  her

A: achha hai   ab mein priya  se  baath kar sakthi hu.. ab   deko ram  ….  Wait and wath .. tera biwi ka  trust tut ne wala hai  (and rushes down…….)

R: arey yar  yeah ladiki ka mein kya karo.. yar mein unne kuch dena chati hu  par yeah sunthi  nahi hai  .. ab karna kya  hai chalo  ram  biwi ke peeche .. ……..neeche lawn mein…………

 Priya in lawn .. thinks .. hmm kitha accha hai yeah par  kuli hawa mein  .. Mr. kapoor bhi na!!!  ( smile to her self   taking her hai to one side   fold her hands , walks slowly ..  )   bahut sweet hai….. dekthe hai   ki  The  ram Kapoor biwi ki kithna kadhar kartha hai .. . a sweet smile curl her lips..  she stand towards  a bush and  feel s some one patting  on her sholder. Shrugs in  shock and  turns back thinking its ram  but she found  apeksha ..

A: app  yeha akhele!!

P: wo mein    walk keliye….   Bas aise hi………

A: oh .. mein yeha se jar aha hai  tho socha ki app se  miloo  ..aap akhele hai shayad  company ki jaroorath hai tho mein ………

P: oh !! thanks  bus mein tik hu company ki jaroorath nahi hai .. actually I am hopping my husband to come …  but it was u ..

Did u meet ur friend??

A: no not yet he is busy ………

By the time  ram come in search  o priya calling by her name..

A: priya .. lagtha hai aap ki  pati  hai .. mein chalti hu  baad mein milthe hu.

P: arey ruko na  use milwathe hai.

Ram  came there and  apeksh facing back to ram

R: ab chalo na   tumara  tabiyath tho tik nahi hu na!!
P: arey  .. mein tik hu  by the way  yeah   isse millijeye…. Yeah ..sorry mein aap ka naam bul chukka hu   .. meine usse  hotel ki corridor mein takaragayithi maa se baath karthe waqth…

A: turns around and say  .. am apeksha nice meeting u…!!!

P: Mr. Ram Kapoor

A: extends her hand and  say Mr. ram  kapoor…

R: shocked to see her. Oh  no shee met priya finally  no….. hope she did not  say anything now………..

A: u carryon   I ll  move

P; k…. bye

P: sirf aap ko samjhmein  nahi atha hai … wo itna sweet hai na  mujhe akhela dekhe  company dene aya …

Ram thinks wo company nahi tume duk dene aya ..    deko mera biwi  koo sab  acche hai inka .. hmm!! Inka man  itna saaf hai tho  inkoelia har insane ache   hi hoga

P: kaha  hai aaap?? Snaps on his face…( ram back to senses hiding his worries.).. todi der rukiye na yeha par plzz make a puppy face   …

Looking at priya ram shares a eye lock and say yes.both start walking  … she  wish to play with the ring priya find her ring was missing .

P: tensed  !!! Mr.Kapoor…….. meri meri ring …….. ko gaye.

R: back to senses .. kya ? aise kaise??  Tuimare ungliyo mein hotha hai na…  kaise

P: ab mein kya karoo   aap apne size ki  angotiya tho liye ..  adjustment karnekabath  bhi  loose hai.. sh e starts searching in lawn…………. Worried .. priya  forgot everything and   searching  for ring..

R:  pretend to be  serious  and he also searches the ring..   tum mera diya huye anguti  ko gaye  priya  who bhi engagement wali mujhe kuch tik nahi lagraha hai..

P:  plz   mr . kapoor mujhe  darao math….

R: waise tum in sab superstitions mein believe nahi kartha  hai na   tho kaoi baath nahi ..

P: kis ne kahan app ko ..    I mean  mujhe bhi  ap shagun lag raha hai.. and sit in a  bench  holding her head ..

R: comes and  sit beside her .. hold her  hand. …   mein  aur yek anguti  kareed tha hu  ..  aur is bar  tumari size ka … says in a low voice ..

P: aap  ..nahi sam jhe ga    wo  mere liye   …..  chodiye na

R:  tumariliye……….. kya

P starts crying..  thinking  meri jindagika anmol cheez kho gaye ram  kahi mein  aap ko khona  nahi chata .. aap se judi huyi anguti   spl hai  ..  I cant  say it to u now .. aap mujhe  sirf dosth manthe hai na….aap  naya kareed saktha   par us angutiki  wajhe se  jude huye pal  wapas nahi  de sakthe.. mera  jindagi aap se jud gaye  us angutiki wajese……..

R: arey priya u knw I cant handle it  ok   yek ring tho  hai na .. mein dusra kareed lunga..  chalo   mein  uppar jake room mein dektha hu  tum yeha  tik se deko.. (thinks to give her surprise)

P: ha tik hai.. (ram leaves the place .. priya wipes her tears and searches.  Then  wen ram leaves apeksha enters………

A: Mrs priya ram kapoor ..  todi  der pehale bahut kush  ha aap .. ab  deka tho   ro raha hai ..lagtha hai aap  ka ram  aap se sach batadiya….

P: politly  aap ko mera nam  kaise patha?? Aur kaunsa sach!!!

A: oh  ram ne nahi bataya  tho  mein  batatahu  mera dosth   aap ka pati hi hai.. 

P: par jab mein  tum dono ko introduce kar waya tha  tab aap dono ne  ajanabe  jaisa  behave  kiya ..

A:  ram  ko bauth acche se janthe ho ..  jao  aap ram se  puchlijiye  humara ristha kya hai.. itna kareeb hai.. aaj  ram  mujhe milne ko inkar ki  par one day I will reach Ram .( moves off the place  leaving priya confused .. priya   tum niharika ka choice hu   par  jaha tak mein tumare bare mein suna tha… tum bahut acche insaan  bhi  samjdar ladiki Hai. Par niharika  ka choice pe  sakh karna padtha hai ..  akhir  wo tum  kyo choose kiya  tha  ram keliye..)

P got tensed  thinks as she  felt  very  supersticious abt ring and what happen  .. and apeksha 's word  ring in her ears.. repetedly..  yeah apeksha ram ka ateeth   …  par mein ram ko trust karti hu   ram muhje  nahi chod saktha….. she feel s so alone and rushes to   room  …  thinking should she ask  ram .finally wen she reach the door …………… she thinks  not to  ask ram

P:  ram  se kuch nahi puchunga ..  mein ram ka  aaj hu.. wo inka past .. ..

Opens the door and found  room is  dark and gets shivered  as she  is claustrophobic  she   call out rams  name and slowly move inside… but there was no reply…  she searches for  lights…   priya  was very panic and was about  fall  ram hold her in  his  arms

R: uto na priya mein hu na tere saath and gives water….

P: kaha ho tum aur yeah sab kya hai

R: ahh na  ! patha chal jayega….   (And takes her  to bed room … portigo where there is a tabel and two chair and dinner is served…   )

Posted: 12 years ago
nice update dear...
but i didn't like one thing real i mean serial me bhi apeksha's track and ff me bhi apeksha's track its really very torture next ff only raya no apeksha pls...this is request for all balhians
thank you
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by saisamanvi


nice update dear...
but i didn't like one thing real i mean serial me bhi apeksha's track and ff me bhi apeksha's track its really very torture next ff only raya no apeksha pls...this is request for all balhians
thank you
  ya  i am  even bugged up with  apeksha too  da   .. i wrote this  few days ago   dnt worry  ill end  apeksha too soon ...  as i  starrted writting abt her

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