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Familyz...

Angad and Prithvi and Josh are brothers...but act like they are best friendz...
Angad is the youngest, most popular, hottest, and smartest one. Prithvi is the oldest and he thinks he's the best, he thinks he likes someone yet thinks its just attraction and that its just nothing and forgets it. Josh is the middle kid, he is funny, and he thinks he is so cool, but of course he is!...

Kripa and Aaliya and Mishti are sisters...but they act like best friendz...In their family Kripa is the youngest, smart, pretty, and most popular one.Aaliya is the second oldest, cutest, and she thinks of kripa of her idol... Mishti is the oldest, and dumbest one, and is confused about what love is....(kaisa yeh pyar hai)


Anitah and Simone are cuzins...but they hate eachother...Anitah is older, she is very girly, she loves going shopping, and is pretty preppy..Simone is younger, she is pretty, cute, and trys to discover what love is...

Manek and Karthik are step brothers, they alwayz hated eachother since manek thought of Karthik's mom ditching his dad...for another guy...Manek is a person who thinks he is the best, and that no one can beat him...Karthik is a caring guy...who is seeking for love...yet cant find the girl of his dreamz...but maybe she's closer than he thinks...

Basically, none of these 10 friendz know what love is...how it feels...or anything..all they know is that they are best friendz...and no one can separate them...     

A:Angad
K:Kripa
Aa:Aaliya
P:Prithvi
S:Simone
M:Mishti
Ka:Karthik
An:Anitah
J:Josh
Ma:Manik



PART ONE!!!

Since all ten friendz went to boarding school, they lived in dorms, separated girlz from guyz...

Kripa, Mishti, Aaliya, Simone, and Anitah...all lived in one dorm...

While..Angad, Manek, Prithvi, Josh and Karthik..lived in another...

In the morning....on the last day of school!




K:yes...todayz the last day of school!!!

M:oh ya...so...during summer break r u guyz going anywhere!?

Aa:I don't know I havent thought about it yet...what about u

M:um...idk i was thinking that all of us could go somewhere together!

An:omg!that is such a great idea!!!

K:so do all of wanna go or what?!?

Everybody:::ya we do...

M:should we invite the guyz...

Aa:hm......

An:um......

Simone then came out of her sleep...and out of no where shouted

S:ya...it would be so much fun if we went together!!!

K:ya...all ten of us friendz would have so much fun on the trip...

Aa:ok...so its decided we are going somewhere...we'll talk to guyz later at school...lekin abhi I think we should get ready therez only an hour left till school startz....

All of decide to get ready...

Kripa comes out wearing..a black tube top..with jeans..

Aaliya comes out wearing..a mini skirt and a tank top

Mishti comes out with a white top, and a black skirt

Anitah comes with a cute red shirt and jeanz...

Simone comes out with a purple skirt and black shirt..

K:Are u girlz ready?!?

All of the girls go to the mirror..put on some light makeup..and walk out the door..

In the guyz dorm...

A:omg...

Ma:what yaar...go to sleep...

A:todayz the last day of school and we are going to be late...

Ka:what time is it?!

Ma:oh shit...its 7:30

J:what...!!!

Oh god..the girlz are gonna kill us..we said we would meet them outside the school at 7:30 and its already 7:30

The guyz quickly get ready...

Angad wears a hot pink top with jeans

Prithvi wears a white shirt with jeans

Manek wears a blue shirt and jeans

Josh wears a red shirt with baige slacks

Karthik wears a purple shirt and black slacks

A:chalein?!?           

Everybody says ya...

By now it is 7:50

Outside the school

K:arey..kahaan chalein gaye...

M:un logon ko to main dekhloongi

Aa:i know kitni zaroori baat karni thi aur yeh log tho aaye bhi nahin

S:lets not invite them...

An:oh-kay

Angad, Prithvi, Manek, Josh, and Karthik then walk up to them

A:hey girlz...

K:lets go girlz...

A:ey...where do u guyz think ur going?!

K:did u hear something mishti...

M:i dont think so

K:me either...lets go

J:sorry girlz..we are soooo srry

A:ya..hamein maf kar don

K:um....what do u say girlz...

Aa:we forgive u guyz..

M:we forgive u guyz...I mean guyz are alwayz late...

J:kuch boli aap?!?

M:no way!

K:oh-kay now...tht thtz all cleared up..I have to ask u guyz something

Ma:oh-kay..ask

An:do u guyz wanna come with us for a vacation..we don't know wear we're going but we're going somewhere for sure

A:lets huddle up guyz...

After the huddle..

A:oh-kay...lekin we decide where we're going...

K:oh-kay...whateva...

Ka:this is gonna be awesome...

J:this is gonna be so much fun...

K: so, i will tell my dad to book us tickets to somewhere and then we take a limo from there...(kripaz family was so rich)

M:ya...daddy can send us a limo...

Aa:go daddy!!!

Kripa callz her dad..and her dad agrees....

K:my dad said that we are going Chicago, USA...

A:omg..I alwayz wanted to go there...

Ma:me too...

The school bell rings and its time to go to class....

That was the first part...it was a very long part...lolz...

Please leave comments...If I see more comments I feel as if I have to continue...for u guyz...lolz...hope u guyz like it...next part coming soon!!!


Luv,

Trisha


Edited by iqbal_trisha25 - 11 March 2006 at 4:45pm
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Posted: 11 March 2006 at 5:14pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by Rhydima

kewl..

 

thank u...

 

luv,

trisha

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Originally posted by iqbals4ever

nice story cont soon Clap

thank u for the great comment..................................................... ................love trisha

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