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10 friends~AK fanfic~ SHOULD I CONTINUE?? (Page 24)

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Posted: 30 March 2006 at 7:31am | IP Logged
cont sooooon!!! n Angad should learn how to put the DONT NOT DISTURB sign on LOL
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Posted: 03 April 2006 at 8:33pm | IP Logged
great story! just caught up!cont soon!
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Posted: 04 April 2006 at 9:06pm | IP Logged
TODAYZ UPDATE::::

josh left the room angad turns around and doesn't see kripa
a- kripa
a- where are u ??? Confused Wink Tongue
kripa comes from the back and jumps on angad back and angad falls on the bed and kripa falls on top of him. they stare in each other eyes for like 5 min, angad put him hand around kripa waist so she wouldn't get up
k- angad leave me Embarrassed
a- no when u can fool me i can fool u     
k- angad wat if someone comes in
a- fine i'll be back
angad put kripa on the bed and goes to the door and locks it
k- angad wat r u doing
a- that way no one can come in
k- but angad
angad comes up to kripa and put him hand on her mouth
a- sshhhhhhh...
angad goes on top of her and goes close to her. angad and kripa then kiss for a long time. when suddenly someone knocked on the door
k- see i told u
a- omg i hate hotel they alway disturbe ppl ereer      
angad wennt to open the door and it was the service lady
a- yes
lady- ur breakfast is downstairs ready and it getting served
a- kk will be there
and the lady left
a- kripa get ready cause we have to go eat breakfast common
it had been 15 min
a- kripa ur taking forever the foods goona finish
k- am comming darling
kripa onpen the door and was were a cute tang top and a mine shirt
k- how do i look
angad was starting at her and couldn't take his eyes off her
a- wow kripa u look dashing
k- that i'm alway
kripa walk past angad when angad pulled her toward him
a- kripa i was thinking of skipping breakfast and staying here so we can spent time together (naughty way)
k- angad shhut up let go
they both laugh and headed down LOL                

I WAS BUSY SO I HAD KASHISH..aka KYPH05 RITE IT
THNX!
I WILL CONTINUE SOON
AND SRRY FOR THE SHORT PART!

*love trisha~
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Posted: 04 April 2006 at 9:10pm | IP Logged
nice part tisha lol LOL continue soon Big smile
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Posted: 04 April 2006 at 9:54pm | IP Logged
nice part!!!!
cont soon!!!
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Posted: 05 April 2006 at 5:04am | IP Logged
Clap continue and cont love in manny sights!!
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Posted: 05 April 2006 at 3:32pm | IP Logged
continue soon its great
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Posted: 09 April 2006 at 2:38pm | IP Logged

RECAP::

A:kuch nahin sweety!!!
K:angad batao...

A:shhhh...tum bolti bahut ho

Angad next takes the remote and puts the song from Aksar "soniye" on...its very romantic and both of them r feeling romancy...

Then angad takes kripa goes on top of her and kisses her all over her neck,slowly rising to cheeks and then her lips...now they are like in their own world when all of a sudden...

J:what the hell!

A:OMG!!!

J:what happened?!?

A:there's something called PRIVACY

J:so?!?

A:get out!!!

J:y

A:I am busy yaar!

J:oo yea..i forgot!

A:oh kayyy-sure-ur mean!

J:i am going...jeez....

TODAYZ UPDATE::

Aa:dont be so mean yaar...

J:whatever!

T:I think we should leave them too alone..

A:finaly,somebody understands me...

*Kripa blushes too the side*

M:Kya hua Kripa...

K:erm...woh kuch nahin

A:jaaoge kya!!!

EVERYBODY:going!!

Finaly everybody leaves, and angad locks the door behind them

A:hi kripa...

Kripa is very scared since angad is giving her tht killer look!

K:um..hi angad...

A:i love u so much!!!

K:i love u too!

K:Let's go to breakfast,I am hungry

Then all of a sudden the bell rings and the maid comes in

M:Sir, ur breakfast in bed

A:um..ya just put it over there...

K:awwwww..

A:Kya hua..

K:Is tht for me?!

A:no,its for me!

K:wht?!?

A:I am just kidding...eat up!

Kripa then jumps on top of Angad and starts hitting him..

Angad runs out the door..

*Keep in mind...Angad and Kripa are in their pj's.*

The lady at the front desk comes up to them..

L:erm...excuse me!

A:ya...whtz up!?

L:First of All, Why are u running in my hotel?!?
Second of All, Why are u in ur pj's...

K sayz to the lady:um...woh...bhool gayiii

A:Kripa,she doesnt know hindi!
K:bhool gayiii yaar...jeez

I WILL CONTINUE SOON ITS JUST THT I HAVE 4 OTHER FF'S TO CONTINUE!!

~**Love,Trisha**~



Edited by iqbal_trisha25 - 09 April 2006 at 2:39pm

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