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10 friends~AK fanfic~ SHOULD I CONTINUE?? (Page 23)

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omg! cont soon! so gud!
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Recap

Angad and Kripa run across the street and angad pulls kripa into a hotel.

K:angad!!! i want ice cream..

A:but I want u

K:hey...

Angad went up to the receptionist

A:reservations for mr.angad khanna please...

R:yes sir...room 786..on the top floor

A:thanks

Angad drags kripa to the room...


K:angad...what do u think ur doing..

A:nothing sweety

K:(thinking)i am scared...bt...maybe I am not!

Todays update     

Angad was in such a hurry (I wonder for wht)and forgot to close the door

Angad walks up to Kripa and kripa keeps walking backwards until she hits the wall.

Angad takes his hands and locks them into kripa's hand...now angad and kripa are staring at eachother rite in the eye..w/ passion

A:kripa

K:angad...

K:choddo mujhe

A:nahin

K:choddo!

A:nope

K:choddo choddo jao jao aate jaate haat pakda na karo!!!

Kripa then blushes away and slowly looks back at him

A:tehro tehro(wait wait) tum bhi haske aise dekha naa karo!!!

K:angad...stop!!!

A:kripa...i love u

K:uh...angad i think I know that

Then angad reaches over to kripa's lips and they kiss for about 10 minutes
when all of a sudden a lady comes up to angad...

L:Room Service?!?

A:what the crap>!>

L:Room Service?!?

A:get lost..don't u see I am busy...

K:hey lady!can i have my ice creamOuch

A:kripa!Angry

K:fine!Ouch

K:kripa then runs to the bed and pretends to go to sleep,cz angadz mad and also as the lady exits...

A:kripa...

K:Kya?!?Sone do please...

A:can I sleep w/ u?!?

K:angad... i thought u were mad

A:no i am not and i will take tht as a yes

K:whatever..

Angad sleeps next to Kripa and the next thing they know they are sound asleep>

IN THE MORNING

Kripa wakes up and she see's that she is sleeping in angad's arms...

Angad wakes up and see's ke Kripa is in his arms...

So both of them knowing ke they are in safe hands (lolz...)just talk w/ their eyes closed

A:good morning darling...

K:good morning...lekin

A:kya?!?

K:kal raat kya hua tha?!?

A:kuch nahin sweety!!!
K:angad batao...

A:shhhh...tum bolti bahut ho

Angad next takes the remote and puts the song from Aksar "soniye" on...its very romantic and both of them r feeling romancy...

Then angad takes kripa goes on top of her and kisses her all over her neck,slowly rising to cheeks and then her lips...now they are like in their own world when all of a sudden...

J:what the hell!

A:OMG!!!

J:what happened?!?

A:there's something called PRIVACY

J:so?!?

A:get out!!!

J:y

A:I am busy yaar!

J:oo yea..i forgot!

A:oh kayyy-sure-ur mean!

J:i am going...jeez..

That was another part..hope it was oh kayy...please comment

Love Trisha



Edited by iqbal_trisha25 - 27 March 2006 at 5:05pm
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Posted: 27 March 2006 at 5:23pm | IP Logged
yeahh i'm first! wait lemme read it then i'll update this post! LOL LOL-----> I JUST READ IT! ahhh i loved it! haha soooo romantic! HAHA ca-ute!!! now cont love in mannny sites!

Edited by pakigal34 - 27 March 2006 at 5:27pm
Princess_Trisha IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 27 March 2006 at 5:24pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by pakigal34

yeahh i'm first! wait lemme read it then i'll update this post! LOL LOL

hahahahehehe...lolz

LOL

LOL

LOL

u go do tht...and go online...

 

love,

trisha

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Posted: 27 March 2006 at 5:26pm | IP Logged
sooooooo good !!!! cont sooon..NOW LOL
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Posted: 27 March 2006 at 5:29pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by Desi Pride

sooooooo good !!!! cont sooon..NOW LOL
KArshma***

hehehehehe..thnx

bt i dnt think so!>>>not now!!!..i still have 4 other fanfics to continueOuch

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