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10 friends~AK fanfic~ SHOULD I CONTINUE?? (Page 18)

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omg awesum part! sry i replied soo late!! =p

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very good..jus cuaght up..cont soon Big smile
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Originally posted by girlie18

Clap gr8 part i luved it

Tonguethank u...Tongue

love,

trisha

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Originally posted by amneetkaur_24

Propz to u on that part! It was awesome! Cont. soon!

TongueTonguethank u!TongueTongue

i will continue sooon!

i will also continue Love at Many Sights..and KYPH fanfic very sooon!

love,

trisha

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Originally posted by prakriti

omg awesum part! sry i replied soo late!! =p

Tonguednt worry...u not late...and thnx for the great comment!Tongue

 

love,

trisha

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Posted: 24 March 2006 at 9:38pm | IP Logged

I HAVE SOME GOOD NEWS:::

ITS SPRING BREAK I HAVE 9 DAYZ OFF!!!

THAT MEANS I WILL CONTINUE MY FANFICS MORE OFTEN!!!

LOVE,


TRISHA

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Edited by shahidlover24 - 02 April 2006 at 4:43pm
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RECAP

K:Ek dard hai ek pyaas hai Ek ajnabi ehsaas hai Ek dard hai ek pyaas hai Ek ajnabi ehsaas hai

A-K::Laagi laagi laagi, prem dhun laagi Laagi laagi laagi, prem dhun laagi Laagi laagi laagi, prem dhun laagi Laagi laagi laagi, prem dhun laagi Laagi laagi laagi, prem dhun laagi Laagi laagi laagi, prem dhun laagi

When they are done everybody is looking at them in shock!!!

J:crap...u guyz sing good...u guyz should make an album...

Aa:ya...u guyz are great

K:thanks then she blushed and turned to the side...

Ma:u guyz have chemistry!!!

M:ya u do!

A-K:um....oh kay..!?!(they both blushed)

T:um...(trisha noticed ke kripa was feeling uncomfortable...) Its already 12:00 am....ghar chale.?!?

A:ya oh kay!

Ma:its been a long day

P:I learned a lot of thingz today

A:wht

P:Anitah not tht stupid....Angad likes Kripa and Kripa likes Angad...

A-K:::wht?!?!

P:ya...its so obvious

A-K:::it is..I mean...I don't like him/her (they both said seperatly)

P:oh kay...hmm...sure...
M:CHALEIN?!?

A-K:ya...

TODAYZ UPDATE:::

While they are walking home...(lolz..they don't have a car...) The girlz make an excuse and say tht they wanna go to the restrooms and so they head towards the bathroom while the guyz just stand there....

INSIDE THE RESTROOMS:::

Aa:yaar...mujhse aur chala nahin jaata...

K:me either...

Aa:lets have those boyz carry us...

Aa:(thinking...)hahahehhehehe....watch angad will be carrying kripa..this is gonna be hot...I am going to videotape it on my fone...

K:ya....hahahahahaha..this is gonna be fun..(kripa had no idea ke they were planning this)

T:lets go outside...now..they probably waiting for us...

Aa:nahin...first we have to make a plan...

M:oh kay...

Aa:um...I will pretend that I am tired and ke my feet hurt...

K:me..um...me will pretend ke I twisted my ankle...

M:i will just watch(mishti knew that it was aaliyah's plan_)

S:(thinking)this will be fun!!

T:(thinking)arey...kripa toh phas gayi...

An:(thinking)wht in the world is going on?!?!?

K:lets go?!?

Aa:kk

They all walk out itz very windy and everybody's hair is flying everywhere....and manek starts to talk...

Ma: u know wht I alwayz loved to do?!?

A:what?!?

Ma:sing while walking down the street...

A:we will look like bikhari's..(beggers)

Ma:just sing...

S:oh kay..whatever....I will start...

K:oh kay...(thinking...i will wait till Anitah finishes then I will start my A+acting.)

S:Agar tum mil jao Zamaana chod denge hum Agar tum mil jao Zamaana chod denge hum Agar tum mil jao Zamaana chod denge hum Tumhe paa kar zamaane bhar se rishta tod denge hum Agar tum mil jao Zamaana chod denge hum Agar tum mil jao Zamaana chod denge hum Bina tere koi dilkash Nazara hum na dekhenge Bina tere koi dilkash Nazara hum na dekhenge Tumhe na ho pasand usko Doobara hum na dekhenge Teri soorat na ho jis mein Teri soorat na ho jis mein Woh sheesha tod denge hum Agar tum mil jao Zamaana chod denge hum Tere dil mein rahenge Tujhko apna ghar bana lenge Tere dil mein rahenge Tujhko apna ghar bana lenge Tere khwabon ko gehno ki tarah Khud par sajaa lenge Kasam teri kasam Kasam teri kasam Taqdeer ka ruk mod denge hum Agar tum mil jao Zamaana chod denge hum Tumhe hum apne jism-o-jaan mein Kuch aise basaa lenge Tumhe hum apne jism-o-jaan mein Kuch aise basaa lenge Teri khushboo apni jism ki Khushboo bana lenge Khuda se bhi jo na toote Khuda se bhi jo na toote Woh rishta jod lenge hum Agar tum mil jao Zamaana chod denge hum Tumhe paa kar zamaane bhar se Rishta tod denge hum Agar tum mil jao Zamaana chod denge hum Agar tum mil jao Zamaana chod denge hum...

Simone starts looking towards Prithvi...

P:wow...simone...ur voice is so mesmerizing...

S:um...uh..thnx

K:ow!!!

A:what happened...

K:i think i broke my ankle...

P:so now wht...

S:ya..wht do u want us to do*and she starts blinking*

Kripa then falls to the ground....

K:kya dekh rahe ho...someone help...

Angad being a gentleman picks up kripa in his strong arms, and they continue to walk...

Aa:angad...

A:ya..wht?!?

Aa:gaana gaon..sing!

A:um...oh kay!

M:but the song choice is mine!!!

A:whatever...

M:oh ya..and once again Kripa u have to sing...

K:whatever...

M:sing Tere Liye-Veer Zaara.....

J:oye,hoy...yeh to veer zaara ka scene ho gaya...

P:exactly..dekho kripa in angads arms..just like preity in shahrukh's arms..

S:you guyz are made for eachother...

A:omg phirse...I wont sing if u guyz don't shut up..

P:fine..sing

A:oh kay...

Angad stares at Kripa and Kripa stares at Angad....

A:Tere liye, ham hain jiye, honton ko siye Tere liye, ham hain jiye, har aansoo piye Dil mein magar, jalte rahe, chaahat ke diye

K:Tere liye, tere liye Tere liye, ham hain jiye, har aansoo piye Tere liye, ham hain jiye, honton ko siye Dil mein magar, jalte rahe, chaahat ke diye Tere liye, tere liye

K:Aa......

A:Zindagi, le ke aayi hai, beete dinon ki kitaab -2 Ghere hain, ab hamein, yaadein be-hisaab

K:Bin poochhe, mile mujhe, kitne saare jawaab Chaaha tha kya, paaya hai kya, hamne dekhiye

A:Dil mein magar, jalte rahe, chaahat ke diye Tere liye, tere liye

K:Kya kahoon, duniya ne kiya, mujh se kaisa bair -2 Hukam tha, main jiyun, lekin tere baghair

A:Naadaan hai woh, kehte hain jo, mere liye tum ho ghair Kitne sitam, hampe sanam, logon ne kiye Dil mein magar, jalte rahe, chaahat ke diye Tere liye, tere liye

K:Tere liye, ham hain jiye, honton ko siye Tere liye, ham hain jiye, har aansoo piye Dil mein magar, jalte rahe, chaahat ke diye
A-K:Tere liye, tere liye Tere liye -4

At this point angad and kripa are looking into eachothers eyes very deeply....then Kripa's hair gets in her face (since it was so windy)Angad slowly puts his hand over kripa's face and removes the strand of hair that was bothering her....(picture veer zaara scene...)

A streak of lightening strikes,and it starts to rain very hard....

At this point, Angad and Kripa at this time have no idea of what is going on...they are just deeply staring into eachothers eyes...Angad then carry's her to the Sears Tower, which was near by leaving all of the other 9 friendz shocked....

By now, they are both soaking, yet he carries her upstairs on the sky deck, and Kripa gazes down at the city mesmerized by its beauty...Though Angad is looking at Kripa's beauty...

Finaly after all the silence Angad speaks...

A:kripa...u r so pretty,

K:um..(and blushes to the side)

A:i love u kripa...

K:she is deeply looking into angads eyes....I love u too..she says in a sweet wisper..

Angad then has no control on himself...and kisses Kripa's neck, then slowly goes to her cheeks and her lips...

Kripa just looks at angadz and cant believe whats going on...though is enjoying it

Angad then hugs kripa tightly(now picture the sindoor scene)

He then picks kripa up again and kisses her on her lips...kripa and angad are passionattly kissing and they both feel as if there is no one watching them, when really all the people on the Sears Tower are in shock...

All of the other 9 friendz, enter the Sears Tower's sky deck..

Then they all see a big crowd around some people....

All of them go and they're mouths drop open...and they are in total shock....

They see angad and kripa lip locking........

J:holy crap!

S:what the hell>>!

An:did I miss something?!?!

*this was a long part...hope u guyz liked it...please give as many comments/complaints/suggestions it really helps me Tongue Tongue Big smile *

love,
trisha

PS...i got this scene from my cuzin..hehehehehahahaha

 



Edited by iqbal_trisha25 - 26 March 2006 at 9:33pm

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