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Posted: 11 December 2011 at 7:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ainimonaya

oh sanchoo this is amazing..
awww khushi,how unfair was arnav being to her, but still i love this fact of their life...
and the way u described arnav's feeling in the end and arnav taking care of her  while feeling guilty...u made me cry almost..
hats off.cant wait 4 more yara..


Her Ainu..thanks for the lovely comment sweety!
Arnav is being Arnav, but their is a reason, you get to know the soon. And I think people like the post marriage 
I made you cry? Na bacche, love is like that na!
I am glad you liked it. Love yaEmbarrassed

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Posted: 11 December 2011 at 7:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Rozy77

 hi dear
this was awesome. loved it
very beautifully written, u sure have a way wid words
looking forward to more ArHi
 
thanks for the pm dear
continue soon
take care

Thanks Rozy for the lovely comment. I am glad you did!

Originally posted by pinkpearlz

Awesome! Esp the way u described the dream was incredible. So regardless of the dark figure arnav will be there to save her, and it has begun.

Loved your thought princess. I am glad you liked it.

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Posted: 11 December 2011 at 7:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by fallenstar

oh god.. Sanch get well soon..
dunno y wenever i read ur stories i feel as if dis is wat's gna happen in da show..Day Dreaming
ive read sooo many SS bt ur's iz da best..see told u dis iz gna b my fav..Wink
fab update hon..Hug

I wish this never happens, you will get a shock of life. Anyways, thanks for the lovely comment!
This is the best? Wow, man! love ya
Thanks again!

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Posted: 11 December 2011 at 8:09am | IP Logged
Hello dearies, me back, (because someone said soLOL). Well I had thought no more updates till Wednesday, but I am back, because I am dying to read her work. This part is specially dedicated to my thesaurus buddy Shalu (aka sharneil92) for beautifying my thread for her priceless comments. Thank you Shalu.Hug

And before you read, this is Part One of Chapter 3, I will try to update the next part soon. Thanks for the love and support. And one more thing, I am sorry, but I have school tomorrow, so will not be able to send so many pms, will do that tomorrow.
Without proof read, in a hurry, sorry if any mistakes!



                                                     2.1 Because he said so

When I woke up, finding myself in his warm arms, I jerked back, careful enough that he didn't break his slumber. I didn't dream the night before, or should I say I didn't hallucinate. I slid out of the bed, carefully taking each step, as my head was incredibly dizzy. I held the cabinets by the side as support, holding onto them or I would have collapsed. The head was heavy, I felt like I was drunken enough yesterday. If it wasn't for me, any girl would have done that, I mentally noted. I splashed the cold water on my face, still clutching the door with my arm.

I will try to make sure I didn't behave like what he expected me all along, I reminded my hopeful brain. The organs felt like they had stopped working, at the very thought that he might regret soon of what ever good he has done to me, no matter how less they were in number. It was painful, it pierced to think how he would react when he gets to know. My heart felt heavy, I wanted someone to whom I could open my heart, but I failed miserably each time to think of a name. I made my way to the living room, to find all the others, I had a strong urge to take a step back seeing the cruel face smirking at my way. I turned backwards immediately, only to be called Anjali in time. She pulled me to the kitchen, and showed me the huge frying pan. 'I know you haven't made some for ages, will you make it sugar free so that he can taste some?' I felt like being torn to pieces seeing her eyes. God has been unfair to her, more than me.

It was Sunday; I noted seeing him still drowsily flipping through the business channels, eyes half closed. He was oblivious to the fact someone might be peeping in seeing his casual self take over "ASR", else he would have shoved me off, uttering a few disgusts. I turned round again, for the second time I recalled, still planning to ask Anjali to do the job, asking him to join downstairs. Anjali winked at me, all I could do was to give her a faint smile, and knock the door timidly.

'Anjali asks you to breakfast,' I sternly said, my eyes scanning the deep patches of sun rays on the pool. 'I will be there in a minute,' he said, in his cold drawling manner before dashing out to the washroom. I fixed the bed, taking out his cloths out and laying them, smoothing my hair a bit, placing the dupatta securely. I took the bangles I had been unknowingly wearing from since the day before, I didn't feel like dressing a bit. For whom should I? I sternly thought, my face stiffening, remembering how stiff his voice comes out when he talks to me.

I came out of the room, before he came in the room, and hurriedly went into the kitchen, taking a look at the fried jalebis in the syrup. I poked my finger relishing the moist touch. After ages, I thought. Satisfied with the color, I carried the bowl to the table, placing it in the centre. 'Aaj tumhi sabko do bitiya..bohut acchi khusboo hain' I smiled.

I carefully picked the hot jalebis and placed them. My hand brushed with Shyam's, and a wide grin spread on his face. I placed the Jalebi and pinched him as hard as I could, taking the advantage of his arrival which made all face turn towards him. He flinched, quickly hiding his disgust beneath a smooth layer of glee, throwing me dirty looks, but I was already half way to the kitchen by then. He looked at me with annoyance and I controlled hard to stop the tears brimming up in my eyes, whom to tell about how I am feeling right now, trapped like this?

'Khusji Jalebi badi acchi hain, kyun Chotey?' I briefly glanced at him, and was left heart broken when he dropped his' and excusing himself.

He can go to ---, I stopped and retreated back to the couch, trying to have a descent conversation with Nani, ignoring the shitty gazes of him.

'Bitiya, apne dawai li?' she caressed my cheek, tucking the few curls behind. 'Ji Nani,' I lied bluntly , not meeting her eyes.

'Humko lagta hain ki apko thori der upar jake aram karna chahiye,' she suggested, pushing me upwards. 


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The song which fits the next part:

The whole day I spent gazing at the dark reflections on the water. I was sleepy but I was afraid to close the lashes, fearing they would be haunted once again as soon as I close them. It was a strange fear, neither could I make out the fear, nor could I get rid of it in anyway. After having done my dinner, I slowly went upto the terrace. 

I was surprised to find him dere, and I turned to leave. 'Khusi,' he murmured. I stopped, still facing away from him. I didn't see when he came and placed his arms on my shoulders, and slowly trailed to my forehead. 'You shouldn't have come you know, you have fever now.' I turned to him, his eyes where a whirlpool of emotions. I faced away, fearing my stern look I had adopted would jump off the cliff any time now. 

'Khusi,' he took a deep breath,'Listen I am sorry, I know I shouldn't have, behaved like that, when you were, ill,' he said, gazing into the black ones. My tears came running, I felt like loosing myself, at the very thought the next moment he would retreat back, or would disappear, and I find out it was all a beautiful dream.

'Shh...don't cry Khusi, I can't see them,' he brushed off the drops, cupping my face. 'Leave me,' I fought back the urge to lean onto him, and forget all my miseries. He looked at me shocked, and his hands dropped. 'And don't ever do that, you get that?' I crossed my fingers at the back, to hold on the shaking of my voice, and ran as fast as my feet allow, away from my dream, away from him. 

Even thought it wasn't a dream, I felt like my own words came back, in the real world, only heart breaks. I was afraid of loosing him, I was afraid that he would regret, and the perfect scene was short lived.


Just when it's getting good 

I slowly start to freeze 

Just when it's feeling real  I put my heart to sleep
It's the memory, I can see

Then this fear comes over me

Understand that I don't meanTo push you away from me
Why am I so afraid to crash down

And lose my heart again?I don't know, I can't see

What's come over me
Why am I so afraid to break down

And lose my mind again?I don't know, I can't see

What's come over me


Precap for the next part:

The pair of hand stroked the cheeks, and left me disbelieved. Tears rolled down, the barrier was broken. I lost to myself, and all I could do was to pray that it was one of my nightmares, which was back to haunt me again.

I turned, Anjali was standing at the door.



Will love to hear your thoughts about the precap.



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Posted: 11 December 2011 at 8:42am | IP Logged
oh no! I don't like the precap...you are worse than the CVs Angry
btw goodie update! Wink

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Posted: 11 December 2011 at 9:04am | IP Logged
DeadStarit is sad all the more sancho and the precap is clinging ang dangling my brain 
why do u always stop like this ah?????Confused
continue soon dear hope u r fine now

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Posted: 11 December 2011 at 9:28am | IP Logged
loved the update.really good.loved how nicely he is behaving with her.loved how she pinched that crap..but precap over shadowed it.plz update sooon.

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