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Saarrthi 4 Suraj~Manasvi & Arjun~Bhoomi!! (Page 9)

Shirley IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 30 March 2006 at 4:13am | IP Logged
thanx ppl...couldnt update ff's yesterday...my internet wasnt working...sorry if i make a short update...not feeling well 2day... Ouch Ouch Ouch...updating episode 15 Smile

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Posted: 30 March 2006 at 4:29am | IP Logged
Episode 15

(The next morning, Baisa calls the family members down)

bhoomi: baat kya hai baisa?
baisa: tumhare dadaji ni aapne property ke 4 naye caretakers banaye hai...aur..
arjun: caretakers..matlaab..?
baisa: matlaab..iss parivaar ki char sadysyas property ka take care karenge....
manasvi: tho..kaun hai voh caretakers...
baisa: erm...Goenka property ki caretakers hai...Arjun Goenka....Suraj Goenka...Bhoomika Goenka aur...Manasvi Goenka...

(mansen and his family r shocked)

aksh: sirf..inka parivvar kyun..humare oarivvar se koi caretaker nahin bana?
baisa: kyunki...yuvraj ni dadaji ki property ko occupy karne ki koshish kiye hai..iss liye....tum sab phar hum trust nahin kar sakte...
suraj: lekhen..baisa.....yeh...mujhse nahin hoga...
baisa: tumse ho sakta hai...
manasvi: baisa..pehle yeh kangan..abh yeh caretaker...aise tho kakasaheb aur unka parivaar humse door chala jayega...
yuvraj: natak karne ki koshish mat karo..manasvi..andhar se buhut hkush hoge...ki property ki caretaker mein ho..
suraj: yuvraj!!!! izzat ki saath bolo...varna....
yuv: varna...varna kya...?
mansen: stop it....yuvraj!!
baisa: aur kyunki yeh 4 caretakers hai...tho agar kisi ko paise ya property ki zarorrat hai..tho phir ya arjun ki signs lene honge..ya suraj ki...ya bhoomi ya phir manasvi ki...iss tarha..mansen aur uske parivaar ko koi share nahin milega..haas karke jo yuvraj karne ki koshish ke thi...

(yuvraj feels angry)

(arjun-suraj-bhoomi-manasi r upstairs)

arjun: bhaiyya...mujhe lagta hai..ki yeh faisla lekhar...hamara koi loss hoga...
suraj: matlaab?
arjun: agar..unhe fareeb ya dukhi se humare signs lene koshish kiya tho...aur bhavri tho jaldi se sign kar lethi hai...
bhoomi: arjun...mujhe lagta hai ki baisa theek faisla kiya hai...aur haan main itne jaldi se koi papers sign nahin karoge...
manasvi: haan lekhen kakasaheb iss waqt ache modd mein nahin honge....
suraj: unka mood kabhi bhi acha hota nahin hai manasvi....tum fikhar maath karo...abh dadaji ki property kaam se kaam salamat tho hai..

(mansen and his family r in their own room)

mansen: phir se siddarth aur uska parivaar humare chehra phar ek aur thappar mara...
khushal: jeeja....aap bhi na...zara tandi dimag se socho...
yuv: lekhen mamaji..uss naukarani bhoomika ko caretaker banaya aur hum kisi ko nahin?
gunvanti: yuvraj...dadaji ki property ki saath jo bhi tumne kiya..usski baad kya voh sab tumhe trust kar sakte hai...nahin...nahin kar sakte...
yuv: lekhen mom...
gunvanti: bas yuvraj..aaj thak tum sirf zidd karte aye hoo...lekhen..pehle baar mere paas ek naik aulad thi..suraj...aaj voh bhi mujhse door chala gaya.....shakuntala bhabhi ki bachay..buhut naik hai...tum aur aksh ki tarha ziddi ya phir baadmaash nahin hai..(leaves)
yuv: dad...dekha?
mansen: chup yuvraj..agar tumne uss cheque ka galat isthamal nahin kiya hota...pir aaj yeh problem dekhna tha hume...

Precap: Mansen goes to Bhoomi and decides to get her thumb impression. Vasudev forces her to do so. Manasvi persuades Bhoomi not to do so. Bhoomi is in a dilemma.

Howz dat, ppl?
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Posted: 30 March 2006 at 11:15am | IP Logged
nice one yaaar...keep it up...
& get well sooon also......
tc..........
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wowwwwwwwwwww shirley ,really gr88888888888 job keep it up.
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Posted: 31 March 2006 at 2:44am | IP Logged
thanx ppl...updating episode 16 Big smile
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Posted: 31 March 2006 at 3:12am | IP Logged
Episode 16

(bhoomi and manasvi both r in the kitchen...shefali...is wid them too)

manasvi: umm..shefali...give me the knife..
shefali: jee bhabhi...(gives her the knife)
bhoomi: bhabhi..yeh erm....internet kya hota hai?
shefali: internet...internet aise cheez hote hai jo hum kisi duniya ki corner mein contact kar sakte hai...
bhoomi: acha?
manasvi: jaise ki...phone phar baat karne bajaye se hum internet phar chat kar sakte hai..
bhoomi: arre wah..yeh buhut acha hua..matlaab jab arjun baar baar phone phar hota hai...tho phir mein kehsav bhaiyya ki saath chat kar sakte hoo...
shefali(laughs): haan..
bhoomi: aur bhabhi..usku kya kehte hai...u-mail...?
manasvi: u-mail nahin..e-mail..
bhoomi: haan...voh kya hota hai..?
shefali: e-mail...letters ki tarha hota hai...tumhe pata hai bhoomi letters post karne aur pochni mein buhut dhir lagte haina?
bhoomi: haan..
shefali: lekhen e-mail pochni mein bilqul dhir nahin lagte...aik dum fast...
bhoomi: wow...sach..phir mein baar baar..arjun ko mail karte rahonge...chat setvices aur email...abh kaise bache ka arjun...hehe
manasvi: bhoomi...tum abhi bachee ki tarha hoo..
bhoomi: hehe...voh tho main hoo...

(shaku comes in)

shaku: arre...kahan tayar hai..kya?
shefali: bas thori dhir aur kaki...
bhoomi(rushing wid happiness): ma-ji..pata hai...kya?
shaku: kya..?
bhoomi: aapko..pata hai..ki agar phone busy ho tho phir internet use karke chat bhi kar sakte hai..aur emial kar sakte hai...
shaku: haan...tumhe kisni bataya?
bhoomi: shefali bhabhi aur manasvi bhabhi ni....
bhoomi: oh..lekhen bhabhi..mujhe uss cheez phar seekna bhi hai..
shefali: kya..?
bhoomi: voh..jo computer ki saath...umm..kya kehte hai usse.....erm.....haan....jo uss phar buhut saare buttons hote hai...
manasvi: haan keyboard..
bhoomi: haan..lekhen bhabhi...mujhe fast typing nahin aate..lekhen arjun buhut fast typing kar letha hai...mujhe bhi usse ki tarha seekna hai...
shefali: dont worry...manasvi bhabhi aur main tumhe teach karenge..
bhoomi: acha....thank u....
shaku: lekhen pehle kahan tho ready karo..
manasvi: haan mama...thori dhir aur.....

(bhoomi takes out the pizza she was making...)

bhoomi(in a posh accent): pizza...wid...tomato...and glorious cheese...made by...bhoomika goenka.....
manasvi: wow..kya english hai..
bhoomi: haan bhabhi..main buhut saare western serials dekhti rahe..ussme se seeka maine..
shefali: thori dhir mein tum kaha poch jaogi....
bhoomi: aap dono hai..tho main zaroor kahiin poch jaogi...
manasvi: ok..lunch ready...chale?
shefali: haan chalo...

(the three bahus leave)

(the goenka memebers sit around the dining table...the three bahus r serving lunch)

arjun: bhavri..jaldi karo....i'm so hungry....
bhoomi: uff....abhi aaye...itne zidd maat karo..
arjun: thank u...
shefali: yeh lejaye...baisa...maine banaya hai..
baisa(tastes the food): arre wah..buhut acha hai....acha khana bana hai shefali..
shefali: thank u baisa....
(shefali goes 2 serve siddarth..)
mansen: shefali!!!
shefali(luks up): jee papaji?
mansen: mujhe serve nahin kiya aur siddarth ko kyun?
siddarth: mansen..choro iss baat ko..
mansen: nahin...(stands up)..tumhare do bahus hai..kaha hai voh dono..
shefali: bhoomi shakuntala kaki ko khana de rahe hai..aur manasvi bhabhi khushi ko..
mansen: lejhen...tumhara sasur main hoo..tho phir siddarth si pehle mera haaq banta hai...
shefali: papaji..kyun aap zidd kar rahe hai...?
yuv: dad..jaisa keh rahe hai..vaisa karo...
shefali: yuv..plz...beech mein maath bolo...
yuv: shefali...dad ko khana do..
shefali: pehle mein siddarth uncle ko dongi...(about 2 put the food)
mansen: shefali..agar tumne voh khana dala..tho phir mujhse bura aur koi nahin hoga...
(shefali puts the food in the plate...mansen gets furious..)
mansen: SHEFALI!!!!(about 2 slap her..but arjun-suraj stop him)
suraj: kakasaheb..
arjun: haath choray uska...
mansen: kyun...tum dono kaun hote ho?
suraj: main ek bhai ki haaq si keh raha hoo..shefali mere behen lagte hai...usne koi galat kaam nahin kiya..aap hai jo shefali ki gal;at kaam hone ka advantage leena chahti hai..
arjun: choray...
(shefali goes upstairs crying..manasvi and bhoomi go after her)
gunvanti: dekhe....yeh aapne acha nahin kiya....baar baar aap bechari shefali phar gussa karte hai..
yuv: lekhen mom...voh..
gunvanti: voh..siddarth bhaiyya ki liye khana serve kar rahe thi...yeh kehna chahti hoo..haina?
(yuv luks down)
gunvanti: tho kya..hua...agar bhoomi ya phir manasvi tumhare papa ke liye khana serve kar thi..tho kya siddarth bhaiyya aise react karte?
(mansen and yuv stay silent)
gunvanti: nahin..aisa nahin react karte....(leaves)

(upstairs...manasvi and bhoomi r trying 2 console shefali)

manasvi: dekho..shefali..aapne maan ko dukh maat do..
shefali: papaji..hamesha mere saath..
bhoomi: bhabhi....aapke koi glati nahin hai..
shefali: jab pati saath ho..phir aurat ko koi daar nahin hota..kyunki uska sab kuch uski saath hota hai..lekhen mera pati mere saath nahin hai..iss baat ka afsoos hai..
manasvi: aise baat nahin hai..yuv hamesha tumhare saath hai..
shefali: nahin bhabhi..jab puri duniya bhoomi ki kilaaf hote hai..tho usse daar nahin hota...kyunki arjun uski saath hai..lekhen mere saath aisa nahin hota...

Precap: Baisa orders Mansen to apologise to Shefali. Mansen refuses, but Baisa is firm on her command.Mansen decides to avenge the bahus by taking Bhoomi's thumbprint.

Howz dat, ppl?
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Posted: 31 March 2006 at 11:45am | IP Logged
great girlllllllll !!!!!!!!!!1
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u k na???? no probs na??? take care.... Smile
Shirley IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 01 April 2006 at 5:39am | IP Logged

Originally posted by tunna

great girlllllllll !!!!!!!!!!1
Clap
u k na???? no probs na??? take care.... Smile

hey tuhina...thanx...i'm ok...wasnt feeling well on thurs....and friday..school was finishing early..bcoz easter holidays starting soon....hlidays have started now....YAY.....updating all three ff's now....updating episode 17Big smile

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