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Saarrthi 4 Suraj~Manasvi & Arjun~Bhoomi!! (Page 8)

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Posted: 27 March 2006 at 11:30am | IP Logged
wowww..yaaar...its really good....
at last shaadi ho gayi.....cant wait 2 c romantic scenes b/e them... Embarrassed ..yaaar kaash aisa real serial main bhi hota........
goood work.... Clap

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Posted: 27 March 2006 at 6:48pm | IP Logged
u rite really nice..i started reading ur ff from yesterday and completed it today its reallyyy gud..u should rite serials in real life
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Posted: 27 March 2006 at 9:58pm | IP Logged
Clap Clap Clap congrats shirley for starting a new ff
itz wonderful Wink
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Posted: 28 March 2006 at 2:41am | IP Logged
thanx ppl 4 yur comments....updating episode 14 Big smile

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Posted: 28 March 2006 at 3:03am | IP Logged
Episode 14

(The whole goenka parivaar is downstairs...shefali wnats 2 say sumthing)

shefali: bausa...main kuch kehna chahti hoo...
baisa: haan..kaho shefali...
shefali: baisa..abh manasvi bhabhi phirse iss ghar ki bahu bangaye hai..phir iuss kangan ka ziada haaq unka hai..
(yuv and his family r shocked)
baisa: matlaab...?
shefali: matlaab..yeh kangan manasvi bhabhi ko deena chahe...
yuv(angry): shefali..dimag kharab hogaya tumhara?
shefsli: yuv..plz...bhabhi humse badi hai..aur badi sadysya ko kangan milna chahe..
yuv: shefali..tum haar waqt arjun aur uski parivaar ka saath deeti hoo...aapne parivaar ka socho...
shefali: aapne..parivaar ka soch rahe hoo yuv...
bhoomi: bhabhi..plz...yuvraj ko gussa hoga...yeh kangan aapke paas rahe...phir ziada better hoga...
shefali: nahin bhoomi..
bade dadaji: lekhen..maansvi kiya chahti hai..beta..tum kya kehna chahti hoo?
manasvi: mujhe yeh kangan..nahin chahe....shefali buhut acha kaam kar rahe hai..ghar ko luk after karne mein.,.aur..
shefali: lekhen..bhabhi...kangan mujhe iss liye mila..kyunki aap iss ghar ki beti thi..abh aap bahu bangaye hai...tho aapka zaida haaq banta hai...
manasvi: lekhen shefali...
shaku: manasvi...shefali tho theek keh rahe hai...
baisa: haan manasvi...
(shefali takes off the kangan and gives it to manasvi..mnaasvi puts it on her wrist..mansen and khushal r furious)

(upstairs ...mansen and khushal discuss about the kangan)

mansen: dekha khushal...yeh siddarth aur uski parivaar aisa kya jaadoo hai..jo haar insaan uska saath deeta hai...pehle suraj...phir shefali..phir kaun hoga...gunvanti...phir vishakha...phir aksh..aur phir vikram...aur hum sab akele ho jayege..
khushal: jeeja...aisa kuch nahin hoga....bas yuv ki nazar mein shefali ko galat banao....aur yuv ussi divorce deega...aur yeh shefali ki tension kaam ho jayege...
mansen: khushal..mere sabse baari tension hai..manasvi aur uska yeh kangan...voh phirse power mein hogaye hai..
khushal: arre jeeja..aap tho aise kar rahe hai..jaise manasvi koi politician hai...humare tension manasvi nahin..voh do bhai hai..arjun aur suraj...
mansen: un dono ko main nahin choroga....aaj suraj humare saath hota...phir manasvi humare saath hote...aur yeh sab nahin hota...iss yuv ki galati...
khushal: jeeja...abh hume un dono bhai ka baarbadi ka sochna chahe...(grins)

(manasvi is upstairs....suraj is wid her)

manasvi: suraj..maine theek faisla kya...yeh kangan wapis lekhar...?
suraj: nahin..yeh koi galat kaam nahin hai....kangan ka ziada haaqdar tum ho...
manasvi: really...?
suraj: really...
manasvi: thanx..
suraj: no worries....

Precap: Himraj Dadaji makes 4 new caretakers of the whole property. Mansen is shocked to hear the results.

Howz dat, ppl?
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Posted: 29 March 2006 at 6:17am | IP Logged
lovely........ i ll kill this mansen n kushal someday ....n i'm guessing who the 4 are... urs truly is included ofcours Big smile
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Posted: 29 March 2006 at 11:05am | IP Logged
good work yaaaaar.... Clap
keep it up...
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Posted: 29 March 2006 at 8:49pm | IP Logged
good work....plzzz conti Smile

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