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Shirley

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Posted: 25 March 2006 at 8:29am | IP Logged
Episode 11

(The next day the arrangements for the engagement r going on. Arjun~Suraj r getting ready. Suraj is wearing the marron shirvani and arjun wearing a blue kurta)

arjun: kiasa lag raha hoo?
suraj: buhut acha...really smart...
arjun: thanx...aur bhaiyya...u luk so smart..in that maroon shirvani....u luk...awesome...
suraj: thanx...chale?
arjun; haan chalo...

(on the way...arjun~suraj bump into yuv and aksh)

yuv: acha...aaj tumhare engagement haina?
suraj: haan kyun?
yuv: tum buhut unlucky hoo suraj...
suraj: mere zindagi mein aise koi badkismati nahin hai...
yuv: haan lekhen...punditji ni jo bhi kuch kaha..
arjun(interrupts): galat kaha..kundali shayad galat bhi ho sakte hai..aur ek jodi bana ke liye..kundalis ki koi zaroorat nahin hai Clap kyunki..jodia...bhagwan banatha hai...swarag mein...
(arjun suraj r about 2 go...wehn aksh says sumthing)

aksh: haan...lekhen...suraj ki shaadi aise aurat se hone jaa rahe hai..jo usski choti bhabhi hai..aur pehle yeh usse kitna pyar karta tha...aur...yeh iss ummed mein rehta hai..ki manasvi mujhse pyaar karte hai.,..
suraj(pulling aksh's collar): manasvi ki baari mein aisa kuch maath kaho...varna...
arjun(pulling suraj back): bhaiyya...aap chalo...control yurself...chalo..

(arjun suraj leave)

(bhoomi is dressed in a deep red sari, wid curly hair, and her sari has red stones and diamonds and some work, wid red jewllery..and is luking beautiful. Bhoomi is helping Manasvi wid her jewllery. Manasvi is wearing a turqiouse sharara...wid a curly pony...and matching jewllery..and is luking really pretty..)

bhoomi: bhabhi...kitne khoobsurat lag rahe hai aap...aur aapke mehendi..(luks at the initial S..0
manasvi: haan...s 4 satya...
bhoomi(a little upset): bhabhi..yeh s maine satya bhaiyya ke liye nahin...jhetji ke liye likha hai..
manasvi: lekhen bhoomi....
bhoomi: bhabhi...satya bhaiyya aapka kal hai...yur past...aur jhetji aapke future hai..chale..
manasvi: chalo...

(bhoomi and manasvi go down....)

siddarth: suraj...beta...manasvi ko ring pihnao...
suraj: jee papa....(puts the ring on her)
shaku: manasvi...tumhare bari....(maansvi puts the ring on suraj..everyone claps...later the ceremony ends...and manasvi is in her room..taking her jewllery off...manasvi gets lost in thoughts...and sees a guy dressed in a black suit standing wid his back facing manasvi..manasvi runs up 2 him..thinking its satya..and touches hsi shoulder...the guy turns around and manasvi sees its suraj..manasvi breaks free of her thoughts)

manasvi; yeh kya ho raha hai mujhe..pehle mere sapno mein satya aaya karta tha....lekhen abh mere sapno mein suraj kyun..?

(Arjun gets changed into his t-shirt and jeans...meanwhile suraj is back in his ordinary styles...)

arjun: uff....i'm so tired.....engagement mein buhut kaam tha..kabhi idhar kabhi udhar...uff...
suraj: wel...yeh zindagi hai arjun...beegair kisi dard se asan nahin hote...
arjun: hm.....thats rite....
suraj: i'm a litle tired...i need some rest...
arjun: ok...goodnite...
suraj; gudnite...

Precap: Mansen tries to get Suraj back unto their side, but Suraj tells them that it will neva work, meanwhile the arrangments for the wedding are going on.

Howz dat, ppl?

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Mastang

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Posted: 25 March 2006 at 11:50am | IP Logged
goood work gal...keep it up.... Clap ...
yaar bas mujhe shaadi ka intezaar hai......aur us din ka jab manasvi k dil mian sirf aur sirf suraj hoga.....

keep up da good work gal.... Clap Clap Clap

Shirley

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Posted: 26 March 2006 at 2:28am | IP Logged
Episode 12

(Mansen and mamaji r in their room)

mansen: khushal...maine socha hai..ki kyun na ek baar koshish kare...
khushal: kis cheez mein koshish..jija?
mansen: suraj ko phirse humare parivaar mein shamaal karne mein...
(suraj passes by and hears this)
mansen: kyun na....arjun aur suraj ki beech dooria banaye aur...dono bhai ek doosri si nafrat karvaye...
khushal: idea tho acha hai jija....lekhen....hume aise mohre ki zarorat hai iss kaam ki liye.....
(suraj comes in)

suraj; kakasaheb...
mansen(shocked): suraj...umm...aao...
suraj: bilqul nahin badli aap...aur kyun badli aap...mere aur arjun ki beech problems create karna chahti...
khushal: oh..bhanje...aise baat nahin...koi galat misunderstanding umhare dimag mein...
suraj: mere ankhon ko dukha maat di mamaji...main jaanta hoo..ki aap phirse mujhe aapni parivaar mein shamal karna chahti...well guess what.....it will neva work...(leaves)
mamaji: jija...abh mujhe lgta hai..ki suraj puri tarha humara dushman ban gaya hai...
mansen: theek kaha tumne khushal..abh suraj ko aapni parivaar se judaa rehna parega..ya phir marna parega...
khushal: aisa karna chahe jija...(grins)

(downstairs, shaku and gunvnti r choosing their saris 4 the wedding)

shaku: gunvanti...yeh laal sari kaise hai?
gunvanti: arre buhut ache hai shakuntala didi..apke choice tho buhut ache hai..
shaku: yeh main manasvi ko deena chahti thi....
gunvanti: aur yeh blue sari kaise hai..?
shaku: buhut ache...mehendi ke liye..ya phir barat ke liye..
gunvanti: aisa karti hoo...blue wali sangeet ke liye...umm...mehendi...orange sari..aur barat ke liye...gold...kaisa laga?
shaku: buhut ache choices hai...
gunvanti: aur aap kaunse saris choose karegi...after all..beta ki shaadi hai...
shaku: haan..lekhen....(remebers the preparations 4 satya's wedding, and starts crying a little)...
LK: yeh kya kunti bua...aapke karan ki shaadi hone wali hai...aur aap karan ka nahin..satya ko yaad kar rahe hai...
gunvanti: didi...satya hamara guzra hua kal hai...lekhen aap aapne doosri beta ka socho....
shaku: theek kaha tumne gunvanti..mujhe suraj ki baari mein sochna chahe...
gunvanti: dekhe..didi...jab uska janam hua tha...tho aapne usse chor diya...aur abh uski paas ek maa hai..phir usse yeh ehsaas maath hone di..ki mere maa khush nahin hai..usku buhut dukh hoga..aur arjun..
shaku: theek hai..
LK: yeh huina baat...abh..oh..arjun aur karan dono aagaye...
(arjun-suraj come)

arjun: tho bhaiyya..main soch raha tha....ki kyun na...hum dono...kisi charity ki liye...ek function hold kare...logo ke liye acha hoga...
suraj: idea acha..lekhen...bade dadaji..aur papa se pochna chahe...
shaku: beta..arjun..suraj..aao...
suraj: jee mama...kya hai?
shaku: beta..main kehna chahti thi..ki kal shaadi hai..
arjun: bhaiyya ki bachelor ki din kaam hote ja rahe hai..bhaiyya enjoy more...
suraj: shhhh arjun..haan mama..apa keh rahe thi?
shaku: tho..kal barat ke liye.....tum shopping karo...ok...?
suraj: theek hai...aapne kaha tha...tho phir..ok...

(bhoomi and manasvi come)

bhoomi: erm..ma-ji...pata hai..main ek white sari pehna chahti hoo...kaise lagega?
shaku:apne pati si pocho
bhoomi: kyun arjun?
arjun: perfect...
bhoomi:yay...thanx....aur chale..shopping ke liye..mujhe buhut sare shopping karne hai...
suraj: theek hai..chalo..
bhoomi: aap bhi chalo bhabhi...
manasvi: erm...lekhen...
bhoomi: plz..bhabhi....plz...mere liye...
manasvi: theek hai...

(the 4 go to shopping...and come back..in the evening...)

arjun: uff....i'm tired..bhaiyya..next time..bhavri jayege..tho phir main nahin jaoga....
suraj: arjun...complain karna baand karo....
bhoomi(still energetic): wow...kitne dresses maine liye hai...ma-ji ko dekathi hai....chalo..
manasvi: acha..bhoomi...pehle kana do lagana chahe..haina?
bhoomi; haan..(rushes 2 the kitchen)...ghanu kaka...

Precap: The wedding is about to take place.

Howz dat, ppl?

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wowwwwwwwwwwwww its really superb.....gr8888888 imagination............plz cont. Smile

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Posted: 27 March 2006 at 7:01am | IP Logged
great!!!!!!!!!! lovely!!!!!!!! work of art surely!!!!
i think tum suraj ke dil ke haal bayan kar rahi ho ekdum.... keep it going lik this gal Clap

Shirley

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Posted: 27 March 2006 at 8:54am | IP Logged
hey..thanx ppl..4 the remarks....adding episode 13 Big smile

Shirley

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Episode 13

(The wedding is going to take place. Suraj dressed in a white shirvani..and manasvi in a light pink lengha..wid embroidaery and matching jewllery...arjun is wearing a black suit wid gold shiny shirt..wid his collar open Wink Tongue Embarrassed and bhoomi is wearing a lilac suit wid matching jewllery and hair..curled up..and the suit covered in embroidery..both couples are luking cute and gorgeous)

priest: larki ko bulai....
baisa: umm..shakuntala...jao manasvi aur bhoomi ko lao...
(shaku goes upstairs 2 fetch mansvi...bhoomi is puts teh bridal dupatta on manasvi...)

shaku: arre manasvi..buhut khoobsurat lag rahe hoo...
bhoomi: koi shaq..ma-ji...nazar na lage...(puts a bit of eye liner on the back of neck)
shaku: chalo..beta..punditji bula rahe hai....
bhoomi: chale bhabhi...
manasvi: chalo..(takes a last glance at satya's photo..then leaves..and comes downstairs..both suraj-manasvi sit down at the mandap)

siddarth: beta...varmalas kaha hai..?
arjun: yahan hai....yeh lao bhaiyya...
(suraj takes the garland and puts it around manasvi...)
shaku: beta....tumhare bari..(manasvi picks up..the garland..waits 4 a while..then puts it around suraj)

punditji: abh..pheras ka waqt hogaya hai..
arjun: bhavri...aao..
bhoomi: theek hai..(goes up..and ties the bridal knot..both s-m get up..and take the pheras...)

pundit: sindoor aur mangulsutra....
suraj:jee...(puts the sindoor in manasvi's hairline..and the mangulsutra around her neck...the wedding is over...and both couples are in their rooms)

(arjun-bhoomi in their room)

arjun: pata hai..bhavri....aaj main buhut khush hoo...
bhoomi: aisa kyun?
arjun: aaj pehle baar..humare paivaar main khushi phirse wapis aa rahe hai...abh manasvi bhabhi ki shaadi hogaye hai..aur mujhe pata hai...ki bhaiyya unka buhut khayal karenge....aur...hum dono bhi ek hogaye hai..
bhoomi(blushes): arjun....
arjun: kya arjun...?
bhoomi: aise baatein maat karo....(about 2 go..but arjun grabs her hand)
arjun: mujhse itne door kyun jaa rahe hoo....?
bhoomi: tumse kaha door jaa rahe hoo....haar waqt tum mere paas ho..door ho kar bhi..aur paas ho kar bhi..
arjun(arms around her):lekhen..phir bhi...
bhoomi: jhetji theek kehte thi..tum control se bahar nikal thi ja rahe hoo...
arjun: bhavri...pyar mein koi control nahin hota....
bhoomi: arjun..raat hogaye hai...bed time..
arjun; nahin...raat ka matlaab romance time...
bhoomi(blushes): arjun....tum bhi...
(arjun coming towards bhoomi...but a knock on the door)
arjun: kaun hai voh?
bhoomi: main thi..
arjun: huh..(sees bhoomi knocking on the dressing table)
bhoomi; daar gaye....?
arjun: bhavri..?
bhoomi: hmmm...
arjun(puts her on the bed): i luv u....
bhoomi: i luv u too...

(next scene: suraj and manasvi r in their room)

suraj: manasvi...tum iss shaadi se khush tho hoo?
manasvi: haan...main khush hoo...
suraj: erm...main um..jaanta hoo..ki main satya ki jegga nahin li sakta....aur...
manasvi: isse baari mein main tumse baat karna chahti thi..
suraj: kaho...
manasvi: dekho suraj..abhi mujhe thora waqt chahe...iss rishtaa ko accept karne mein...
suraj: koi baat nahin..ajb thak tum aapne maarzi se iss rishtaa ko accept nahin karte....main theek hoo...
manasvi: thanx..4 nderstanding..
suraj: no worries...
(manasvi goes towards the sofa)
suraj: arre..tum sofa phar kyun...tum bed sleep karna..
manasvi; lekhen..
suraj: lekhen kuch nahin...i'll sleep on the sofa..and u sleep on the bed...
manasvi: ok....(manasvi lies on the bed, and closes her eyes. She sees a dream in which a guy dressed in black is standing wid his back turned to her. Manasvi thinking its Satya runs up2 the guy..and touches his shoulder..the guy turns around and manasvi sees its suraj..manasvi wakes up)

manasvi(thinking): mujhe aise sapne kyun aate hai...mujhe kya ho raha hai...zaban phar satya ka naam..lekhen dil mein..suraj..?

Precap: Shefali tells Baisa that now Manasvi is a bahu of the parivaar again, the kangan should go to her. Yuv is furious.

Howz dat, ppl?

tunna

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Posted: 27 March 2006 at 11:08am | IP Logged
whoopie Clap
suraj n manasvi ki shaadi ho gayi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
great part girl.......

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