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Posted: 24 March 2006 at 3:43am | IP Logged
Thanx 4 the remarks ppl.... Big smile..adding episode 10 Smile Wink

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Originally posted by Shirley

Thanx 4 the remarks ppl.... Big smile..adding episode 10 Smile Wink

n i'm already here ... waiting Big smile

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Episode 10

shaku: baisa...hume punditji...ko bulana chahe...shub murat ke liye..
baisa: haan shakuntala...abhi aate honge..punditji...
bhoomi: erm..ma-ji..main soch rahe thi...kyun na..aaj hum sab shopping ke liye..chali....engagement ki liye...arrnagements karne hai...aur..shaadi bhi...
shefali: haan bhoomi..bilqul sahee....main..erm..manasvi bhabhi si baat karte hoo...
gunvanti: arre haan...shefali...erm...suraj aur arjun ko bhi lao....
shefali: jee....

(shefali goes upstairs....to manasvi's room)

shefali(knocks on door): manasvi bhabhi?
manasvi: arre shefali....aao...
shefali: bhabhi..chaleye....
manasvi: kaha?
shefali: neeche...shakuntala kaki aur baisa aap ko bula rahe hai...
manasvi: lekhen..kyun...sab theek tho hai?
shefali: haan..sab sirf shub murat aur engagement aur shaadi ke arrangements ki baat karne...
manasvi(upset): theek hai..chalo..
shefali: bhabhi...ek baat kaho..?
manasvi: haan kaho..?
shefali: erm....aapke shaadi hone wali hai..main aur bhoomi...balqi iss parivaar ka har sadasya aapke khushi chahta hai..tho..phir just smile...
manasvi(smiles): theek hai....lekhen shefali..main yeh shaadi jitne simple ho sake uthni ache hai...
shefali: lekhen..bhabhi...suraj bhaiyya ki pehle shaadi..unhe bura nahin lagega..agar yeh shaadi simple se hote...
manasvi: acha...chale...
shefali: haan...

(shefali and manasvi go down...)

shaku: oh..manasvi beta....aaj lunch ki baad hum sab shopping chalege.....
manasvi(widout a smile): theek hai...jaisa aap kehte hai..
bhoomi: bhabhi...main janate ho..ki yeh sab aap ki liye buhut mushkil hoga....lekhen.....khushi rehne ki koshish kare...khushi ki liye...
manasvi: tum theek kehte hoo...(smiles)

(suraj-arjun r upstairs....discussing some business issues)

suraj: tho arjun...tumhe kya lagta hai...ki yeh designs logo pasand aayege ya nahin..?
arjun: hmm...pata nahin..lekhen bhaiyya....aap aisa kyun karte hai..?
suraj: kya..?
arjun: aapke shaadi hone wali hai...aur aap shaadi ki arrnagements karne chahe..aur aap yahan office ka kaam kar rahe hai...
suraj: arjun...main yeh shaadi iss liye kar raha hoo....kyunki khushi ko ek baap ka naam milega...
arjun: kya yeh shaadi pyar ka rishtaa nahin hoga...kya aapke dil mein..ehsaas nahin hai...?
suraj: erm...arjun...erm...yeh..
arjun: bhaiyya...main jaanta hoo..ki aap manasvi bhabhi se kitna pyar karte hai...
suraj(shocked): kya...nonsense
arjun: yeh baqwaas nahin hai bhaiyya....buhut chahti hai aap unhi...haina?
suraj: i.....dont...
arjun(takes suraj's hand and puts it on his own head): mere kasam bhaiyya....aap unih pyar karti hai yahan nahin?
suraj: main...usse pyar...karta hoo....
arjun: dekha...rishto ki shakti dekhe aapne...mere liye..aapne sach bol diya...
suraj: lekhen...manasvi ki dil mein sirf satya rehta hai..
arjun: lekhen....kabh thak uss dil mein satya bhaiyya hoga...kabhi na kabhi ek din aap aur manasvi bhabhi ek hoge...jaise main aur bhavri...thori waqt mein ek hogaye...

(gunvanti comes)

gunvanti: arre..suraj..beta...aao...neeche aao...punditji aaye hai...tumhare shaadi ka shub murat bathani..chalo..
arjun: chale..bhaiyya?
suraj: chalo...

(the three go down..)

shaku(giving the horoscopes): punditji..yeh hai larka aur larki ki kundalia....
pundit: lekhen...larka ki kundali...zara...thori...badkismat....hai..
arjun(shocked): kya..matlaab...bad luck?
pundit: shaadi ki baad....larka ki liye...ek bade kasautii hoge...lekhen..phir bhi aisa lag raha hai..ki yeh dono kundalia ek doosri ki liye banaya gaya hai...jaise inke kismat mein likha hai..ki yeh dono saath hona parega....
suraj: dekha...arjun...i have bad luck...i cant get married...
arjun: uff...bas sirf kundali aise hai..aapne socha ki main shaadi nahin karoga...
baisa: shub murat hai...punditji..?
pundit: jee....erm...2 din baad....engagement...aur 5 din baad..shaadi...
bhoomi(getting excited): yippeee.....shopping time..matlaab...arjunji...?
arjun(wid a mischevious smile): jee madamji..?
bhoomi: hume...shopping chalna hai...aap humare driver ban kar..hume shopping lekhar kare....
arjun: jee madam....my pleasure....
manasvi(smiles): bhoomi...tum bhi...arjun ko kabhi break nahin deete..
shefali: voh kehte hai..ki shaadi ki baad..pati aapni patni ka ghulam ban jaata hai...jaise arjun abh bhoomi ka ghulam hai..
bhoomi: exactly....aur uska ehssas bhi buhut acha hai...hehehe....
arjun(mimicking bhoomi): hehehehe....pati patni ka ghulam..my foot..i am one.... LOL
suraj: arjun....relax....vaise bhoomi itne buri nahin hai..jo tum complain kar rahe hoo....
arjun: bhaiyya...abhi aapke shaadi nahin hui hai....aap bhi bachelor ki din enjoy karo...varna kabh pata...yeh ladies hum phar control kar lenge.....
manasvi(stands up): nahin..shaadi ki baad...na suraj mujh phar control karega...na main uss phar..hum dono ek doosri ki baat ko respect karenge...aur pura bhi karenge..kyun suraj?
suraj: bilqul theek...tumhare tarha nahin hoga..arjun..jo patni ki baatein hmaesha sun tha rohonga...hehe...
arjun: uff..mere kismat aise hai...
bhoomi: chale...

(everyone is at shopping)

arjun(seeing a maroon shirvani): wow.....wah bhaiyya..luk at this....aap phar buhut acha suit karega...
suraj: hmm..lekhen.....theek hai..
bhoomi: kya hua..?
suraj: erm..arjun ni mere liye engagement ki shirvani choose kar liye hai..aur..
bhoomi(luking at the suit): wah..buhut khoobsurat..aap ko buhut suit karega...lekhen aap try tho kare..
suraj: bhoomi...yeh mera aaiena hai..(luks at arjun)....agar iss phar buhut acha hoga..tho phir mujhe phar bhi..
arjun: aww...so sweet...acha..aabh main yeh...blue kurta...kaisa hai bhavri..?
bhoomi: buhut acha...
arjun(disappointed): acha..?
bhoomi: ok baba....wonderful..lajawab...vivek oberoi ki tarha...lagogi..tum...
arjun: vivek ki tarha...kyun..voh SRK ki tarha kyun..?
bhoomi: kyunki...jhetji ziada SRK ki tarha llagthi hai...
(suraj laughs)
arjun: very...funny....
suraj: arre..yeh joke kar rahe hai...bhoomi ka SRK tum ho...
arjun: hehe.....aur kaun ho sakta hai...?
(manasvi sees a blsck sari wid a gold blouse...and tries the sari over in the mirror..suraj walks over 2 her)

suraj: acha laga tumhe?
manasvi: erm...nahin..bas aise...
shaku: manasvi..dekho..tumhare liye..yeh dress kaisa hai..?
manasvi: erm...abhi aaye....(goes over there)
(suraj luks at the sari manasvi was trying..and picks it up...and buys it...but keeps it a secret from maansvi)

Precap: Suraj~Arjun break into a fierce argument with Yuvraj~Aksh. Meanwhile, the engagement is about to start.

Howz dat, ppl?

Shirley

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Posted: 24 March 2006 at 4:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by tunna

Originally posted by Shirley

Thanx 4 the remarks ppl.... Big smile..adding episode 10 Smile Wink

n i'm already here ... waiting Big smile

its updated....yur intazaar khatam......Big smile

tunna

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Posted: 24 March 2006 at 4:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shirley

Originally posted by tunna

Originally posted by Shirley

Thanx 4 the remarks ppl.... Big smile..adding episode 10 Smile Wink

n i'm already here ... waiting Big smile

its updated....yur intazaar khatam......Big smile

 wow.... lovely...... n definately worth the waitBig smile

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Posted: 24 March 2006 at 6:16am | IP Logged
Ohhhhh I read all the episode which I missed and now I have no words how to appreciate your work.Just one word that I can write is AWESOME.

Shirley

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Posted: 25 March 2006 at 7:29am | IP Logged
thanx anu hunny....adding episode 11Big smile

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