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Episode 8

(Suraj~Manasvi r at their office)

suraj: ok...this is our cabin.....
manasvi(luking around): its...lovely...
suraj: ok...if u eva need anything.....or if u r confused about anything...then do feel free 2 ask
maansvi: sure...
suraj: umm...anyway.....after lunch..we have a meeting..and it is essential 4 u 2 be there...ok?
manasvi: ok....
suraj: i'll just be back...u just feel free 2 sit down...
manasvi: sure....(suraj leaves...manasvi sits down by her desk...she luks around and sees satya's garlanded photo...she walks over 2 the photo)
manasvi: satya...aaj main aapne pairon phar kare hogaye hoo....kaash tum hote mere saath....
LK: manasvi....kab thak tum satya ki baari mein soch thi rahoge....
manasvi: tum haar waqt mere maan mein hoo....aur...agar tum yahan hote tho hpir tumhe buhut khushi hote ki main office mein kaam karte hoo...
LK: haan...lekhen manasvi...satya si ziada kisi aur khushi hui hai...ki tum office mein kaam karte hoo....
manasvi: kaash...iss waqt tum mere saath hote...(just then suraj comes..manasvi sees his reflection in satya's photo....she turns around)
suraj: kya hua?
manasvi: umm...kuch nahin...bas sirf...voh...
suraj: satya ki yaad aate hai?
manasvi(eyes filling up): haan...voh tho aaj main itne kamzoor nahin hote...
suraj: manasvi..pata hai ki satya humara himmath tha...lekhen..kya yeh dost tumhara himmath nahin ban sakta....?
manasvi: matlaab?
suraj: matlaab....kuch nahin...
manasvi: erm....choro inn baato ko....erm....arjun aur bhoomi..?
suraj: aapna kaam kar rahe honge...
manasvi: acha..
suraj: aisa karo...tum iss file ko dekho....
manasvi: theek hai...
suraj: ok...
manasvi: yeah...

(next scene: bhoomi is checking the dress designs again)

bhoomi: arjun...yeh dresses kaise lage tumhe?
arjun(concentrating on the computer): huh...ache honge...
bhoomi: plz...dekho na....plz..
arjun: theek hai...arre wah....buhut acha hai...after all...mere bhavri ni jo banaya....
bhoomi: sach...kya voh mr. ahuja ko pasand aayega....
arjun: haan...aayega.....
bhoomi: sach arjun...tumne mere confidence ko barhadiya...
arjun: aur tumne....(gets close 2 her...but bhoomi moves away)
bhoomi: arjun...office ka time hai...aur tumhe zara sharam nahin aaye..
arjun: patni ki saath romance karke...nahin...koi sharam nahin aaye.....(he gets the dupatta that bhoomi made and putrs voer himself and bhoomi like KZK....but bhoomi pulls it off)
bhoomi: arjun...tum kahiin bhi shoro ho jaate hoo....
arjun: tho phir kya karo....hamesha tum....
bhoomi: aaj kaam karte hai..come on...abhi jhetji aate honge aur...
arjun: agar bhaiyya ki shaadi hote...tho hpir i guarantee u...voh aur bhabhi dono romance karte..(suddenly stops)
bhoomi: kya hua?
arjun: kuch nahin....
bhoomi: kuch tho hua hai...
arjun: main zara soch raha tha...ki bhaiyya shaadi kyun nahin karna chahti?
bhoomi: arjun...isse baat ko lekhar main tumse baat karna chahti thi...
arjun: kya..?
LK: yeh..baat ki suraj aur manasvi shaadi karvao...haina?
bhoomi: manasi bhabhi ki doosri shaadi?
arjun: papa pehle baat kar chuke hai..aur manasvi bhabhi nahin maane....
bhoomi: lekhen...humare parivaar mein aisa insaan hai..jo manasvi bhabhi ko buhut khushi deega..
arjun: kaun...?
bhoomi: umm...jhetji....
arjun(surprised): bhaiyya...?
bhoomi: haan...tumnde dekha nahin hai..lekhen maine dekha hai ki dono buhut ache dost hai...aur...
arjun: main bhaiyya se baat karta hoo...
(arjun goes 2 suraj's cabin...and sees the two....but waits outside..he sees suraj~manasvi both really happy together)
suraj: acha...yeh hogaya....aur phir....yeh file baaqi hai..
manasvi: pata hai suraj...aaj office mein mujhe buhut acha laga....
suraj: sach..?
LK: dekh kya rahe ho..arjun...tumko kya lagta hai?
arjun: bhaiyya ki shaadi manasvi bhabhi se ho kar rahegi....manasvi bhabhi ki liye koi aur hai nahin hai khush rakni ke liye....
LK: yeh baat tumne buhut theek kaha arjun....

(next scene: mansen is planning against the two brothers)

mansen: khushal...yuvraj ki galti se...abh suraj bilqul humare haath si nikaal gaya hai...
khushal: jeeja....abh bhi buhut gussi wali hoo....
yuv: lekhen papa..mere insult kaisa...
mansen: INSULT....INSULT...INSULT...kabhi hissa tho kabhi insult.....agar usni tumhare insult kiya tha...tho phir usse jawab do...lekhen maansvi ki saath aisa kyun?
khushal: jeeja...just relax...
yuv: aur voh shefali..mujhe divorce deena chahti hai..lekhen suraj ki kehne phar usni aapna decision change kiya tha....(leaves)
mansen: mere ek baat samjh nahin aate...yeh yuvraj manasvi ki peeche kyun para tha..?
khushal: jeeja..voh suraj ko vinash karna chahta hai....aur suraj ki kamzoori ka advantage leena chahta hai..iss liye manasvi ki peeche par gaya....
mansen: lekhen kyun..?
khushal: kyunki jeeja...suraj manasvi si buhut mohabbat karta hai
mansen(surprised): kya...?
khushal: haan....
mansen: agar...bhoomi aur manasvi ko kuch bhi hogaya...tho phir voh dono bhai ka kya hoga...mohabbat aur dard ki aag mein jal jayege dono...
(both grin)

Precap: Baisa informs the family of Manasvi's remarriage. But Arjun~Bhoomi are shocked to know about the groom.

Howz dat, ppl?

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rocking....

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Episode 9

(Arjun-Bhomi-suraj-manasvi reach home after office...mr ahuja is at the heritage house)

mr. ahuja: oh...umm manasvi...kaise ho?
manasvi: theek ho..(touches his feet 4 respect)
mr. ahuja: gud...umm..acha baisa main chalta hoo...
baisa: theek hai...(mr. ahuja leaves)
arjun: um..baisa...bhavri aur main aap logo se kuch kehna hai..
baisa: usse pehle main tum sab logo kuch kehna chahti hoo...
bhoomi: kiss baat ki baari mein baisa?
baisa: manasvi ki doosri shaadi ki baari mein...
manasvi(angry and upset): maine kaha tha ki main shaadi nahin karna chahti....plz...(about 2 go...but suraj grabs her hand..arjun feels happy about this)
suraj: manasvi...baat ko samjho...tum sirf satya ki baari mein sochti hoo....i understand...lekhen....khushi ka kya....usse ek baap ki zaroorat hai..
manasvi: lekhen?
suraj: agar aapne aap ki liye nahin...khushi ke liye...usse ek baap ka saya chahe....plz...
manasvi: theek hai...lekhen...
bhoomi: larka kaun hai..?
bausa: larka...mr. ahuja hai..
(everyone is shocked)

arjun: mr.ahuja?
baisa: haan....mujhe lagta hai...ki manasvi aur mr.ahuja ki jodi buhut ache hai..
LK: nahin..baisa....yeh kya kiya aapne...?
bhoomi: lekhen mr.ahuja manasvi bhabhi ke liye baap ki saman hai...aur pati kaise....chee...
shaku: lekhen bhoomi....mr. ahuja se better larka aur kaun ho sakta hai...?
suraj(upset): erm....main abhi aaya....one minute..(leaves)
arjun: mere khayal se...mr. ahuja se better larka hai...jo mere bhabhi ko khush rak sakta hai..jo usse buhut mohabbat karta hai...
LK: haan arjun...tumhe batao...
siddarth: kaun hai voh?
arjun: bhaiyya!!!!

(everyone is shocked)

shaku: suraj?
bhoomi: haan maji...jhetji se ziada aur koi nahin hai...
baisa: lekhen..kya manasvi aur suraj maane ge...
arjun: maanege...agar bhaiyya ek bhai ban sakta...beta ban sakta...tho phir pati kyun nahin?
shruti: hume manasvi bhabhi si baat karne parege?

(manasvi is upstairs...just changed into her asian clothes..shaku comes in wid bhoomi)

manasvi: arre..ma-ji...aaye...aao bhoomi...
shaku: beta...hum tumhare doosri shaadi karna chahti hai..
manasvi: samjh thi hoo baisa....khushi ki liye...ek maa ka farz ki liye...yeh qurbani dene ke liye main taryar hoo..
bhoomi: lekhen....larka..umm..?
manasvi: larka kaun hai?
shaku: suraj..?

(manasvi is shocked)

manasvi: suraj...lekhen kaise?
shaku: beta...sirf voh hai..jo tumhare zindagi mein satya ki place le sakta hai....
manasvi: satya ki jeega koi nahin le sakta...
bhoomi: bhabhi..plz...khushi ki liye....varna baisa keh rahe thi ki mr.ahuja ki shaadi aapse kiya jaye..
(manasvi is even more shocked and hurt..)

maansvi(crying): theek hai..mujhe yeh shaadi manzoor hai...
shaku: thanx beta....kaam se kaam khushi ka tho socha hai...
(shaku and bhoomi leave)
manasvi(2 LK's idol): yeh bhagwan..main kya karo?
LK: kya matlaab..maansvi...shaadi karo...puri zindagi akele tho nahin spend kar sakte...
manasvi: lekhen...suraj kabhi bhi mere dil mein nahin ho sakta...
LK: arre manasvi...pati hoga voh tumhara...dil ka rishtaa bhi hona chahe....
manasvi: mere dil mein sirf satya hai....sirf...sirf satya...
LK: lekhen..kabh thak..satya ki liye...tum kitne dhir thak yaad karoge...aaj nahin tho kal suraj ko tumhe dil mein laana hoga...jaise arjun ni kiya....
manasvi: bas hamesha mera saath hona bhagwan...
LK: arre manasvi..ki koi pochni ki baat hai...mahabharat mein...main hamesha draupadi ki saath tha...aur tumhare aur bhoomi ki saath..ho...suraj aur arjun ki tension kaam hoge....dono bhai ki fikhar karne koi zaroraat nahin hai... Tongue Wink
(manasvi leaves)

(siddarth and arjun enter suraj's room...)

suraj: papa...aaye...arjun...kya hua?
siddarth: beta...abhi humne maansvi ki doosri shaadi karne baat kiye thi....
suraj: haan tho?
arjun: lekhen bhaiyya...mr.ahuja ki saath nahin..aapke saath hoge...
suraj: kya...?
siddarth: haan..maansvi ki shaadi tumhare saath karnvana chahti hai
suraj: nahin...aisa nahin ho sakta.....main manasvi ki saath...
arjun: plz..bhaiyya.....manasvi bhabhi bhi raazi hai...
suraj: lekhen...
siddarth: beta plz...khushi ko ek baap ki zaroraat hai..aur voh place srif tum le sakte hoo...
suraj: theek hai....khushi ki liye..main manasvi ki saath shaadi karoga...
arjun: thanx bhaiyya....(both leave)

suraj: lekhen ..main jaanta ho....ki shaadi ki baad manasvi mujhe satya ki pati hone ka jega nahin deege..
LK: arre suraj tum bhi manasvi ki tarha sochti hoo...zaroor deege...zaroor....aur jaise arjun ni bhoomi ko aapnaya aise...maansvi tumhe aapnayge...bas srif thora waqt lagega...
suraj: bas mujhe sirf..khushi aur manasvi ki khushi chahe...har waqt uski saath rehna..bhagwan...
LK: yeh baat maine manasvi ko kaha...ki main uske saath raonga...phir tumahre tension kaam hoge...

Precap: Shaku wants to take Mnaasiv and Bhoomi out for shopping for the wedding. Meanwhile, Arjun tells Suraj that he knows of his (Suraj's) feelings for Manasvi.

Howz dat, ppl?

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at last.........   suraj n manasvi ki shaadi!!!!   i'm so happy..... wow tumne mere dil ki tamanna jaldi hi puri kar di Big smile      keep it going like this honey Wink

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