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jasminerahul

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so romantic.i did'nt no that u cud write such romantic scenes

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OMG OMG !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Clap shirley that was AMAZING!!! im telling u man......i abosolutley loved it!!!!!!!! Clap
great writer u are!!! Clap

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shirley tum writer ban jao

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Posted: 21 March 2006 at 4:58am | IP Logged
Episode 7

(the next day starts off wid a fresh morning..bhoomi is still asleep in arjun's arms..suddenly the alarm clock rings)

bhoomi: oh...arre arjun...wake up....alarm has started ringing...
arjun(still asleep): huh....bhavri...(gets a pillow..thinking its bhoomi..and starts hugging it...)...mm....bhavri...tum itne patli aur soft kaise hogaye hoo?
bhoomi: kyunki...voh main nahin...voh ek pillow hai..
arjun(wakes up): huh...bhavri...mujhe office nahin jaana....
bhoomi: jaldi sey...uthao...(arjun pulls bhoomi towards himself)
arjun: ek condition phar...
bhoomi: kya?
arjun: mujhe ek kiss do..
bhoomi(blushes): nahin...ofice ka time hogaya hai...
arjun: plz...just one....
bhoomi: um...ok..(kisses him on the cheek..but arjun holds her back still)
arjun: bhavri...kiss cheek phar nahin...yahan karte hai...(points 2 the lips)
bhoomi: arjun..plz...
arjun: bhavri..?
bhoomi: umm...(comes close...and kisses arjun lightly)
bhoomi: now..go...
arjun(still holding bhoomi back): bhavri..?
bhoomi: abh kya hai..now what?
arjun: i luv u...
bhoomi: i luv u too....
bhoomi: abh jaldi se.....get dressed....
arjun: ok....(arjun quickly gets dressed...and opens the door..suraj is waiitng 4 him..)
suraj: kaise ho..arjun?
arjun: theek hoo....
suraj: mujhe laga ki tumhare sehat theek nahin thi...
arjun: kyun..kya hua?
suraj: kuch nahin..jaldi se chalo...office ka time hogaya hai...
arjun: ok...ready hoo....
suraj: haan lekhen...aapne pants ko tho handle karo..(leaves)
arjun: huh...? (sees that he is wearing his pants the wrong way)...oh god....bhaiyya ki samne...uff....
bhoomi: kya hua..arjun?
arjun: i...erm....wore my pants the wrong way..when bhaiyya came in...
(bhoomi bursts out laughing)
arjun: ha-ha-ha....laugh...so nice of u...laughing at yur own husband.....
bhoomi: uff....arjun...i told u....after such nites...u cant handle yur brain...
arjun: ssshhh.....now.....make sure...the other family members dont find out about this...
(arjun-bhoomi go down...)
shruti: oh..hi..arjun bhaiyya...
arjun: hi....
preeti: kyun...arjun bhaiyya...had some problems wid yur trousers..?
(the whole family starts laughing)
arjun: who told u that? (sees suraj sniggering)
suraj: umm....manasvi...where is she....umm..i'll go and check up on her
arjun: oh...u r not going anywehre...bhaiyya
suraj: why not..?
arjun: bcoz....this is why..(starts chasing him...both brothers r going around the house...and accidently bump into mansen and his family..)
suraj: oh sorry..kakasaheb...but i need 2 run..(starts running)
arjun: hey...bhaiyya....aaj aap mere haath sey nahin bachi gi...
mansen: uff...dono abhi bachay hai...
(both brothers r tired...and take a break)
arjun: bhaiyya...u r jsut like satya bhaiyya...i neva get 2 catch him..
suraj: huh...what?
(bhoomi hears this)
bhoomi: if.....jhetji cna take satya's place as a brother...then he defintely cna take the place of a husband...
LK: yeh tum buhut acha soch rahe hoo bhoomi.....arre manasvi puri zindagi akele kaise spend kar sakte hai..lekhen voh maani gi ya nhain...yeh tum socho..
bhoomi: manasvi bhabhi tho...agree anhin karegi..lekhen...

(upstars manasvi picks her churidaar dress for office...suraj joins her)

manasvi: suraj...yeh dress kaisa hai..(shows him the churidaar dress)
suraj: hmm..acha hai.,..lekhen tum yeh lagao...
manasvi: kya..?(sees a blouse, blazer and a skirt)
manasvi: skirt?
suraj: koi baat nahin...its below the knees...
manasvi: hmm...but skirts r tight..and...
suraj: neva mind manasvi...u no..the office luk is important...
manasvi: hmm..ok...
(later manasvi comes down wearing the hair loose, a skirt..while blouse and a black blazer)

bhoomi: arre wah..bhabhi..u luk so smart and different...
manasvi: thanx bhoomi...
arjun: acha bhavri...chale?
bhoomi: haan chalo...
suraj: umm...hum dono bhi chale..?
manasvi: haan...lets go....
suraj(whispers 2 arjun): just control yur romantic feelings....
arjun: huh...oh...yeah..i will...
suraj: gud..ok...bye....everybody..

Precap: Suraj~Manasvi begin their first day, meanwhile Mansen plans sumthing against the two brothers.

Howz dat, ppl?

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Posted: 21 March 2006 at 6:59am | IP Logged
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gr8 jod shirley this all claps are for u dear...
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Posted: 21 March 2006 at 7:15am | IP Logged
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Posted: 21 March 2006 at 8:44am | IP Logged
Wow great writing.Marvalles Clap

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OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! jaan..........its gr88888888888 Clap ...........i have no words to admire u hunny. Embarrassed

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