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Episode 6

(morning time...and manasvi comes downstairs dressed in a pale yellow trouser suit, hair plaited from the sides, a pair of earrings and a necklace..)

shaku: arre manasvi beta...aaj tum buhut khoobsurat lag rahe hoo..
manasvi: thank u..mummy....
bhoomi: kya hua..bhabhi aaj itne jewllery aur dresses...koi special din hai kya?
manasvi: nahin..aaj kisi dost ni request kiya hai..iss liye..
LK: haan..suraj tumse kaha hai..aur tum inkar kaise kar sakte hoo....after all...tumhara hone wala pati jo hai....
arjun: wow bhabhi...kitne achi lag rahe hai aap....buhut patli aur khoobsurat..kaash bhavri aapke tarha hote
bhoomi: matlaab...main moti hoo...?
arjun: kaine aisa kabh kaha?
manasvi: acha..umm..khushi kaha hai..?
suraj: oh...khushi school gaye hai..maine usse drop kiya hai...
manasvi: oh..thanx...tum mere liye itna kuch karte hoo..aur main...
suraj: bas...dost kabhi bhi issan nahin karte....rite?
manasvi: rite..
suraj: aao bhoomi..tum bhi nashta karo...aur vaise bhoomi....humara ek meeting hai..tumhara uss meeting mein hona bhi buhut zaroori hai..
bhoomi: theek hai...abhi nashta karte hoo..phir chalti hai...
(shefali comes down)

shefali: um....bade dadaji..baisa....main aap sabse baat karna chahti hoo
baisa: haan beta..kya baat hai..?
shefali: main yuvraj ko divorce karna chahti hoo? (everyone is shocked)..
yuv(stands up): lekhen...kyun..maine kiya kya hai..?
shefali: kya kiya...tumne manasvi bhabhi ki saath jo bhi kuch kiya..uss ki vaijaise...
manasvi: lekhen shefali..uss choti baat ko lekhar...
shefali: choti baat...manasvi bhabhi..yuvraj aapka devar hai...aur kya ek devar aapne bhabhi ki saath aisa kuch karta hai kya?
manasvi: lekhen shefali...
bhoomi: bhabhi....main shefali bhabhi ki saath saymaath hoo...
shefali: aur vaise...thalak ki baad...yeh kangan main baisa ko wapis kar dongi...iss ka asli haaq dar..bhoomi hai
bhoomi: nahin baisa....mujhe yeh kangan nahin chahe...aur shefali bhabhi...yuvraj ko maaf kar deena...bechari se galti hui hai...
shefali: nahin...pehle tumhare arjun ko barbaad karne ko koshish kiye...phir suraj ka isthamal kiya...phir manasvi bhabhi ki saath...aise mard ki saath maine nahin rahe sakte...
suraj: shefali....relax...yuv ko thora waqt do..aur yeh main yuv ki liye nahin...tumhare benefit ke liye keh raha hoo....theek hai...
shefali(wipes her tears): theek hai....(puts her head on suraj's shoulder, suraj consoles her)
arjun: umm....bhaiyya....chale office...ka time hogaya hai..
suraj: acha..main chalta hoo...(they leave)

(arjun-suraj r at office..bhoomi needs 2 go home...2 take care of himraj dadaji...arjun is sitting down..luking upset)

suraj: kya hua?
arjun: huh?
suraj: kya hua?
arjun: oh..kuch nahin.....
suraj: kuch tho hua hai...tumhare chehre se pata chalta hai...
arjun: umm....bhaiyya voh...umm...bhavri...
suraj: kya hua bhoomi ko..?
arjun: bhaiyya....main bhavri se pyar karta ho... Embarrassed Big smile
suraj: haan...tho...har pati aapne patni se pyar karta hai
arjun: umm...bhaiyya jab mere aur bhavri ki shaadi hui thi...
suraj: haan...?
arjun: abhi maine usse accept nahin kiya...
suraj(surprised): kya....?
arjun: haan...lekhen....abh main usse accept karna chahta hoo...kyunki...kyunki.....usse pyar karta hoo....
suraj: theek hai...tho phir jao...aur usse batao...
arjun: haan..lekhen koi na koi aata rehta hai..kabhi mummy...kabhi bhabhi...kabhi ghanu kaka....aur...
suraj: samjh gaya....aisa karta hoo...ki aaj main dekhtha hoo..ki tumhe aur bhoomi ko koi nahin disturb nahin karega...aur main tum dono ki liye tockets book karta hoo....italy ki liye...
arjun: italy kyun?
suraj: hmm..switzerland..typical romantic place...
arjun: ok...bhaiyya...u r the best....
suraj: pata hai..batani ki koi zaroorat nahin hai...

(in the evening...)

bade dadaji: acha bachao....hum sab jaa rahe hai...
manasvi: theek hai..gud nite...
shaku: gud nite...(everyone leaves, except arjun-bhoomi-suraj-manasvi)
arjun: umm..bhavri...chale...mujhe koi file chahe thi...?
bhoomi: theek hai...dekhti hoo...(both go upstairs..)
manasvi: tho suraj...umm....kaam kaisa chal raha hai..?
suraj: theek....kyun?
manasvi: suraj..ek baat kaho..?
suraj: haan kaho..
manasvi: main ghar phar rahe kar..buhut bored hogaye hoo....main kuch karna chahti hoo...apne do pairon phar kara hona chahti hoo..
suraj: wow...sach...yeh tho achi baat hai....
manasvi: lekhen.....umm....bura na maano..tho kaho kuch?
suraj: kya..kaho na...
manasvi: main....business karna chahti hoo...
suraj: business?
manasvi: haan...mere dil ki sabse bada armaan yeh tha..ki main business karo....
suraj: haan...tho phir...aisa karte hai..ki hum dono aaj se office chalti hai...
manasvi: acha....?
suraj: haan....arjun bhi yeh chahta hoga..ki tum office aaya karo...
manasvi: theek hai...
suraj: vaise..aaj itne bright dress aur jewllery kyun?
maansvi: tumne kaha tha..ki tumhe purani manasvi chae..
suraj: mere baat ko tumne suni...?
manasvi: haan...ki dost ni kaha..
suraj: buhut achi lagti hoo...u luk pretty...
manasvi: thanx....

(upstairs, bhoomi is trying 2 find the file...arjun walls up2 her)

bhoomi: arjun...voh file nahin mil rahe hai..
arjun: rehni do...vaise mujhe voh file nahin chahe?
bhoomi: tho hpir kya chahe?
arjun: tum...
bhoomi: kya..?
arjun: mujhe tum chahe...i want u...
bhoomi: yeh kaise baatein kar rahe hoo...?
arjun(coming towards bhoomi):tumse main door nahin reh sakta...kabse mujhe isse pal ka intazaar tha...
bhoomi: kaisa pal...
arjun: voh pal...jo main kaho ga...ki...(whispers)....I love......u.....
bhoomi(blushes): arjun....
arjun(puts his finger on her lips): kuch maat kaho...kuch maat kaho....aaj sirf hum dono ki hamoshi boligi....(makes bhoomi sit on the bed gently)
bhoomi: arjun......main bhi tumse pyar karte hoo....i love....u too......(hugs him...arjun hugs her tightly....and then....arjun opens bhoomi's hair loose...and takes off her earrings, and takes off her necklace, and kisses her on the forehead, then on the cheek, and on the neck...)
arjun: main tumhare beegair jee nahin sakta....(holds her wrists tight...and takes off her bangles...)
bhoomi: arjun...ek vaada karo...
arjun: hmm...
bhoomi(holding arjun tightly): tum kabhi bhi mujhe chor kar nahin jaogi....neva leave me....
arjun: kabhi nahin...neva...(the lights switch off, arjun-bhoomi r close together....)
LK: yeh tho hona hi tha...

Precap: Manasvi gets ready for her first day of work, meanwhile Arjun is uncontrollable of his feelings for Bhoomi.

Howz dat, ppl?

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Posted: 20 March 2006 at 8:44am | IP Logged
WOOOOWWW....it si jus tooooooooooo goooooood shirley........ Clap

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Posted: 20 March 2006 at 8:54am | IP Logged
lovely girlllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll............ ..........................................        arjun-bhoomi scene is fab..... Clap   s-m one no less... Clap Clap .n even the part where shefali comes is great... (though for a while mujhe laga ab shefali suraj par fida ho jayegi Confused LOL )
plz update it soon..

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Posted: 20 March 2006 at 9:58am | IP Logged
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Posted: 20 March 2006 at 10:59am | IP Logged
hey lovely shir........ Wink
arjun bhoomi scenes were really fantastic...soooooooooo romantic... Embarrassed
bas ab suraj aur manasvi ki chemistry dekhni baaqi hai.... Wink

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