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Thx for updating my fav. ff.It's as good as it always is.

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ok ppl...updating episode 30 Big smile

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Episode 30

(Arjun-bhoomi come back home)

arjun: ma...bhaiyya...bhabhi...papa...!!!
(everyone comes)
manasvi: kya hua..arjun..itna shor kyun?
arjun: bhabhi..guess what?
manasvi: kya?
arjun: bhoomi bilqul theek hogaye hai...
suraj: seriously?
arjun: haan..bhaiyya...improvements ho gaye hai...aur..she's perfectly fine....
suraj: happy 4 u...brother...
shaku: aao bhoomi...tumhe thori rest ki zaroorat hoge..haina?
bhoomi: hmm...

(upstairs..it is revealed 2 yuv and shefali that bhoomi has recovered)

shefali: sach...shruti...bhoomi theek hogaye hai?
shruti: haan bhabhi...bilqul fit and fine...
yuv: tumhara matlaab..fat and fine...
(shefali feels annoyed wid this)
shefali: acha shruti..tum jao..thanx...iss news ko sunani ki liye...
shruti: koi baat nahin..(leaves)
shefali(turns 3 yuv): yuv...tumne aisa behave kyun kiya..aur voh bhi shruti ki samne?
yuv: bhoomika ki theek hone ki khabar sunki tumhe khushi hoge...lekhen mujhe nahin...
shefali: yuv..plz...sab log khush hai..aur plz..koi naye problem maat craete karna..
yuv: kyun na karo!!! kyun na karo!!!! arjun mera dushman hai...aur main aapne dushman ko itne assani se nahin chortha...
shefali: yuv..isse pehle ki tumhare naseeb mein kuch bura likha hui...sudhar jao...
yuv: chup...mujhse aise baatein maat kiya karo...jao..aapne yeh lecture kisi aur ko do...
shefali: jo bhi ho...fine..(leaves)

(shefali leaves from there...meanwhile yuv concentrates on how 2 destroy arjun and suraj)

yuv: inn dono bhai ko kaise baarbaad karna chahe...(takes out his cards...and reveals 2 cards..one wid the King of Spades..and the other wid the King of Hearts)
yuv: hmm..mera inshana...tho do baadshah hai...lekhen baadsha ko pochni ki liye...mujhe kisi weapon ki zaroorat parege...(takes another two cards...one wid the queen of spades..and the other wid the queen of hearts)

yuv: raja ko baarbaad karne ki liye...rani ki zaroorat parega...(grins)...abh main bhi dekh tha hoo...ki voh dono bhai kaise zinda rahenge...aur kaise bhi...jab voh naukarani aur voh widow wali larki...dono maare gaye hai...(laughs evilly)

(arjun passes by..and notices LK...and turns 2 him)

arjun(2 LK): dear god...aapne emre sabse bade tamaana ko puri ki hai..
LK: yeh tho mujhe karna hi tha...yeh tumhare karmo ka phal hai..
arjun: agar mujhse future mein koi bhi galti hui..phir mujhe sazza dena..aapko pata hai...main kitna daar gaya tha..
LK: ache..tarha pata hai..iss liye...maine uski raksha ki...phir tumhar ekoi tension na ho..
arjun: bhagwan...humare parivaar ko aise khush rakhi....plz...
LK: yeh bhi kuch pochni wali baat hai...zaroor...lekhen...yuvraj ko dekh kar....tumhe bhi attention dena chahe...
(arjun leaves)

Precap: Arjun~Suraj receive shocking news about something, meanwhile Yuvraj is determined to succeed in his evil aim.

Howz dat, ppl?

Shirley

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Posted: 16 June 2006 at 4:04am | IP Logged
Enjoy! Big smile

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Posted: 16 June 2006 at 4:29am | IP Logged
Clap plz do continue soon..gud going..Smile

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Posted: 16 June 2006 at 10:56pm | IP Logged
wow... too too too good....   Clap Clap Clap
i hope yuv doesnt succeed in doing something evil..

diya7000

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Posted: 19 June 2006 at 4:43am | IP Logged
Very very nice.Post the next part soon.

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Posted: 19 June 2006 at 12:53pm | IP Logged
heyi.. i'm waiting shirl.. where's more..

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