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Episode 29

(Arjun is still asleep wid bhoomi in his arms...arjun wakes up early and cant get anymore sleep...arjun luks at bhoomi and smiles at her..and then removes his arm away from her and gets up)

arjun: kya karo...? aaj thak mere zindagi mein aisa koi mushkil kaam nahin aaya...(goes downstairs..)

(bhoomi hugs the pillow..thinking its arjun..but wakes up and finds him gone..)

bhoomi: arjun? arjun....kaha ho tum? (she tries 2 sit up...but suffers a little pain in her stomach)

(arjun comes back....wid a jug of water..and a glass)

bhoomi: kaha thi tum arjun?
arjun: main water lene gaya tha..kyun...kya hua?
bhoomi(sits closer 2 him): bas...main chahti hoo ki har pal tum mere saath raho...
arjun: kyun..?
bhoomi: kyunki..mujhe daar lagta hai...lekhen tum paas hote ho...phir ahca lagta hai...
arjun(stroking her cheek): matlaab..?
bhoomi: matlaab..erm...rehne do...erm..docot ni kya kaha tha?
arjun: voh..erm...ki tumhe aapna sehat ka khayal rakhna chahe...aur medicines lena chahe...and jus the usual concerns for pregnancy...
bhoomi: lekhen tum itna serious kyun lag rahe hoo...?
arjun(tries 2 smile): main kaha serious lag raha ho...acha chalo...water peyo..doctor ni kaha tha...
(arjun tries 2 feed her water..but bhoomi refuses to)
arjun: kya hua.,..bhavri...?
bhoomi: mujhe sach batao...doctor ni kya kaha tha?
arjun: bhavri..aise koi baat nahin..
bhoomi: humare bahcya ki kasam kao...ki kuch dangerous baat tho nahin kahe doctor ni...
arjun: bhavri...plz....
bhoomi: plz..arjun...agar tumne nahin bataya...phir humare bachay ko kuch bhi ko sakta hai..
arjun: doctor ni kaha tha...ki....ki...jab tum stairs se ghir gaye...phir...koi complications ho sakte hai...aur tumhe ziada careful hona chahe...
bhoomi(starts crying): main bhi kitne buhhudu hoo...
arjun: tumahre koi galti nahin hai..
bhoomi: main...main promsie karti hoo...ki jab thak main zinda hoo...tab thak humara bacha bhi salamt rahega...
arjun(hugs her tightly): mujhe iss bachay ki kaam..tumhare ziada fikahr hai...kyunki tumhar ebeegair...main jee bhi nahin sakta....
bhoomi(holding on 2 him tightly): lekhen..tum har pal mere saath rehna...plz...i need yur support...
arjun: main hamesha tumahre saath hoo...acha...mujhe aaj afternoon mein tumhara check-up ki liye lekhar jaana hai...aur dekhan hai ki koi improvements hui hai..ya nahin...
bhoomi: i luv u...
arjun: and i luv u too...more than u cna imagine...(kisses her on the forehead)

(its is the afternoon now..and arjun takes bhoomi for her check-up)

arjun(arm around bhoomi): carefully...thats it...sweetheart...careful..
bhoomi(walking slowly): thanx arjun...tum mere saath jo ho..
arjun: hey hunny..aise baatein maath karo...acha...chalo..(go inside the doctor's clinic..)
doctor: hello bhoomi...
bhoomi: hello doctor..
doctor: kaise ho..?
bhoomi: erm...thori se better feel kar rahe ho...
doctor: ok...just lie down..and we will have a quick scan..
bhoomi: ok...

(the doctor checks the baby through the scan...and get bhoomi 2 do some tests..)

arjun: ok..bhavri..how do u feel?
bhoomi: thori se chakar aa rahe hai..
arjun: u will be ok...
bhoomi: arjun...yeh tests karne ki kya zaroorat thi?
arjun: abs aise..lekhen doctor jo bhi kuch kar rahe hai...tumahre benefit aur iss bachay ki benefit ki liye kar rahe hai...ok?
bhoomi: ok...
doctor: erm..bhoomika...results aagaye hai....
(arjun and bhoomi go 2 see the results)
doctor: pehle maine tumahre pati arjun se kaha tha...ki tumahre sehat zara throi dangerous ho sakte hai..agar tum improve nahin kar paye...lekhen i'm impressed....koi complications nahin...
arjun: matlaab...maa aur bacha dono theek hai..?
doctor: yes...aur jab delivery ka waqt hoga..phir kisi ki jaan ka danger nahin hoga...she certainly has improved..perfectly normal and healthy...
(arjun and bhoomi both are happy)
arjun: ok..thanx doctor...
(both leave)

bhoomi: dekha..maine aapna promise rakha....kyun arjunji?
arjun: lekhen bhavri..iss promise ko fulfill akrne mein...maine tumhare help buhut kiye...
bhoomi: isse buhut clear hai..ki main tumahr ebeegair kuch bhi nahin ho...aur..(arjun puts his finger on her lips)
arjun: sshhh....kuch maath kaho...kuch kehna phir ghar jaa kar kaho...u no...humare bed mein..(acts a little romantic)
bhoomi(blushing): uff arjun...ek aa raha hai..haina? phir abhi intazaar karo...
arjun: haan..jab yeh nine months khatam honge..phirse hum dono busy ho jayenge...main aur tum...
bhoomi: hmm..?
arjun: tum aur main...
bhoomi: yeah?
arjun: ek bed mein...
bhoomi(blushes): arjun...stop it...

Precap: Yuvraj thinks of another way to destroy Arjun-Bhoomi, meanwhile Arjun goves the good news of Bhoomi's improvements.

Howz dat, ppl?

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Enjoy! Big smile

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great going...ive been waitin fer yr fanfic.. Smile keep continuing soon... Clap

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thanx shirley nice update.

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wowwwwwww , shirley its really gr888888 hunny. Clap plz ryt soon. Big smile

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food good good 1 as usual... Clap
ahh.. my fav ff updated again Big smile Big smile

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