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Saarrthi 4 Suraj~Manasvi & Arjun~Bhoomi!! (Page 2)

Shirley IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 11 March 2006 at 9:27am | IP Logged
Episode 2

(suraj-manasvi-bhoomi come down....the entire Goenka parivaar is present...)

BD: suraj...bhoomi aur hum sab ke liye...yeh jo tumne kya hai...uske liye..hum tumhara shukariada karte hai...
suraj: bade dadaji...aise koi baat nahin hai...maine jo bhi kuch kiya tha...aapne parivaar ke liye hai...
shaku: aur maine tumhe baar baar thapar marte rahe...aur tum chup rahe kar...baardash karte rahe...
suraj: ma...aap...
mansen: lekhen suraj.....tumhara parivaar hum hai....main..gunvanti..yuv...aksh...vishakha...khushal...tho phir yeh siddarth aur uska parivaar ki kya karte jaa rahe hoo..?
yuv: exactly dad....aur yeh arjun....dukh ki alava aur kuch nahin deeta hai...
suraj: baas yuv...enough.....lekhen sach ko ignore nahin kar sakta main...aur sach hai yeh...ki Shakuntala Goenka mere ma hai...
mamaji: haan..bhanje lekhen kaise ma hai..jo jaanam dekar...anaatasharam main chor kar chale jaye....?
suraj: kuch....halat aise hai..lekhen...aapne jo kuch bhi mere saath kya..uska kya?
mansen: suraj...kitni baar kaho ki yuv ni uss check ka misuse kya hai...tho phir mere kya galti hai?
suraj: GALTI HAI AAPKE.....AAPNE YUV KO STOP KYUN NAHIN KYA...?
bhoomi: surajji...plz....choti se baat hai...
suraj(in a calm tone): nahin..bhoomi....kakasaheb nai mere trust ka galat advantage liya hai...
yuv: lekhen....suraj hum dono dost hai...dosti ke liye hume maaf karo...
(LK comes)
LK: suraj..aaj faisla karna parega...ya phir arjun ko chono....ya phir yuvraj ko...
suraj: lekhen tumne mere dosti ka najaiz faieda uthaya hai...
yuv: mera yeh irada tho nahin tha....aise koi intentions nahin thi mere....
LK: mahabharat...mein karan aur duryodhan dost thi..aur iss mahabharat mein..karan kaunsa faisla karega..?
suraj: phir bhi....iss puri Goenka parivaar ko dhoka karne jaa rahe thi....
mansen: dekho suraj..isse maaf kar do....(suraj remains quiet...the rest get tensed about what he will say)
suraj: nahin!!!! main aap logo maaf nahin kar sakta....
yuv: acha.....uss arjun ke liye na...that bloody arjun...
suraj(getting angry and slaps yuv hard): HEY......MERE BHAI KI KILAAF EK SHABD BHI KAHA THO MUJHSE BURA AUR KOI NAHIN HOGA!!!
aksh: suraj..aaj uss arjun aur usski parivaar ke liye..aaj tum humara saath chorne jaa rahe hoo....?
suraj: agli baar...mere bhai ya phir mere parivaar ki baari mein aisa kuch kaha...tho phir tumhe nahin choroga...
(arjun is shocked at suraj's reaction....)
(suraj..and everybody leaves...arjun is in his room, thinking when suraj slapped yuv..bhoomi comes in)
bhoomi: kya hua...arjun?
arjun(crying a little): bhavri...aaj jo bhi kuch hua...
bhoomi: aisa kya hua?
arjun: jis tarha suraj ni mere liye...
bhoomi: tho...?
arjun: maine usski saath itna nafrat karta tha...aur uski jaante hui bhi...itna care karta hai voh mere liye...
bhoomi: shukar hai...tumhe aapne glati ka ehsaas hua...
arjun: mujhe...mujhe maafi maangne chahe...
bhoomi: maafe nahin....tumhe bhai ki tarha usse accep karna chahe
arjun: aaj pehle baar mujhe aisa lag raha hai..ki mera ek aur bada bhai ka saath hai...jaante ho kiska..?
bhoomi: kiska..?
arjun: suraj ka...
bhoomi(smiles): kya...matlaab?
arjun: haan bhavri...main suraj ko aapne bhai accept karne main ready hoo...(smiles)
bhoomi(happy): sach....acha...tho jao..unse baat karo..
arjun: haan..(leaves)
(bhoomi rushes 2 LK's idol)
bhoomi: bhagwan...aaj aapne mere sun li...aaj arjun aur surajji...bhai ko accept karege...
LK: arre bhoomi...yeh tho hona hi tha...
bhoomi: thank u....very much...so much....
(arjun walks into suraj's room...suraj is working on his laptop)
arjun: suraj?
suraj(gets up): arre arjun...aao...
arjun(walking in): suraj...aaj jo bhi kuch hua...uski ke liye....thanx..
suraj: thanx ke koi zaroorat nahin hai...
arjun: nahin...galti mere hai...baar baar main tumhare saath nafrat karta tha....aur...tum baardash karte rahe..
suraj: arjun.....yeh sab choro...forget it...
arjun(stars crying): mujhe maaf kar do....mujhse buhut bada gunnah hua hai...(folds his hands)...mujhe maaf kar do....
suraj(holds his hands): arre...kya ek bhai ko aapne bade bhai se maafi maangtha hai kya?
arjun: suraj...i'm-i'm...sorry...
suraj(tears coming out): it's ok...bhoomi theek kehte thi...buhut ziddi hu tum...
arjun: aaj se...tum mer eliye...koi ordinary suraj-kiran nhaon ho..aaj se...mere liye...ho ek bhai...aaj se main aapko...bhaiyya kahoga...
suraj: ek conditon phar...?
arjun: kya?
suraj: pehle yeh rona baand karo...wipe those tears of yurs...
arjun(smiles): plz.....stay wid us....i need u....plz...
suraj: mere choti bhai ni kaha tho..phir....ok..i'llstay...(both brothers hug each other...)
arjun: i'm lucky 2 have a brother like u...
suraj: koi shaq...mujhse aur better bhai mil sakta hai...
(shaku passes by....and sees both brothers hugging each other)
shaku; arjun...suraj...
arjun: jee mamma..?
shaku: kya hua..?
suraj: ma...arjun aur main...ek doosri ko bhai ki tarha accept kar liye hai..
shaku: sach...aaj main buhut khush hoo...(siddarth comes in)
siddarth: beta...aaj tumne humare liye...support kiya...uske ke liye...thanx karne aaya tha..
suraj: papa....aapko ujhe thanx karne ke liye..koi zaroorat nahin hai..
siddarth: aaj se...tum suraj-kiran nahin...suraj goenka hoo...suraj siddarth goenka....
suraj: thanx papa....(hugs him)

Precap: Mansen and Khushal are furious that Arjun~Suraj are brothers now, meanwhile Suraj decides to stop working with Mansen.

Howz dat, ppl?
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Posted: 12 March 2006 at 5:09am | IP Logged
amazing shirley............ Clap
ur getting more rocking day by day... Wink
its lovely...u don need to ask how it is..
arjun-suraj scene is fab..n i wish suraj did leav mansen's family in saarthi too..
its great... with no shaqs Wink Tongue Smile
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Posted: 12 March 2006 at 9:47am | IP Logged
Episode 3

(the next day....arjun-suraj come down together)

baisa: aao...nashta karo..
arjun(sitting down): erm..bhavri....nashta ready hai...?
bhoomi: haan....(gives him his breakfast...and sits besides him)
suraj: erm...ma...vo plate deena....
shaku: theek hai..(passes him the plate)
(mamaji is about 2 sit next 2 arjun...but arjun interrupts)
arjun: erm...mamaji...yeh kisi aur ki seat hai..
mamaji: kiski hai?
arjun: bhaiyya...aap ahan mere saath nashta karo...
(suraj sits next 2 arjun....and both have breakfast together...mansen and his family r jealous)
arjun: erm..bhaiyya aaj aap kaam phar jaa rahe hai..?
suraj(remembers that he works wid mansen):nahin...iss baat ko mujhe aap sabse baat karne thi...
siddarth: aise kaise baat hai..beta?
suraj: main abh kakasaheb ki saath kaam nahin kar sakta..
(everyone is shocked)
mansen(shocked): kyun nahin...?
suraj: kyunki....log jo jhuth bolti hai...unki saath kaam karna mere fithrat mein nahin hai...
siddarth: beta...tum chaho...tum arjun ki saath kaam karna...
bhoomi: haan...jhetji..(mansen is shocked 2 hear this)..papa theek keh rahe hai...aap arjun ki saath kaam kare...
arjun: haan bhaiyya...aap mere saath kaam karege..tho buhut mazaa aayega...do bhai...kaam kar rahe hai...
mamaji: yeh jhetji kya hai...?
bhom: arre mamaji...jhet voh hota hai...jo pati ka bada bhai ho...
yuv: matlaab?
bhoomi: matlaab...aapko nahin pata....?
aksh: kya nahin pata?
manasvi: ki..arjun aur suraj ek doosri ko bhai ki tarha accept kar liya hai...
(mansen and everyone r surprised..)
baisa: sach...?
BD: yeh tho...badi khushi ki baat hai...
khushi: khushi tho hoge iss ghar mein...after all...mera anaam jo khushi hai...
manasvi: koi shaq...beta?
khushi: mummy...mere school jaane ka time hogaya hai...
suraj: beta...main aapko drop kar deta doo...
khushi: ok..uncle...
LK: abh..jab arjun aur karan bhai hai...phir durodhan aur shakuni ka kaunsa naya khayl hai..?
(mansen and khushal upstairs)
mansen(angry): samjh nahin aa raha hai...ki arjun aur suraj ki beech mein jo nafrat thi..voh kaise meeth gaye...?
mamaji: jeeja....aap bhi...gussi mein hote hai...jeeja agar voh dono bhai hogaye hai...tho kya hua...phir bhi unko baarbad karna assan hoga...
mansen: voh kaise..?
mamaji: jeeja...bas sirf waqt ki saath dekh thi raho...

(arjun-suraj at work)

suraj: acha...arjun...pata hai...mr. sharma...nai bhoomi ki designs ko buhut ache lage hai...tho tumhe yeh contract theek lagta hai ya nahin?
arjun: bhaiyya..aapko acha feel ho...tho mujhe bhi aisa lagta hai....aapki haar decisions ko main accept kartha hoo...
suraj: voh tho sab theek hai...lekhen...
arjun: hmm....theek hai...half an hour mein ek meeting hoge...lekhen usse pehle...(phone rings)
arjun: ek minute...
suraj: haan sure...
arjun: hello...
bhoomi: haan arjun...kaise ho?
arjun: theek ho..aur tum?
bhoomi: aur jhetji...?
arjun: tumhare jhetji theek hai...phone kyun kiya?
bhoomi: tumhare awax suna chahti thi?
arjun: oh....mere awaz...aise kaunse special quality hai mere awaz mein..
bhoomi: hehehehehehe....arjun...
arjun: yeh hehehehehehe kya hai...acha jaldi karo...mera ek meeting bhi hai...
bhoomaaj ghar jaldi aana...ok?
arjun: kyun?
bhoomi: kyunki...Mrs. Bhoomika Arjun Goenka ni kaha hai..iss liye...
arjun: ooh...tough...i like it....ok..bye...
bhoomi: arre...bye kaise...pehle kuch kaho...
arjun: ka kaho...?
bhoomi: erm....the 3 magic words...
arjun: acha...ok...I....Love....You....bhavri...
bhoomi: awwww....i love u too...
arjun: bas ek baar kaho na...arjun ki saath...
bhoomi: i love u too arjun...
suraj(taps arjun on the shoulder): chale...?
arjun: haan..ok...bhavri...gotta go..bye....(puts the phone down)
suraj: acha...arjun...agar romance khatam hogaya hai..tho phir chale?
arjun: haan chalo..lekhen ek baat pocho bhaiyya?
suraj: haan pocho...
arjun: aap kabhi bhi shaadi nahin karna chahti...
suraj(remembers manasvi): erm....meeting ka waqt hogaya hai..chale?
arjun: kya apni kabhi bhi kisisi pyar kiya hai...? kya aapka dil kisi ki liye tarpata nahin hai..?
suraj: nahin...aisa koi insaan...nahin hai...
arjun: lekhen bhaiyya...main aapko aise akele nahin dekh sakta....mere paas bhavri hai...lekhen aapke paas koi nahin hai...
suraj: hai na...dekho..papa hai..mama hai...aur shruti preeti hai....
arjun: main ek jeevan saathi ki baat kar raha hoo...
suraj: erm..arjun....voh lamha mere zondagi abhi thak nahin aaya...jo mere sapno mein aate hai....usko abhi thak dekha nahin hai....ya phir...pyar ki dastan shoro nahin hui hai....abh chalo na....dhir ho rahe hai...(leaves)
arjun: lekhen...aap kisisi mohabbat karte hai...aur ek din aap unsi milege....(leaves)

Precap: Yuvraj decides to avenge Suraj, as he insulted him. Mamaji controls Yuv by telling him to make use of Suraj's weakness.

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Episode 4

(Suraj~Arjun's meeting is over...Suraj remembers that he needs 2 collect Khushi)

suraj: arre....arjun..mujhe khushi ko collect karna hai...
arjun: theek hai...tho phir main aapko ghar phar milta hoo...
suraj: theek hai..(leaves...and reaches khushi's school...khushi sees suraj and runs 2 him)
khushi: hi uncle....kaise ho aap?
suraj: main theek hoo...aur aap?
khushi: dekhti kaise ho?
suraj(pulls her cheeks as a joke): so chhwweett....ok chalo..
khushi: uncle..mujhe koi chocolates chahe?
suraj: kyun..lekhen aapke mummy ni tho maana kiya tha..haina?
khushi: haan...lekhen chup chupke...mummy ko nahin pata chaliga....plz...uncle...plz...
suraj: hmm....theek hai....lekhen ap aapni mummy ko maath patana....ok?
khushi(getting happy): yay.......thank u.....aur main nahin batao gi....
suraj: deal?
khushi: deal...(give each other a high-five)
(arjun comes home...)
arjun: arre bhavri..kaha ho?
bhoomi: arre yahan ho....kya hua?
arjun: uff...aaj main buhut tired hoo....buhut kaam kiya...
bhoomi: acha...tho phir jaldi se fresh ho kar aao..phir main dinner ready karte hoo...ok?
arjun: ok...madam....jaise aap chahti hai...
bhoomi: ok...jao...(arjun goes 2 freshen up..meanwhile suraj and khushi return home)
khushi: uncle...itna acha choclate maine kabhi nahin liya...
suraj: sshhh.....aapke mummy ko pata chal gaya..ki aapne chocolates liye hai..tho phir...mera kya hoga...yeh tho socho...
khushi: haan...ok......
bhoomi: arre khushi aagaye hoo...?
khushi: haan bhoomi aunty...aur pata hai ki suraj uncle ni mer eliye..(suraj stops her from continuing..)
bhoomi: kya hua...?
suraj: kuch nahin...
bhoomi: kuch tho hai....kya hai?
khushi: suraj uncle ni mere liye chocolates liye thi...
bhoomi: acha...lekhen beta aapke mummy ko pata chala tho..?
khushi: arre baba nahin pata chaliga....
suraj: wah...aapke zaban tho scissors ki tarha chalta hai...
khushi: buhut fast haina?
bhoomi: haan...lekhen khushi aap ready hojao....kyunki dinner ka waqt hone wala hai...
khushi: ok..abhi aaye...(leaves)
suraj: buhut sharati hai...
bhoomi: bachi hote aise...
suraj: acha...arjun hai yahan phar..?
bhoomi: haan voh fresh hone liye gaye hai..aap bhi fresh ho kar aao..jhetji...
suraj: ok...abhi aaya...(leaves..manasvi comes)
manasvi: kya ho raha hai bhoomi?
bhoomi: oh kuch nahin..bas abhi abhi khushi aaye thi..
manasvi: acha...theek tho haina?
bhoomi: haan...bas sirf fresh ho kar aayegi...
manasvi: khushi ko collect kisni kiya?
bhoomi: erm..jhetji....
manasvi: matlaab suraj ni....?
bhoomi: haan...kyun kya hua?
manasvi(smiles): ok....main bas sirf daar gaye..ki khushi ko kisi ni collect nahin kiya...
bhoomi: arre bhabhi aap itna darthi kyun hai..?
manasvi: kya karo bhoomi...ek ma hamesha aapne aulad ki liye daar thi hai...dekho....(arjun~suraj comes down..bhoomi and manasvi dont realise this..and hear the girls' conversation)....dekho..pehle main ek patni thi...lekhen aapne pati ko kone ka daar nahin tha...lekhen voh daar sach hogaya...(starts crying)
(arjun~suraj luk at satya's photo...and feel upset)
arjun: bhaiyya...erm...chale?
suraj: haan chalo...
arjun: arre wah..dinner ready hai ya nahin..?
suraj: lekhen sab kaha hai..bade dadaji..baisa aur papa...aur mama...?
manasvi: voh aate hoge...
(the rest come..khushi comes as well)
baisa: acha...arjun...suraj..kaam kaisa tha..?
suraj: theek tha baisa..
khushi: uncle..arjun..uncle..mujhe pani chahe..
arjun: acha..apko..pani chahe yeh lo..(gives her the water)
suraj: oh..haan manasvi..khushi ki teacher ni khushi ki baari mein baat kar rahe thi..keh rahe thi ki khsuhi buhut achi larki hai..aur buhut kaam karti...
manasvi: acha....khushi beta...so proud of u....
khushi: thank u mummy...
manasvi: u r welcum..beta...
khushi: mummy...papa ko bhi batao ki teacher ni mere baari mein kya kaha...(everyone is shocked 2 hear this)
manasvi: aap...aapke papa ko?
khushi: haan....vaise mere papa kahan hai..?
yuvraj: kahiin hell mein hoge...
suraj(getting angry): SHUT UP!!!! ENOUGH!!!
shaku: suraj...plz...
suraj: nahin mama...iss ni mere bhai ki kilaf kuch kaha...tumhare himmath kaise hui?
arjun: after all...satya bhaiyya kya kiya tumhare saath...jo tum aisa kuch keh rahe hoo...
bhoomi: arjun...just relax..
arjun: kaise relax karo..bhavri...kaise...?
(manasvi starts crying..and goes upstairs..suraj goes after her)
siddarth: mansen...aaj tumhara beta..hardh kiya...agar yuv ki saath aisa hota...aur satya yuv ki against aisa kehta tho tumhe bura nahin lagta...?
mansen: siddarth....mujhe in choti moti baato mein koi interest nahin hai..tumne mere beta suraj ko mujhse cheena hai..tho phir kya kaho..?
shruti: kakasaheb...humne bhaiyya ko aapse cheena nahin...actually...paya humne...
aksh: tum....chup karo...har waqt tum bolti rehti hoo...
shefali: plz aksh...aisa maat kaho...plz...dinner ka waqt hai..aur...
yuv: shefali...mere patni hone ki bavajooth bhi..tum inn logo ka saath dee rahe ho....
shefali: yuv...plz...agar tumne uss cheque ka misuse nahin kiya hota...tho aaj suraj tumhare saath hota...lekhen...aaj nahin tho kal..suraj ko aapne asli parivaa rki saath hona ee tha...
LK: yeh tumne bilqul sach kaha...shefali...yuv..aaj nahin tho kal...suraj tho arjun ka saath din tha...iss mein tum kiya kar sakte hoo...?
yuv: main sab kuch kar sakta hoo....jabse tum log aaye hoo...tho phir mere zindagi kharab hoge hai..(leaves)

(manasvi starts crying...and holds satya's photo)
manasvi(2 satya's photo): dekha satya....tumhare jaane ki baad bhi...inn logo abhi thak shanti nahin aaye...aaj khushi ko uski papa ki zaroorat hai...kya kaho main usse...kisko uska papa banao..(then suraj comes at the door...manasvi can see suraj's reflection in the photo frame...she turns around)
manasvi: tum...yahan?
suraj: manasvi....plz...aisa rokhar...aapna dil ko dukh maat do..
manasvi: main kya karo...kaor tho kya karo....aaj yuv ni jo bhi kuch kaha...
suraj: galat kaha....lekhen....fkhar maat karo...jab main hoo..tho phir tumhe fikhar karne koi zaroorat nahin hai..ok..?
manasvi: ok...
suraj: khushi...mere responsiblity hai...tum fikhar maat karo....aur yuv ka...usse main handle karoga....tum fikhar maat karo..(wipes her tears)
manasvi: thanx..
suraj: manasvi...dost kabhi bhi ek doosri ko thanx nahin kehte...rite?
maansvi: rite..(smiles)..
suraj: chalo...neeche chalti hai..
(both leave...LK comes)
LK: bilqul sahe kaha tumne suraj...Mahabharat mein Draupadi Karan ke liye koi ehsaas nahin tha..lekhen yeh Draupadi(manasvi)...karan ke liye kyun ehsaas mesoos ho raha hai..?
(yuv and mamaji upstairs)
yuv: bas mamaji...bas....main uss suraj se badla lekhar raho ga....
mamaji: bhanje...relax...arram se koi faisla lo..
yuv: aabh main suraj si badla loga...
mamaji: shabash bhanji...aur agar tumhe badla leena hai..tho phir suraj ki kamzori ka advantage lo..
yuv: kamzori..matlaab?
mamaji: matlaab..jisi voh sabse mohabbat karta hai...jis ki bina voh jee nahin sakta...aisa kaunsa insaan hai..
yuv(thinking): samjh agaye..mamaji....suraj se badla leni ke liye..mujhe Manasvi thak pochna parega....
mamaji: kya matlaab.....uska hkoon karoge..?
yuv: nahin..mamaji..usse ziada aur kuch karoga....jisi na suraj zinda hoga...na manasvi....main voh karoga..voh mahabharat mein dushasan draupadi ki saath nahin kar paya...(grins)

Precap: Suraj goes to meet Manasvi in her oom, but is shocked to see something.

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Posted: 14 March 2006 at 3:28am | IP Logged
Episode 5

(Arjun-Suraj r discussing their business issues....)

arjun: bhaiyya...mujhe lagta hai ki...yeh contract leena chahe?
suraj: main bhi yeh chahtha hoo...aur hume careful hona chahe....kyunki humara ek loss bhi kakasaheb ke liye jeeth ho sakte hai..
arjun: i agree....acha...main zara bhavri ko bata hoo...main abhi aaya...
suraj: sure....take yur time...(arjun leaves..mamaji comes)
mamaji: kaise ho...bhanje?
suraj: aap....?
mamaji: dekho....jo bhi hua...yuvraj ko maaf kar do....
suraj: mamaji...jhuth boli wale mujhe ache nahin lagte...
mamaji: lekhen...
suraj: lekhen kuch nahin....main aapne parivaar sa saath donga....arjun ka saath...bhoomi ka saath...aur....jo saath aap aur kakasaheb ki saath karta tha...voh mera ateet hai....my past...(leaves)
mamaji(thinking): aabh kaniye bachaiye....tumhare manasvi ko...hehehe(grins)

(manasvi is in her room...yuv comes in)

manasvi: yuv...kya baat hai?
yuv: tum log samjhthi kya hoo aapni aap ko?
manasvi: kya hua...aise kyun..?
yuv: shut up.....shut up....
manasvi: dekho yuv...better hoga..agar tum yahan se chali jao...varna...
yuv: varna...varna kya...?
manasvi: varna..acha nahin hoga....
yuv: theek kaha tumne....acha nahin hoga....(pushes her down on her sofa...and tries 2 force himself on her...maansvi tries 2 scream...but yuv covers her mouth...manasvi deliberately knocks over a vase...the vase breaks and suraj hears the noise...and goes in manasvi's room...and is shocked 2 see yuv misbehaving wid manasvi...)

suraj: YUVRAJ!!!!!
yuv(turns around): main...voh...
(manasvi's sari comes off her shoulder...there are scratchmarks on her arms....manasvi puts her sari over her shoulder...suraj takes off his jacket...and wraps it around manasvi)

suraj: manasvi....jao..mere kamri mein...jao..
manasvi: lekhen...?
suraj: jao...
manasvi: theek hai...(leaves)
suraj: himmath kasie hui tumhare.....huh....(slaps him hard...)...HIMMATH KAISE HUI TERE......manasvi ki saath aisa.....shame on you.....
yuv: haan....haan...maine manasvi ki saath aisa kiya....tho phir mera badla pura hui...
suraj: badla leena tha....tho mujhe lo...lekhen maansvi ki saath....
yuv: kyunki...main jaanta tha...ki manasvi ko kuch hogaya tho phir tum zinda ho kar bhi tum jee nahin paogi....kyunki tum manasvi si buhut mohabbat karte hoo....
suraj:just shut up....shut up.....chalo mere saath.....chalo....aaj tumhara ek aur insult nahin kiya tho phir mera naam suraj nahin....(pulls him forcefully downstairs..)
suraj: mansen goenka.....kaha hai aap aapna chehra chupa kar.....samne aaye...
mansen: kya hai....kyun itna shout kar rahe hoo....?
suraj: dekhe.....aapni beta ki kartoot ko dekhe....iss ne ek innocent larki ki izzat cheene ki kohsish ki hai...
gunvanti: kya matlaab?
suraj: matlaab...yeh gunvanti kaki....ki yuvraj ni manasvi ki zabardasti karne ki koshish kiya hai...(everyone is shocked...tears come out of shefali's eyes...and at the same time is angry)
(shefali wallks up2 yuv)
shefali: how could u.....HOW COULD U...YUV?????
LK: kaise mor aagaya hai iss mahabharat mein...?
shefali: how dare u....try 2 force yurself on manasvi bhabhi....how dare you(keeps slapping him...continously)
yuv: shefali...voh...
shefali(interrupts): SHUT UP.....dont take myname wid that dirty tongue of yurs.....I....cant live wid u anymore yuv....how did u do that...?
yuv: because...i wanted 2 avenge...
gunvanti: yuv...today...u abused my mamta...meremamata ki zilat kiya tumne.....u insulted my womb....i'm not yur mom.....u cant be my son...i had a true son...suraj...but..bcoz of that misuse cheque situation i lost him....
mansen: I did not expect this from u...yuv....
suraj: aaj main aapke saath sab rishtee jala donga main...(holds out the documents which he signed that made him mansen's legal heir...)
suraj: pehchana isse....yeh voh documents hai..jo maine sign kie hai...phir main aapka beta ban gaya....aur aaj main usse jala donga...(burns it...and what is left of the document r just ashes..)
suraj: yurs and my relationship is just bits of ashes....aaj ki baad aap sirf mere liye kakasaheb hai...mera baap....aur ma....yeh dono hai(points 2 siddath and shaku)(and then leaves)

(manasvi is upstairs, sitting on the bed...suraj comes in and sits next 2 her on the bed)

suraj: manasvi....r u ok now?
manasvi: he....tried....2...(stars cring and hugs suraj tightly...suraj is surprised..but hugs back)
suraj: sshh.....its ok.....main hoon na...
manasvi(hugging suraj more tight): dont leave me....satya left me...now u dont leave me...plz...
suraj: i wont....i promise i wont....(hugs her back)
suraj: ok...u should go 2 bed now....ok?
manasvi: ok....(lies down....suraj puts the blanket on her)
suraj: and manasvi...i want u 2 be the old manasvi again...
manasvi: meaning?
suraj: one that neva luks dul...one that used 2 luk really bright...full of life...
manasvi(smiles): ok...(suraj leaves)

Precap:Shefali tells everyone that she has an announcement, meanwhile Arjun wants to confess something to Bhoomi.

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