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hey thats so nice yaar Tongue . u made my day Tongue .
these last two episodes were really rocking Clap Clap

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Posted: 22 April 2006 at 7:53am | IP Logged
ok..updating episode 28 Big smile

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Episode 28

(The next morning: the Goenka family is having breakfast downstairs)

arjun: bhavri..tum yeh fruits kao..
bhoomi: arjun..main koi choti bachey thori hoo?
arjun: nahin..lekhen tumhare pati hone ki nati main kehta hoo..ki fruits kao...
bhoomi: ok...i'll have them...
shaku: arjun..aaj tum kaam phar jaogi..?
arjun: erm..aaj tho jaana parega..bhaiyya bhi ghar phar nahin hai..aur sif main hoo...aur bhavri..
shefali: bhooi ka khayal main rakhonge...(smiles)..tum sirf office jao..
arjun: thanx shefali...
shefali: its ok..
bhoomi: acha..tum aaj office jaoge...?
arjun: haan..kyun?
bhoomi: lekhen tumahre beegair dil nahin lagega...
arjun: bhavri..main buhut jald se wapis aajaonga...ok?
bhoomi(smiles): ok...tum jao...
arjun: aur haan..yaad rakhna...koi kaam maath karna ok...?
bhoomi(holding her head): erm....ok..
arjun: kya hua..bhavri..tum theek tho ho?
bhoomi(holding her head): arjun...buhut dard hoo raha hai...arjun..(faints)
arjun: bhavri!!!! bhavri..kya hua..?
shefali: main docotr ko phone karte hoo..
shaku: theek hai...

(the doctor comes and checks bhoomi..bhooi is asleep in her room..)

doctor: inhe chakar aagaye hai..
arjun: lekhen kyun doctor?
doctor: isski baari mein main aapse bahar baat karna chahta hoo..
arjun; ok..erm..mama...bhavri ka khayal rakhiye..
shaku: theek hai..
(arjun goes outside the room wid the doctor)

arjun: kya baat hai..doctor?
doctor: dekhiye...khabrani ki koi baat nahin hai..lekhen kya yeh stairs se gir gaye thi..?
arjun: erm..zara sa slip kargaye..lekhen theek thi..kyun..?
doctor: luk..mr.goenka...aapko apne patni aur bachay ka acha khayal rakhna chahe...kyunki agar koi bhi galti hoo tho phir jab delivery ka waqt hoga..phir yeh na ho..ki yeh faisla karna parhe...ki maa ki zindagi ko bachaye ya phir bachay ki..
arjun: matlaab...deicde between mother and child..?
doctor: yes..lekhen agar aapne bhoomika-ji ka acha luk after kiya..phir delivery can go ok...wid no complications..
arjun: thank u doctor...
doctor: ok..main chalti hoo...
arjun: ok..
(doctor leaves)
(arjun goes over 2 LK's idol)

arjun( 2 LK): yeh mujhe kis gunaah ki sazaa mil rahe hai..bhagwan?
LK: yeh koi sazaa nahin hai arjun..yeh tho tumhara kasautii hai...
arjun: maine aaj thak koi bhi glaat kaam nahin kiya..phir aisa kyun..?
LK: iss mein koi shak nahin hai..tumne tho koi galat kaam nahin kiya..
arjun: agar gunnah maine kiya..phir sazaa mujhe dee...lekhen bhavri aur mere bachay ko kuch maat kare...
LK: fikhar maat karo arjun...tumhare bhavri ya phir abhimanyu ko kuch nahin hoga....
arjun: bas..ek aap hai jis phar mujhe yakeen hai..aur yakeen hai..ki mere bhavri aur humare bachay ko kuch nahin hoga...
LK: yeh tho mujhe bhi pata hai..arjun..aur main tumhare yakeen ko kabhi nahin dootni donga...

Precap: Arjun decides to work all on his own, as he does not want Bhoomi and their child to suffer.

Howz dat, ppl?

(sorry 4 the short update) Smile

Shirley

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Posted: 22 April 2006 at 8:08am | IP Logged
Enjoy! Tongue

Mastang

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Posted: 22 April 2006 at 12:12pm | IP Logged
hey thanks 4 da update......

cant wait 4 da next one...let c what shefali will do now.....

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Posted: 22 April 2006 at 12:14pm | IP Logged
hey thanks 4 da update......

cant wait 4 da next one...let c what shefali will do now.....

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Posted: 22 April 2006 at 2:13pm | IP Logged
hey..cool episode shirley... Clap Clap bas dont let anythin happen to arjun or bhavri or the kid.. LOL LOL n im sure all wud go well as LK is with 'em... Big smile

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Posted: 22 April 2006 at 8:54pm | IP Logged
Just cool and keep it up.

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