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Episode 26

(everyone is sitting in the hall downstairs)

arjun: aur phir voh raha humara holiday...buhut acha tha..aur romantic bhi..
shruti: uff..arjun bhaiyya bhi na....(laughs)
arjun: kya matlaab?
suraj: kuch nahin..arjun..bas behens aise hote hai..
arjun: hmm..true..ek dum ziddi jaise..
preeti: hey..surja bhaiyya...thats not fair..
suraj: arjun..be fair..
bhoomi: arjun...humare holiday ki khatam hone ki baad...jhetji..aur manasvi bhabhi.ko apne honeymoon phar jaana tha...
arjun: haan..mujhe yaad hai..yeh tho jayenge...
manasvi: lekhen arjun..aise kaise..?
shaku: manasvi..jao na..zara thora enjoy kar lena...
suraj; lekhen maa..humare paas tickets nahin hai..phir..kaise jaye hum dono?
arjun: mujhe pata tha..ki yeh kehenge...iss liye...ta-da..(shows them the tickets)
suraj: iss ki kya zaroorar thiarjun?
arjun: bhaiyya..aap mereitna kuch kar chuke hai..phir yeh do tickets kuch nahin hai...
suraj: thanx..(both brothers hug each other)
manasvi: lekhen khushi..?
bhoomi: erm..bhabhi..khushi ko maine samjha diya hai..voh bilqul theek rehege...aap bas jao..
shefali: haan bhabhi..bhoomi theek nahin hai tho kya hua..main hoon na...aur shakuntala kaki bhi hai..aur mummy-ji..aur baisa bhi hai..aur shruti..preeti..tho fikhar kyun karna?
manasvi: acha..shefali...aap jeethi hum haare...
shefali: acha..bhabhi..maine aapke saare bags pack kar liye hai..aap bas sirf jao..
suraj: ok..

(after a while..getting their stuff together...s- leave 4 their flight..both r in the plane)

manasvi;vaise..suraj..hum kaha jaa rahe hai..?
suraj: erm...shimla mein..
manasvi: shimla..kyun?
suraj: arjun ni decide kiya hai..keh raha tha..ki buhut romantic place hai..iss liye..tum tho jaante hoo..arjun ko..aur kitna shararati ho sakta hai...
manasvi: haan...yaad hai...shimla ki college bhi hum dono study karti thi..?
suraj: haan..ache tarha yaad hai..mujhe...jaise ki kal ki baat thi..(gets flashbacks of his past in shimla)

(flashback 1: suraj-manasvi in class..suraj was a spoilt boy then..and manasvi a innocent girl...suraj had his legs up on the desk..and was not studying..and manasvi was copying all the notes down)

teacher: suraj..kiran...legs down..
suraj: tera baap karega...
manasvi: suraj..legs down..teacher ko gussa hoga...
suraj: hone do..mujhe kya?
teacher: legs neeche..varna..main principal ko bula tha hoo...
manasvi: nahin sir..principal ko nahin..yeh abhi voh karega..voh aap kehenge..(forcibully...makes him puts his legs down)
suraj: argh!! manasvi..u r too much...
manasvi: aur jaise ki tum kaam ho kya?

(suraj breaks free of the flashback...)

manasvi: kaunse khayal mein lost hogaye?
suraj: kuch nahin...
(the plane lans..and s-m get out..they go 2 a luxurious hotel..a storm starts up..many ppl r taking up the hotel rooms 4 shelter)
reception: hi..how may i help u?
suraj: yeah..erm...2 rooms plz...
reception: i'm sorry sir..storm ki wajah se...humare saare rooms book hogaye hai..
suraj: oh..saare rooms?
rception: erm..except one..sirf ek room hai..agar aapko chahe?
suraj: erm..ok..we'll take it...
reception: ok..here r the keys sir..enjoy yur stay
suraj: thank u...
manasvi: kya hua..?
suraj; manasvi..storm ki wajah se...aare rooms booked hogaye hai..aur..sirf ek room bacha tha....
manasvi: koi baat nahin....chalo..

(both get 2 their flor..suraj opens the room)

manasvi(luking around): kafi khoobsurat room..haina?
suraj; haan..
manasvi(putting her bags down): main zara thora rest karna chahti hoo...
suraj: theek hai..tum rest karo...main zara unpack karta hoo...
manasvi: ek tho iss baarish ki wajah se...main tho...i'm wet..(manasvi is wearing a gold blouse wid black see-through sari..and suraj wearing a brown leather jacket..wid black jeans..and white shirt Embarrassed Wink )
suraj; acha..tum change karo..main bhi karta hoo...
manasvi: ok...

(manasvi goes up 2 suraj..and notices suraj's hand bandaged)

manasvi: yeh tumhare haath ko kya hua?
suraj: kuch nahin...zara thori chot lage..nothing serious..just relax..(smiles)
manasvi: mujhse jhuth bhoolti hoo...?
suraj: maine jhuth kabh bhoola..?
manasvi: lekhen tumhara yeh haath...?
suraj: main jhuth tho nahin bul raha ho..manasvi...aise choti tensions leena chor do..
manasvi: kyun..main tumhare patni hoo..suraj..mera haaq banta hai..
suraj: haan..lekhen tum itna tensed kyun ho mere liye...? tell me....kyun?
manasvi: Kyunki main tumse pyar karne lage ho!!!!!!!!
suraj: kya....?
manasvi: haan...pata nahin kabh aur kaise...lekhen...i luv u...i luv u a lot...(holds me tightly..suraj holds her tightly too)
manasvi: i luv u...somuch...i feel attracted 2 u..
suraj(kisses her on the forehead): i luv u too...

(suraj carries her in his arms,and puts her on the bed gently. He slowly takes off her jewellery and leaves her hair loose. manasvi's sari falls off her shoulder...and suraj gently makes her lie down..and goes on top of her...and kisses her on the neck...and hugs her...the lights switch off)

(back at heritage house, mansen and khushal r furious about bhoomi's child's survival)

khushal; jeeja...pata nahin..kya garbar hai uss oil mein..jo bhoomika ki bachay ko maar nahin saka..
mansen: khushal..tum fikhar maat karo...
khushal: lekhen jeeja...star plus ki saare serials mein yeh dekha thi hai ki larkis ka miscarriages hota rehta hai..kabhi uss kashish ka..ya phir..uff..bhoomi aise kyun nahin ghir sakte..?
mansen: khushal..tumhe pata nahin ki tumhare defects ki kya hai..yeh ki tum sabar nahin karte thi...sabar karo...thori dhir aur rukhu...
khushal: jeeja..pehle iss bhoomika ko arjun se alaag karna hoga...kyunki jab thak arjun hai..usski paas phir bhoomika ka kuch nahin ho sakta..
LK: galat keh rahe hai aap shakuni mamaji...arjun ho ya na ho...lekhen bhoomi ki saath main hamesha rehonga..aur aapse aur mansen se bhi uska raksha karonga...

(back at shimla..it is 3:30 am...suraj wakes up...wid manasvi in his arms...suraj slowly..slowly..moves away from manasvi..and gets up..later manasvi wakes up)

manasvi: kya hua..itne jaldi kaise uth gaye tum?
suraj: oh..kuch nahin...bas aise..
manasvi: erm..suraj...jo bhi kal raat ko hua..kya tum usse lekhar upset ho?
suraj: nahin..bas..aise uth gaya...
manasvi: acha..subha ko kya karenge...?
suraj: subha ko choro..just worry about 2nite...(moves more closer 2 her and both let their resistance down...hug each other)

Precap: Yuvraj plans to take over SC, meanwhile Mansen suggests that Suraj can comes back to their side, if his marriage with Manasvi remains unconsummated.

Howz dat, ppl?

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gr8 episode....actually i've started reading ur fan fic recently and i think its awesome Big smile

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thanx 4 the comment bismazaman...updating episode 27 Big smile

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Episode 27

(The next morning: Yuv goes in Aksh's room)

yuv: aksh..mujhe tumse kuch baat karne thi..
aksh: haan..kya hai?
yuv: aksh..abh suraj aur manasvi iss waqt ghar phar nahin hai...aur..
aksh: yuv..agar tum ek naya plan bana rahe hoo..tho yeh yaad rakho..ki arjun aur bhoomika bhi ghar phar hai..
yuv: aksh...bhoomika pregnant hai...voh kaam kar nahin skate..aur bacha hai arjun..usko bhi raaste se hata deete hai..
aksh: matlaab...accident...?
yuv: nahin..kuch kaam se usse busy kar deete hai..phir voh office nahin aa sake...
aksh: yuv..aaj thak tumhara haar plan fail hota jaa raha hai...aur kya guarantee hai ki iss baar succeed hoga?
yuv: aksh..main sughandhi creations ko take-over karna chahta hoo..
aksh(surprised): kya...?
yuv: suna tumne..
aksh: dimag kharab hogaya hai tumhara...? agar tumne aisa kiya..phir voh arjun hume nahin chorega...
yuv: tum hamesha arjun se kyun daarte hoo..?
aksh: lekhen...kya tumne dad se pocha..
yuv: nahin..abhi nahin..lekhen mujhe pura yakeen hai...ki voh mere baat zaroor agree karenge...
(yuv leaves)

(yuv enters mansen and khushal's room)

yuv: dad..mujhe aapse kuch baat karne hai..
khushal: bhanje..aao..aao...
mansen: kya baat hai..yuv?
yuv: dad...mujhe lagta hai ki hume sughandhi creations ko take-over karna chahe...
khushal(surprised): bhanje...himmath se kaam lo...yeh faisla kyun?
yuv: kyunki main arjun aur bhoomika ko beeghar karna chahta hoo...
mansen: yuvraj..tumne yeh chahti ki property ka share tumhare naam mein hui...lekhen...surja ki wajah se kya hua..aur proeprty ki saare caretakers voh 4 bangaye...aur..main koi risk nahin lee sakta..
yuv: iska matlaab..aap mera saath nahin deenge..?
mansen: nahin..jao yahan se..
yuv: whateva...(leaves in anger)
khushal: jeeja..aapko aisa react nahin karna chahe tha..
mansen: kyun..aur kya karta..saath deeta uska?
khushal: yeh aapko karna chahe tha...kyunki humara manzil yeh hai jeeja arjun aur uska parivaar ki baarbaadi..
mansen: tho?
khushal: tho..yuvraj ka issthamal karki..hum yeh manzil ponch sakte hai....samjh mein aaya jeeja?
mansen: haan khushal..bilqul samjh aaya..lekhen usse pehle main chahta hoo ki suraj phirse mere parivaar ka sadasya bane..
khushal: jeeja..aisa kyun?
mansen: voh humare liye buhut kaam aa sakta hai..lekhen agar uski shaadi manasvi ki saath puri nahin hui..tho yeh possible hai..
khushal: lekhen jeeja...manasvi humare parivaar ko join kare..phir yeh acha hoga..
mansen: nahin khushal..kyunki main jaanta hoo ki manasvi siddarth ka parivaar ka khaas hisa hai..voh uski bahu aur beti hai...tho agar suraj uski pyar mein nahin aaya..phir yeh possible hai...
khushal: aur aap kehna chahti hai..ki agar suraj aur manasvi ek hogaye phir suraj kabhi bhi humare parivaar wapis nahin aa sakta...
mansen: bilqul sahee...jab voh wapis aayega..phir aapna shatranj ka game shoro karte hai..(grins)

(back in shimla, manasvi wakes up and turns around and sees suraj's side empty..she gets up and sees suraj already dressed)

manasvi: tum itne jaldi uth gaye?
suraj: haan..bas aise..
manasvi(sees suraj is finding sumthing): kya hua..what r u finding?
suraj: erm..mere watch kahiin nahin hai..tumne dekhe..?
manasvi: erm..nahin tho..
(sees the watch on the bed)
manasvi: voh raha...
suraj(putting on his watch): ok..thanx..4 that...
manasvi: suraj..aaj hum kya karenge..?
suraj: erm..bas bahar jaayenge..enjoy karenge..kyun?
manasvi: erm..bas aise....
suraj: ok...get ready..phir chalti hai..
manasvi: erm..suraj..yeh tumhe kya hua?
suraj: kya hua?
manasvi(points 2 his neck): yahan..
(suraj luks in the mirror..and sees manasvi's lipstick print on his neck..and cleans it off)
suraj: next time..hum dono ke beech aisa kuch hoga..phir lipstick maath lagaya karo...(smiles)
manasvi(smiles): ok..nahin lagaonge...

Precap: Suraj~Manasvi return back from their honeymoon, meanwhile Mansen is shocked to hear of Suraj~Manasvi's unitation. Then, Arjun gets shocking news from the doctor about Bhoomi's pregnancy pains.

Howz dat, ppl?

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Enjoy! Tongue

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haila !!yaar what a gr8 episode....yaar both of them were gr8.....i luved it alot.......u really rock sweetiee...........
keep up da good work.... Clap

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nice episode Smile

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gud gud....im def enjoyin... Clap

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