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Saarrthi 4 Suraj~Manasvi & Arjun~Bhoomi!! (Page 16)

Shirley IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 18 April 2006 at 9:01am | IP Logged
hey fafi..zaroor i will add more romance....ok..updating episode 25 Big smile Wink
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Posted: 18 April 2006 at 9:23am | IP Logged
Episode 25

(Arjun~Bhoomi come back..and enter heritage house)

arjun: bhaiyya..bhabhi..we r home...
manasvi(coming down): arjun..aagaye ho tum?
suraj: arre..arjun..kaisa tha tumhara holiday...?
arjun: fantastic bhaiyya...
manasvi: aur bhoomi..kaise ho?
bhoomi: oh...theek ho...bas kabhi bhi dard bhi hota hai..(sits down carefully)
suraj: tho...arjun..itne jaldi kyun?
arjun: oh..bas aise..lekhen...voh kya hai..bhavri ka check-ups bhi karne hai..aur yeh aam sab yeh...
suraj: dont worry...main hoon na...business ko main handle karoge..tum sirf bhoomi ko handle karo...
bhoomi; erm bhabhi..baaqi sab kaha hai?
manasvi: erm...aate honge...
(the rest come as well)

shefali: bhoomi...aagaye ho tum..kaisa raha tumhara trip?
bhoomi: theek tha...aur aap?
shefali: main bhi theek hoo...aur kisi bhi tarha dard tho nahin hua...
bhoomi: hmm..kabhi kabhi...
baisa: bhoomi...tum rest karo...jao upar..
bhoomi: theek hai..(tries 2 get up..arjun goes and helps her)
arjun(holding her): carefully..chalo...
bhoomi: thanx arjun...lekhen iski kya zaroorat thi..?
arjun: zaroorat hai...
(both reach their room...arjun helps bhooi lay down on the bed...)
arjun: abh tum arram karo..theek hai?
bhoomi: theek hai..(arjun is about 2 go): arjun..mujhe chor kar kaha jaa rahe hoo?
arjun: kahiin bhi nahin..main tho door lock karne ke liye jaa raha tha...
bhoomi: lekhen..lock kyun..?
arjun: kyunki..main tumhare saath koi waqt spend karna chahta hoo...aur yeh chahta hoo..ki koi hume disturb na kare...
bhoomi; arjun...pehletum koi rest tho karo..itne lambi safar se wapis aaye hai..
arjun: bhavri..tumhare paas ho kar...yeh mere liye kafi hai...(goes close 2 her...and hugs her tightly..bhoomi hugs him too)
arjun(holding her even more tighter): main tumhare beegair jee nahin sakta...aur....and i just luv u..like crazy...
bhoomi(holding him tight): and i luv u too...tumse main door nahin rehe sakte...tum mujhe kabhi bhi nahin chorna...(suddenly moves away...as she gets stomach pains)
bhoomi(feeling pain): argh!!
arjun(worried): kya hua..bhavri..? tum theek tho hoo?
bhoomi: arjun...pata nahin yeh dard kyun hota hai...(holding her stomach)...seriously..buhut dard hota hai...
arjun(consoling her): hey...bhavri..main hoon na...sab kuch theek ho jayega...aisa karte hai..ki kal doctor ki paas jaate hai...ok?
bhoomi; ok..
arjun: tum rest karo...shayad uski wajah se dard ho raha hai..
bhoomi: i feel better...
arjun: gud..acha..main abhi aaya...10 minutes ok?
bhoomi: ok...(arjun leaves)
bhoomi: pata nahin..yeh larka ya phir larki...agar larka hoga..phir main iska naam prem rakhonge...kyunki yeh mere aur arjun ki pyar ki nishani hai..agar larki hui..phir sneha...(smiles)

(mansen and khushal)

khushal: jeeja..bh arjun aur bhoomika ghar wapis aagaye...abh kaunsa plan karna hai..?
mansen: sabar karo khushal..kehte hai..sabar ka phal hamesha meeta hota hai..
khushal; jeeja..bhoomika iss waqt aapneroom mein hai..aur akele bhi..
mansen: aur usse whan rehne do..jab voh bahar aayege...aur stairs se neeche aa rahe hoge..phir usse thaka..marenege....phir voh slip karege...phir miscarriage hoga...phir kaam khatam hoga..
khushal: jeeja...kaam samalki karna...
mansen: samalki karonge...khushal..
khushal; abh tho kaniye bachaye bhoomika ki bachay ko...(grins)

(bhoomika comes out of her room...mansen and khushal notice this..but before bhoomi goes down the stairs...mansen drops some oil on the stairs...bhoomi is unaware of this..)

khushal: shabash jeeja...(grins)
LK: samalki bhoomi...yeh shakuni mamaji tumhare abhimanyu ka sarvanash karna chahti hai...
bhoomi(thinking): arjun kaha rehe gaya..dekh thi hoo...(goes down the stairs, and slips on the oil..but LK saves her..bhoomi grabs her grip on the stairs..and holds her stomach...)

LK: har waqt..main tumhare saath hoo..tmhe ya phir tumhare bachay ko kuch nahin hoga...
(arjun sees bhoomi slipping..)
arjun(running 2 her): bhavri!!!!!! kya hua...tum theek tho hoo...batao..na..
bhoomi(getting up): main theek ho..bas galti se slip hogaye....aur..
arjun: carefully bhoomi...(helping her up)
bhoomi: tum jao..main aate hoo....
arjun: ok..chalo...
bhoomi(thinking): thank u bhagwan..aaj aapke wajah se..mera bacha salamat hai..

Precap: Mansen~Khushal are furious that Bhoomi's child survived. Meanwhile, Arjun suggests that Suraj~Manasvi go on their honeymoon.

Howz dat, ppl?
tunna Goldie
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Posted: 18 April 2006 at 10:21am | IP Logged
wow... wow.. wow.. wow... wow... wow...
Clap
great episode hunny.... both of them... lovely as uaual...    good that kakasaheb's plan failed...
n i waiting for s-m's honeymoon.... i know it'll b lovely Wink
sadDe Goldie
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Posted: 18 April 2006 at 1:19pm | IP Logged
gud gud.... Clap Clap Clap great goin....mansen n tht mama ke toh saray plans shud fail..even in real saarrthi.. Angry Angry great job shirley.. LOL LOL
fafi IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 18 April 2006 at 3:06pm | IP Logged
hey thanx 4 that small but sweet romance shirley Wink .
A gr8 part Clap .
waiting for the next one. Specially for suraj manasvi Embarrassed
diya7000 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 19 April 2006 at 8:01am | IP Logged
Very romantic part indeed.
Mastang Senior Member
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Posted: 19 April 2006 at 11:47am | IP Logged
hey nice part shir...... Clap
i luved it...the romance ...the plans failing.....its too good.....kash kakasaheb k plans real serial main bhi fail ho jayen...to maza aa ajaye....ab to bas s~m k honeymoon par jaaane ka wait hai.... LOL ....the episode should be rocking ....ok..... Wink ..
cant wiat 4 da next one......
Shirley IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 20 April 2006 at 11:58am | IP Logged
ok..ppl..updating episode 26 Big smile

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