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Saarrthi 4 Suraj~Manasvi & Arjun~Bhoomi!! (Page 15)

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that was a good episode

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Kya kahun mein just stunned ho gayi hun what a episode I wonder kaise tum itna bada episode likh leti ho?
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lovely yaar........ Clap
reading after soooooooooo long....   but its amazing as usual.....   nothing cud b beter... u really rock girl Thumbs Up Thumbs Up        update soon Wink
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hey tuhina..welcum back Hug..ok..updating episode 24 Big smile
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Episode 24

(The next morning starts off wid the family doing the aarti...maansvi does the aarti in bhoomi's absence)

shaku: manasvi....bhoomi ghar phar nahin hai..iss liye..aarti tum karo..
manasvi(taking the tray): theek hai ma-ji....
(does the aarti..and is giving the prasad 2 everyone)
manasvi(2 khushi): yeh lo..beta...
khushi: mummy...yeh kya hai..?
manasvi: prasad hai..bhagwan ka prasad....
khushi: ok..
manasvi(2 yuvraj): yuvraj..prasad?
yuvraj: mujhe bhagwan ki prasad ki zaroorat nahin hai...
manasvi: yuvraj...iss prasad ki saath bhagwan tumhe arshiwaad bhi deenge....iss liye..take it...
yuvraj: no...(leaves)
baisa: mansen....tumhe aapne bachay phar control karna chahe...
mansen: baisa...voh..
khushal(interrupts): baisa...aap fikhar na karo...yuvraj tho bacha hai...sudhar jayega...
baisa: sudharni ki koshish phir karo...(leaves)

(upstairs..mansen and khushal)

mansen: khushal...iss waqt yuvraj humare concern nahin..bilqi...bhoomika aur arjun ka bacha hai..
khushal: jeeja..aap fikhar na karo...abh tho kaniyea bachae unke bachay ko..(grins)
mansen: khushal..?
khushal: haan jeeja?
mansen: shishupal ko phone karo..aur usse keh do...ki bhoomika ko kisi bhi tarha...push karo...phir uska misscarriage ho...
khushal: fikhar na karo..jeeja..
mansen(interrupts): fikhar...fikhar kaise na karo..khushal..kabh si tum keh rahe ho...ki fikhar na karo...fikhar na karo....phone lagao na...
khushal(freaked out): theek hai..jeeja...laga tha hoo...(dials number on phone)

(shishupal picks up his phone)

shishupal: hello?
khushal: haan shishupal...?
shishupal: ahca..aap...kehe...kaise yaad kiya aapne?
khushal: tum isse waqt shimla jao..aur wahan hoge..bhoomika goenka..usse kisi bhi tarha push karo..
shishupal: kaise..stairs se?
khushal;haan..kisi bhi raaste se
shishupal: lekhen aisa kyun?
khushal: sawal pocho maath..jaisa kehta hoo..waisa karo..
shishupal: batao bhi..varna kaam nahin hoga...
khushal: kyunki..bhoomika pregnant hai..aur uska bacha marna humare liye buhut zaroori hai...
shishupal: tho aap chahti hai..ki main ek unborn bachay ko maar dalo..?
khushal: haan...
shishupal: maaf karna...bhai..lekhen main koi satpal nahin ho..jo kisi maasoom ka jaan letha hai...rakhtha hoo..(hungs up)
khushal: hello...hello..?
mansen: kya hua..khushal?
khushal: phone cut kar diya
mansen; voh humara kaam karega ya nahin/
khushal: nahin..usni inkaar kar diya...
mansen(angry): yeh shishupal bhi na...
khushal: jeeja..main thokehta hoo..ki hum dono jaate hai...
mansen: nahin khushal..jab arjun-bhoomika yahan wapis aayenge..phir kaam karenge...(grins)

(suraj is doing his business work...manasvi joins him)

manasvi: kya kar rahe hoo?
suraj: kaam kar raha ho...aur kya?
manasvi: lekhen suraj...raat ki do baje hai..neend nahin aaye?
suraj: erm..nahin..tum jao..main baad mein aata hoo..
manasvi: lekhen mujhe bhi neend nahin aa rahe hai..socha tha..ki agar tum mind nahin karoge...phir tumhare saath join karo..
suraj: mujhe acha laga..ki tum mere saath..join kiya..(smiles)..acha..khushi so gaye hai..?
manasvi: haan..buhut mushkil se....
suraj: kyun..buhut ziidi ho rahe thi..?
manasvi: haan....keh rahe thi..ki kahani sunao..phir maine sunai thi..
suraj: acha...ok...
maansvi: suraj..kaam baad mein ho sakta hai..chalo..so jao..
suraj: nahin manasvi..main theek ho...tum jao...
manasvi: plz....
suraj: ok..theek hai....chalo...
(suraj gets up..manasvi trips over sumthing and is about 2 fall but suraj catches her in his arms..manasvi holds on tight)
suraj: manasvi..carefully...
manasvi: main tho arram se chal rahe thi..pata nahin kya hogaya..
suraj: chalo..
(both reach their room....manasvi lies on her bed..suraj sits besides her)
suraj: gudnite...(stroking her hair)
manasvi: gudnite...(suddenly,out of control manasvi hugs suraj..suraj surprised by this reaction hugs her too)
manasvi(thinking): main kyun aisa feel kar rahe hoo..? mere dil main suraj ke liye aisa ehsaas kyun...kya mujhe usse ki saath pyar tho nahin hogaya?

Precap: Yuvraj creates another problem for the 4, meanwhile Arjun returns with Bhoomi back to Heritage House.

Howz dat, ppl?
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Posted: 17 April 2006 at 11:03am | IP Logged
gud...finally ur back..Big smile i was waitin fer so long...keep updatin soon..gud goin...n plz dont kill A-B's child..Wink
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Posted: 17 April 2006 at 1:18pm | IP Logged
hey nice part!
plz do add some more ormance masala in it Wink Embarrassed
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Posted: 17 April 2006 at 1:18pm | IP Logged
hey nice part!
plz do add some more romance masala in it Wink Embarrassed

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