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Saarrthi 4 Suraj~Manasvi & Arjun~Bhoomi!! (Page 14)

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yeh thts a kool episode Wink Big smile

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hey nice one. god work Clap
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hey nice one. good work Clap
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gud going..Smile Clap
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ok..thanx guys 4 the remarks..updating episode 23 Big smile
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Episode 23

(Arjun~Bhoomi r in the plane..)

arjun: acha..bhavri..tum yeh fruits kao..
bhoomi: lekhen..arjun..mera maan nahin karta...
arjun: oh come on..bhavri...lao..na..
bhoomi: plz...i'm full up..
arjun: tumhe nahin chahe..tho isse chahe..(points 2 the baby)
bhoomi: erm....
arjun: come..on...have it...
bhoomi: ok..(takes the fruits)..vaise hum kaha jaa rahe hai..?
arjun: bhavri..surprise hai..tumhe abhi nahin bata sakta..
bhoomi: kyun..?
arjun: agar maine bata diya..phir yeh surprise nahin rehega....haina?
bhoomi: haan..voh tho hai..lekhen phir bhi batao na..
arjun: hm..kisi romantic place mein..
bhoomi: voh tho mujhe bhi pata hai...lekhen kaha...?
arjun: thori dhir ke liye intazaar karo...
bhoomi(thinking): uff...intazaar...hamesha main tho intazaar karte rahe hoo...neva mind..i luv surprises(smiles)

(the plane lands..and arjun-bhoomi come out)

bhoomi: yeh kaha aaye hum..?
arjun: welcum..bhavri..2 Shimla....
bhoomi: shimla?
arjun: hmm..nice..sweet..romantic...shimla...
bhoomi: mujhe laga tha..ki tum mujhe kahiin switzerland lekhar chalo ge...lekhen...this is way better..hehe
arjun: tumhe yeh destination pasand aaya...?
bhoomi: haan..lekhen yeh mere destination nahin hai...
arjun: agar yeh nahin hai..tho kaunse destination hai tumhare?
bhoomi: mere destination..mere manzil tum hoo..arjun..
arjun(blushes): really..main?
bhoomi: hmm...abh yeh bags uthao...aur chalo....
arjun: ok..madam...

(both arjun-bhoomi grab a taxi..and go 2 a nearby hotel)

arjun: erm..yeah..mr. and mrs. arjun goenka...
reception: erm..ok....here r yur room keys..and enjoy yur stay here...
arjun: thank u...
reception: u r welcum...
(arjun-bhoomi go in the lift...)

bhoomi: acha arjun..pehle hum kya karenge?
arjun(singing): hum tum ek kamri mein baand hoo..aur lights baand ho jaye....
bhoomi(blushes): stop it...arjun..plz..
arjun: kyun..kya hua?
bhoomi: kuch nahin..(lift door opens)..dekho humara floor agaya...
arjun: chalo...

(arjun opens the room wid the keys..and luk inside...)

bhoomi: wow...kitna beautiful kamra haina..arjun?
arjun: haan...buhut romantic hai...
bhoomi(luking in the shower): wow...nice shower....hehe..
arjun: acha..bhavri....erm...kya kare?
bhoomi: pehle main unpack karoge...
arjun: no..no....tum rest karo...unpack main karta hoo...
bhoomi: lekhen arjun...
arjun: main kcuh nahin suna chahta...tum arram karo...(helps her on the bed)
bhoomi: arjun...kaam se kaam main chal tho sakte hoo..lekhen aise useless hona...
arjun: bhavri..mere baat ko mind maath karo...lekhen...humare kahiin dushman hai..aur mujhse badla leene ke liye..agar yeh dushman ni tumhe ya phir humare bachay ko kuch kiya..phir main aapni aap ko kabhi maaf nahin karoge..
bhoomi: arjun...aisa kuch nahin hoga..aur humare dushman hai nahin hai..
arjun(interrupts): hai..humare kahiin dushman..hai...
bhoomi: matlaab?
arjun: matlaab...kakasaheb aur mamaji...aur yuvraj..aur..unka parivaar...
bhoomi: arjun..kaam se kaam...yahan aaye hai..phir bhool jao.inn baato ko...main yahan aaye ho..tho iss liye..thaki main tumhare saath koi waqt spend karo...
arjun: i no..vaise raat hone wali hai..dinner order karo..?
bhoomi: haan..ok
arjun: jab thak dinner nahin aata...main unpack karta hoo...ok?
bhoomi: ok...(thinking):aaj jo mujhe chahe tha..voh mujhe mil gaya...arjun..aapna bacha...

(back in the heritage house..suraj is doing his office work)

shaku: beta...?
suraj: jee ma...?
shaku: kaam kar rahe hoo...?
suraj: erm..haa lekhen aapko mere saath koi kaam ho tho...kehaye...
shaku: erm..beta..bade dadaji tumhe bula rahe thi...
suraj: sab kuch theek tho hai../
shaku: haan..tum aao..
suraj: ok..

(everyone is present in the heritage house)

suraj: jee..apne mujhe bulaya...?
bade dadaji: haan...humne socha hai..ki arjun aur bhoomika ki aane ki baad..hum iss ghar mein party raki..
manasvi: yeh tho buhut achi idea hai..bade dadaji..
bade dadaji: aur ek baat aur..kyunki arjun aur bhoomika yahan nahin hai..iss liye...suraj..tumhe business ko samhalna parega...
suraj: jee...aap fikhar maat kare...
yuvraj: lekhen..bade dadaji...property ki 4 caretakers hai...do caretakers tho holiday phar chale gaye...tho phir unke places mujhe ya shefali ko nahin..
baisa: bade dadaji..jo pehle faisla liya tha..voh faisla final rehega..
(yuv is furious)

Precap: Mansen plans to send someone to ruin Arjun-Bhoomi's holiday, meanwhile Manasvi feels attracted to Suraj.

Howz dat, ppl?
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dis is da 1ts time i've read ur fan-fic & i think its 1daful .keep it up!!!! Clap Clap Clap
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as usual..gud goin... Clap Clap Clap some one plz kill mansen n mamajee.. LOL   LOL LOL LOL

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